MG SS: BLACK COAT BARRISTERS - CHAPTER 11 - UPDATED PG 62 - 28TH MAY - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update..😊
You know i basically kept on checking actuali stalking everyday to see whether u hv updates or not!!😆
Good to see Maan's pov..😳
But jst a request dnt make it sappy like ol others..as maan and his ever increasing libido..n geet's naiveity...😕
I am totally bowled with ur creativity..🥺
Rock on!!..
And KEEP IT UP!!👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutizlyf

Great update..😊

You know i basically kept on checking actuali stalking everyday to see whether u hv updates or not!!😆
Good to see Maan's pov..😳
But jst a request dnt make it sappy like ol others..as maan and his ever increasing libido..n geet's naiveity...😕
I am totally bowled with ur creativity..🥺
Rock on!!..
And KEEP IT UP!!👍🏼


Thanks for your suggestion. 👍🏼 I myself don't prefer over graphical *wink* *wink*.😳 Geet is way brilliant yet innocent,😛 funny but not stupid in this fiction😉. I feel so happy when I get a comments like this. 😳 It's really hard to type an creative update; I have to keep in mind that it shouldn't sound lame.. Thanks again, Keep reading..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Purplesky.

Res
will edit after reading..


Will check later then 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _lehar_

awesome update
loved it
maan feeling jealous when some boys trying to talk with his mysty girl
we came to know that maan also has feelings for her
maan saved geet from that local people in the process he got hurt on his forehead geet told him that they have to go to hosptial for addresing his injury
eagerly waiting for the next part


Thank you! 😊 Will try to update whenever time permits😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CuteTommy

as usual.. its an amazing update...

maan's hard wall finally broken n his possessiveness has come out...


i was just visualizing the scenes one by one as written n its just awesome...


the scenes n the dialogues n their actions even the cigerettes passed by Dev to Maan , his smirk for their dialogue...



its all just superb... I can say i just watched the epi... n i am re-reading it again n again...




as usual.. its an amazing update...
Thank you😛

maan's hard wall finally broken n his possessiveness has come out...

😆 yeha ...finally he did...phew I had to bribe to do it you know...

i was just visualizing the scenes one by one as written n its just awesome...


the scenes n the dialogues n their actions even the cigerettes passed by Dev to Maan , his smirk for their dialogue...

I am over glad to know that I can write a script for a movie duh...thank you


its all just superb... I can say i just watched the epi... n i am re-reading it again n again...

😊 wow ..thank you. First I visualize and then I type..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

geet ne suni nehi maan ne kya bola...maan claimed her as hs infront of everyone...so bad...geet missed it...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


thank you girl!
I must thank you for reading my story and liking it...will do whever time permits
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

achha budfhhu banaya aapne teaser se...
reallly yr...tht ws such a blow "and he kissed her"...
loved ur sweet surprise..or i bettr say shokk...😉
n good to here maans monolgue...
abb maan geet ka kya punishment dega...?? 😉
n tht boy... 😡 achha hua maan ne usko bht maara...
abb waoting to c our maaneets closeness...
waitinggg...!! 😊



😆 thank you! ,main khudh buddhu bani phir tum logon ko banahi...
Keep reading


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LM1991

Lovely update! Very well written!I was wait ing to know Maan's feelings 4 Geet!


Thank you! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DevilClan

Awesum and lovely story. I luvd the jealous Maan. Its treat to read.


Yeah! mutual feelings 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Due to tight schedules at work, I'm not getting so much of time to update all the stories at once. So I decided to finish up each story, individually one at a time. So let me know which story you all want me to finish up first.

|| ONGOING WORKS ||

SHORT STORIES (SS)

MY LADY BODYGUARD

TE AMO

COACH..! I LOVE YOU

BLACK COAT BARRISTER

A TALE OF BLACK WIDOW

SEDUCING MR. PERFECT - IT ALL STARTED WITH A LIST

Love

Rose

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