~GUROOR~maaneet SS pt11 last pt pg69/76 apr24 - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago
painfully awesome update loved it ...maan deserves every bit of this pain of separation ...i think dev have a slight idea about geet's secret ...n i think so he is the one who really care about her in the whole family ... i can understand Mr handa 's pain and maan should also stay away from his baby and suffer the same pain he had made GEET's father go through by separating him from her daughter...waiting for next eagerly .
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Posted: 11 years ago
welcome back Muskan
came across your new ss
this is awesome
power and pride had led Maan to that point where he is ignorant about Geets condition
she was not accepted by family and so even after 5 years still the situation is same
luckily drugs have consoled her but that is not solution and moreover now she is pregnant and it will become worse for her
still she loves Maan and is suffering all for him
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Posted: 11 years ago

Guroor hai kitna usse apni Mohabbat par..
Jhalla woh thaira andha Anpad;

Gul-e-Mohabbat woh hi jo Suraj ki Tapish main khil jaaye...
Zaat-e-Mohabbat woh hi jo Suroor main Guroor ko fanaa kar jaaye.

Zindagi ki raah main uski baghbaein gulshan bechaaya
woh toh Jhalli thairi akeli tanhaa;

Chubtey hue Intezar main uske
kya suna hai kissi ne ke chubtey bhi hain makhmal-i- kaante?

Dikhayi diye na kabhi kissi ko uske gham
Ab kehta hai Woh ke humesha se they bas sirf tum aur hum.

Apnoun se parayi hui woh,
tere suroor main deewani thi woh,
Shouhrat ki aagaz main woh pali-badi hui
Shohoor na tha tujhe ke bas usko bebasi aur tanhayi ki khalish thi.

Tu ne usko apni Shaan samjha..
aur
Usne tujhko apna Maan samjha

Tu ne daulat ki bas beejh boye
aur
Usne apni khoyi Mohabbat ke Geet roye...

Guroor hai kitna usse apni Mohabbat par..

Muskaan... This is what I felt after reading these 10 chapters..Its the death of love ...Pride killed it all... I just hope to see the revival of their lost love through the same Pride.. but it should be Pride for his Love!! not on his love!!

I hope you understood what I wrote above, I may have used words of 'fasi urdu' ...I just wrote whatever came in the flow of typing! and didn't want to polish them...it would be easier for you to understand me

Beautiful concept Muski.. you always show a new side of Love and its Saga👏
Waiting for the next..hoping for the best..😳




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Posted: 11 years ago
omggg i think i jinks it 😭😭😭😭
no update so far today

I am taking my words back 😆😆😆 about loving it😉😉


waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
😊
Nice n welcom back...hows ur hand now..
Beautiful story

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Posted: 11 years ago
Just finish reading ur whole parts love it

You are back with bang love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan deserve this treatment 😡
geet sign divorse papers
but where is she
awesome update di 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting eagerly.. kab milega next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aapne iska banner nahi banaya 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Painful update... But the updates were super... Will b waiting fr Ur nxt update...

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