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Posted: 11 years ago
CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG
HE MADE LOVE TO HIS WIFE FOR THE FIRST TIME IN 6 YEARS
IS HE A MAN OR A DUH

POOR GEET
SHE LEFT EVERYTHING FOR HIM AND HE ABANDONED HER FOR HIS SUCCESS
SHE DOESNT WANT THE EXPENSIVE, CLOTHES, JEWELS, HIGH LIFE
SHE ONLY WANTS HIM
AND HE WAS NOT ABLE TO GIVE HIMSELF
THE LONLINESS DROVE HER TO BE AN ADDICT

MAAN IT IS STILL NOT TOO LATE
LEAVE EVERYTHING AND JUST BE WITH HER OTHERWISE YOU WILL LOSE YOUR GEET
THEN WHAT WILL YOU DO WITH YOUR MONEY, SUCCESS AND YOUR MOTHER

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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 8

She had a quick shower & changed into her night dress.

She applied plenty of make up to hide her sucked in cheeks, the horrible dark patches around her eyes.
Geet worriedly came out looking for Maan - Maan, we didn't use any protection
Maan pulled her in his arms - I didn't want to
He was already excited & wanted her all over again. He had no clue how he was staying away from her all these years.

She looked everywhere but him
He slowly pulled her chin up - don't you want?
She knew exactly what he meant.
She snapped irritated. She didn't want to ruin this perfect night but she was not ready. No way can she a have baby with so much drugs in her system.

She panicked. One of the side effects of the drug is the drastic reactions & anxiety.

Damn it she can't even spend a day without her pills.

She was a damn sick addict.

She was far from becoming anything, forget a family.
Geet - no no no
Maan softly caressed her cheek
She pulled away irritated - no Maan no. She changed the spread that was stained & lay down
Maan wanted to give her time. He just hugged her closer.

For him her happiness meant the world. He wanted to give her everything she ever wanted & more.

Her comfort, her smile, his world revolved around her.

From every success he only bought something for her. Even his business was on her name.

He won't be wrong in saying she led the path to his fortune. He worked hard & earned all this only to give her all she deserved.

His day started seeing her cuddled up like a ball inside the spread & ended when he walked in late night still on call sometimes; but his eyes never missed to cherish her. How many times he just wanted to wake her up & make love to her, like now. He slowly caressed her forehead.

A lone tear escaped his eyes; he didn't meant the wait to be so long. How he wished he could just be with her in her arms. It felt so perfect & just then he saw his phone buzzing again with messages. He cursed under his breath & checked the mails. It didn't take him longer to immerse into them completely.

It was just an amazing moment they shared that night but it was just that night. Maan wanted to desperately spend time with her; even promised her holidays. He couldn't get time off. All this made Geet a very week person.

Maan couldn't stop himself from dreaming to rush into her arms every day. He tried so much to finish his work early, wind up things faster. He even tried his best to at least make a call to her. Only then he began to realize there have been days when he has not spoken a word to her. It felt like burden to his soul; just the thought of it feared him to death.

Geet was a person full of life. She belonged to a huge family, lots of friends & relatives. They used to spend festivals & birthdays with lots of fun. There was never any tension or anything that kept them all from coming together & celebrate. Of course her Dad was a busy business man but family came first for him. Her Dad made it a point to be around for at least 3 or 5 meals together in a week.

There were differences among family members but nothing was so bad that it could hurt the cordial environment during celebrations. As time passed Geet felt really left out. Now in this Mansion she felt pathetic.
It was just one of the parties where one of her friend offered her. Initially it was just fun. Then it began to feel nice. She enjoyed it. She didn't know how the time just flew. The waiting that felt never ending seemed cool & now she was an addict. She did try her best to get out of it. But situation pushes her right back into it.
thanks a lot for the likes & comments
THANKS AVI SWEETY FOR EDITING
love
muskan
NEXT PART 9
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan just thinks tht this luxury comfort and money and expensive gifts r wht she deserves but the most valuable thing luv where is tht soo many years he was away from her its not a simple thing 4 a wife who left her everything 2 be with him and he left her 2 give her all tht do these things matter in front of luv
4 geet i think its her punishment 4 not obeying her parents we can never be happy when we disobey them
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Posted: 11 years ago
wat a fate she has got...

when she got a part of maan's love she fears his closeness and even after maan's realization he yet does not try to mend his ways.. leaving her again to suck in her lonely life where he partner is tat drug tat keeps her away from all this...

something looks every awful as geet is only going away from him and maan thinks tat his success will bring her happiness... its too late for him to even think tat she is not the same geet anymore..

by the way you did not clear the model part Muskaan.. was just curious to know tat was Maan involved or was it just some random stuff.. as for a moment maan was bit shocked to know how would geet react...
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Posted: 11 years ago
No amount of maan's love can cure her suffering she is dieing every min but no one able to understand her pain. I wish she leaves Maan. Their separation much much needed.

Can't wait for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet in absence of maan got drug addict now maan worried really want some sepration
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Posted: 11 years ago

its painful,but truth,many of our life is like this i think

i dont know to say, but its speechless storyline and a truth too
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Posted: 11 years ago
All this years maan had no time for her. He didn't even realise that she was drifting apart from him drowning into something from which even she won't be able to help herself out forget him helping her out
one day he will have all the time and lifetime for her but my gut says she won't be there
maan is gonna regret each success each achievement cause that is what has taken him far away from her maybe out of his reach
geet is an addict now and now it has stated having its side effects too
I wonder how can he not realise her lost weight when adi can
and he announces to have done everything for her
can't wait to know till he comes to know about her drug addiction and her condition beneath her makeup and facade that she puts up in front of everyone
he will want someone to take all his success and luxury and return him the geet he fell in love with but there will be no exchange offer available to him
he will curse himslef to have lost her to this extent
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yaar maan ko kab pata chalega that she is on drug yaar...

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