~GUROOR~maaneet SS pt11 last pt pg69/76 apr24

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#411

thoda emotional part tha😔

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#412

both r out of reality...

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Shruthe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#413

That update was fab...

Maan going crazy with all the happenings... amidst that i really am glad that dev did point out to maan.. the only member of maan's family who seems to be sensible...

and the reaction of Geet on seeing Maan.. that was so heart wrenching.. she loves him so much and feels so guilty about getting addicted to drugs.. she knows he loves her deeply and doesnt want to hurt him or make him feel bad by making him know the truth..

I just donno whom to feel bad for... Geet or her parents or Maan... though i was so irritated with Maan's ignorance, i do feel pity for him especially after reading the last lines of the update..

"She knows deep down how much Maan loves her.

If she missed him, of course he missed her too.

He too suffered as much she did. He didn't have the excuse of loneliness.

Damn it! He didn't have time even to breath."

she is lost and he is completely clueless about the whole thing...

cant wait for next..

Edited by Shruthe - 11 years ago

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krsh07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#414

read the update from part 9 all are fabulous

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anyaa

@16anyaa.gurti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#415

itnaaa confusion... Its getting too complicated..

don't know whom to hate, though according to ur explainations maan seem innocent in his own way.

but watever it may be cant help hating him and blaming him for all these happenings.

Feel too bad for Geet. Waiting eagerly for maan's reaction on geet's situation.

Abhi se waiting for next :p

plzz update sooonnn

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tamannA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#416

poor geet in hospital maan still no lue

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#417

she still thinks about him and he wat did he say wat did the handa's do.. how could be so blind.. cant he even understand just seeing the sight...
and she is just wanting to be presentable for him knowing tat he wont like to see her like tat..

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#418

Do you know when you send it to me for editing, I can't.

Poora padh leti hu, then moan and groan about their pain, phir kuch kaam kar sakti hu.

The intensity and pain is something that is always in your Geet.

It is the pain of giving and not getting back.

Even now, she is her Maan Deewani.

He is actually so torn and hurt inside that even though others may hate him, I can't. It is a male thing for him, to be the one to give her his best. In all of the giving of the best, he just forgot to give of himself. Dev opened his eyes about it.

I am afraid she is going to keep repeating the cycle unless she gets help.

Lovely intense part.

Loved it.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: -Mitu-

Jii tu rahe the vo ek dusre ke liye hai hii..
Bas raasto nai dhoka de diya..
Ishq nai kab kiskio abaad kiya hai...
Jab bhi kiya hai bas barbbad kiya hai !!!!

Very nice lines👏