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pingu-tingu

@pingu-tingu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

painfully awesome update loved it ...maan deserves every bit of this pain of separation ...i think dev have a slight idea about geet's secret ...n i think so he is the one who really care about her in the whole family ... i can understand Mr handa 's pain and maan should also stay away from his baby and suffer the same pain he had made GEET's father go through by separating him from her daughter...waiting for next eagerly .

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Micky

@micky11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

welcome back Muskan

came across your new ss

this is awesome

power and pride had led Maan to that point where he is ignorant about Geets condition

she was not accepted by family and so even after 5 years still the situation is same

luckily drugs have consoled her but that is not solution and moreover now she is pregnant and it will become worse for her

still she loves Maan and is suffering all for him

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Guroor hai kitna usse apni Mohabbat par..

Jhalla woh thaira andha Anpad;

Gul-e-Mohabbat woh hi jo Suraj ki Tapish main khil jaaye...

Zaat-e-Mohabbat woh hi jo Suroor main Guroor ko fanaa kar jaaye.

Zindagi ki raah main uski baghbaein gulshan bechaaya

woh toh Jhalli thairi akeli tanhaa;

Chubtey hue Intezar main uske

kya suna hai kissi ne ke chubtey bhi hain makhmal-i- kaante?

Dikhayi diye na kabhi kissi ko uske gham

Ab kehta hai Woh ke humesha se they bas sirf tum aur hum.

Apnoun se parayi hui woh,

tere suroor main deewani thi woh,

Shouhrat ki aagaz main woh pali-badi hui

Shohoor na tha tujhe ke bas usko bebasi aur tanhayi ki khalish thi.

Tu ne usko apni Shaan samjha..

aur

Usne tujhko apna Maan samjha

Tu ne daulat ki bas beejh boye

aur

Usne apni khoyi Mohabbat ke Geet roye...

Guroor hai kitna usse apni Mohabbat par..

Muskaan... This is what I felt after reading these 10 chapters..Its the death of love ...Pride killed it all... I just hope to see the revival of their lost love through the same Pride.. but it should be Pride for his Love!! not on his love!!

I hope you understood what I wrote above, I may have used words of 'fasi urdu' ...I just wrote whatever came in the flow of typing! and didn't want to polish them...it would be easier for you to understand me

Beautiful concept Muski.. you always show a new side of Love and its Saga👏

Waiting for the next..hoping for the best..😳

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

omggg i think i jinks it 😭😭😭😭
no update so far today

I am taking my words back 😆😆😆 about loving it😉😉

waiting for next part

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Pinky Bedi

@pinkybedi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

😊

Nice n welcom back...hows ur hand now..

Beautiful story

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jassi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Just finish reading ur whole parts love it

You are back with bang love it

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

maan deserve this treatment 😡

geet sign divorse papers

but where is she

awesome update di 😛

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#398

waiting eagerly.. kab milega next update

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: DreamyPrincess1
waiting di!!!

Aapne iska banner nahi banaya 😛

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saro

@saro

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Posted: 11 years ago

#400

Painful update... But the updates were super... Will b waiting fr Ur nxt update...

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