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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part..how Maan & Geet going to meet next time..Marriage is done..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww BB kyaa style hei,,,,
agle jhagre per fir milenge,,,,😆😆
chatptee stry lov it,,,,😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ud
maan wants to shut his thought about geet
but no he saw her crying he was getting mad
that who the hell make his geet cry he can't let her cry
after knowing the reason he was like wat
but geet hugged him 4 dilasa but maan in another world of fantasy
but they separated like good friend and decide they wil fight in nxt meeting now maan can't ignore her thought


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Posted: 11 years ago
kya maan apne app per kabu rakho...kabhi kuch kabhi kuch...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
MAAN THOUGHT THAT HE COULD NOW FORGET GEET
BUT GEET TOH USME SAMAH CHUKI HAI AND HE CANT LET HER GO
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
msk's all plans and promises to stay away from geet went into drain the moment he saw her crying 😊 and ge even promised her to meet again with new fight 😆
and finally he realized how much he try he cant forget geet and rather fight with her than staying away 😃 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 6. AND THE PLANNING AND PLOTTING STARTS!

"Yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe? Yeh main kya kar raha hoon? WHY CAN'T I CONCENTRATE?", Maan Singh Khurana roared as he paced to and fro in his cabin at Khurana Constructions. It was two days after the wedding and after staying at home for these two days Maan had come to Office to start working. But unfortunately he was unable to concentrate and hence here he was roaring and pacing all the while showing his anger on some poor hapless employee.

"Yeh theek nahi hai! Uss Geet Handa ne toh meri zindagi hi badalke rakh di! Main soch nahi sakta! Main kaam nahi kar sakta! Geet! Tumne kya jaadu kar diya hai mujh par?" Maan sat down on his chair and closed his eyes. He had to talk to Geet and that too now. Or else he would never be able to concentrate on his work. This was maddening!

Maan pulled out his mobile and called Handa House in Hoshiarpur. He had saved the number in his mobile for future use when before the wedding, his Daadima had called Handa family and had invited them for the wedding. Today he was thankful for his foresight and waited with bated breath as the phone on the other side rang.

"Hello?", a sweet voice spoke and Maan felt his breath hitch. He had not heard this voice for more than two days and only today he realized how much he missed it.

Geet had gone back to Hoshiarpur in the evening of the wedding day and Maan had gone two days without seeing her or hearing her.

"Geet!", Maan's voice held a softness to it.

"Maan!", Geet's voice seemed equally soft.

Maan smiled and tried to imagine her face, her eyes and her smile when Geet spoke up, "Maan? Hello?"

"Haan Geet bolo!", Maan spoke up still lost in his daydream about her.

"Mr. Khurana! Call aapne kiya aur aap mujhe baat karne ko bol rahe hain?"

Maan came out of his daydreaming and looked at the phone. Oh yes! He had called her! But why had he called her? Aha! Yaad aaya!

"Geet! Fight with me!"

"Kya?"

"Main kahaa fight with me!"

"Hey Babaji! Aap theek toh hain?"

"Ab tum in sab ke beech mein Babaji ko mat ghaseeto! Just fight with me so that we can keep the phone down and get back to our daily lives! Mujhe apni shaanti waapas chaahiye aur woh tumse ladkar hi milegi mujhe!"

On the other side of the phone, Geet looked at the phone incredulously. Hey Babaji! Inhein kya hogaya hai? Maine kab inki shaanti bhang ki?

"Par main kyun jhagdun aapse? Mere paas toh jhagadne ki koi wajah nahi hai!"

"Hat waqt jhagadne ke liye wajah nahi chaahiye hoti! Just start the damn fight!"

Geet huffed in anger. Now this man was seriously irritating her. Inka toh kuch karna padega!
"Dekhiye Mr. Khurana! Lagta hai aap paagal hogaye hain! Apne dimaag ka ilaaj karwaayiye aur phir yahaan phone kijiye!"

Geet slammed the phone down in anger and stomped away.

Kya? Phone kaat diya? Maan looked at his mobile in shock. He dialed the number again and when Geet again picked up the phone, he again demanded the same thing. Fight with me! And she cut the phone again. Maan glared at the phone. Mere phone kaatne ki jurrat ki tumne! Meri? Itna aasaani se nahi chodunga tumhein Geet Handa! Itni aasaani se nahi!

Geet rolled her eyes as the phone rang again. Iss Khadus Khurana ki toh! Her eyes narrowed in anger. Badtameez kahin ka! Paagal hogaya hai paagal! "Kiska phone hai Geet puttar?", her Daarji hollered as he neared the hall she was sitting in. She smiled brightly as an idea struck her head. She looked at her Daarji nervously, "Daarji! Dekhiya na! Ek wrong number kab se call kar karke mujhe pareshaan kar raha hai! Aap hi kuch kijiye!"

"Kya?", Daarji roared in anger, "Humaari ghar ki betiyon ko chedta hai? Chadaanga nahi main onnu!" Geet slapped her hands on her mouth as she tried to smother the giggles threatening to come out. Bechaare Khadus Khurana! Ab toh unki band baji!

Maan smiled as someone picked up the phone but before he could say anything he was bombarded with every Punjabi swear words known to mankind. He cringed and flinched at some of them and some of them shocked him so much that he looked at the phone with wide eyes. Just as the old man on the other side took a breather, Maan cut the phone and took a deep breath. What was that? In between the swear words, Maan heard the man scold him for eve teasing ghar ki jawaan betiyaan!

Does that mean what I think it means? Maan wondered and then his eyes widened. Geet set him up! She set him up and he ended up getting scolded. Geet must have lied that someone on phone was harassing her! Oh no! Geet Handa! You don't play dirty with me and get away! I will have my revenge! Mujhse ladne se mana kar rahi thi na! Ab dekho! Main aisa kuch karunga ki tumhein roz mujhse ladna padega!

Maan thought for a while when a plan struck his head. Tum wahaan ho isliye hum dono lad nahi paate, right? But what if I bring you to Dilli, at my house? Phir toh tum mujhse roz ladogi, right?

It was late evening when Maan entered the kitchen of Khurana Mansion. He had come here in search of Naintara who was supposed to plan the dinner for some guests coming over. He leaned on the door as he watched NT order the cook to add more salt in the Daal after tasting it. He wondered how to start the discussion with her; namely how to get information about Geet out of her.

Maan looked around for conversation starters, "Ummm... Khaana bana rahi ho?"

What kind of stupid question was that Maan? Obviously woh khaana bana rahi hai! Kitchen mein khade rehke koi bhajan nahi karta!

NT smiled at him, "Ji Veerji!"

Maan smiled back, "Bahut achchi khushboo aa rahi hai!"

NT's smile went mile wide, "Thank you Veerji! Par aapko Geet ke haathon ka khaana chakhna chaahiye, woh toh isse bhi badhiya banaati hai! Infact, khaana banaana humne usse hi seekha hai!"

Maan's eyes brightened up. Thank you NT for bringing Geet up!

"Yeh tumhaari behen, Geet, sirf khaana hi pakaati hai ya aur kuch bhi karti hai?"

"Arre! Woh toh college ki topper hai! Padhaai mein number one! Poor girl!"

Maan frowned, "Poor kyun?"

"Veerji! Uski family thodi narrow minded hai! Woh use aage padhne nahi denge! Woh kya haina, ab woh 18 ki hogayi hai toh bas uski shaadi ke baare mein sochenge! Use aage padhne nahi denge! She has to get out of Hoshiarpur if she wants to stand on her own feet! Bechaari! Dekhiye na Veerji! Ek ladki hai jo padhna chaahti aur ek uski family hai jo use padhne dena nahi chaahte! Mom Dad ne bahut baat karne ki koshish ki taaki Geet Dilli aake padh sake but this family I tell you!"

Maan looked pensive for a while but then he smirked. Aa gaya perfect idea Geet Handa ko iss ghar mein laane ka!

He looked at NT, "Tum Daadima se kyun nahi baat karti iss baare mein?"

"Daadima?"

"Haan! Daadima is all for education of girls! She can talk to Geet's family! Upar se tumhaare sasural se hain toh unhein Geet ki family taal bhi nahi sakti!"

NT looked at him with wide eyes, "Aisa ho sakta hai, Veerji? Daadima Geet ko aage padhne mein madat kar sakti hai?"

Maan shrugged, "Why not? Infact, bring Geet to Dilli and let her stay at our house, so that she can get the best education aur apni behen ke saath bhi reh sakegi!"

NT grinned eagerly, "Phir toh hum abhi jaate hain aur Daadima se baat karte hain!"

NT turned to walk outside the room when Maan called after her. She turned around, "Daadima se yeh mat kehna ki yeh mera idea hai!"

NT frowned, "Kyun?"

Kyunki agar Daadima ko pata chala toh do din mein Geet aur mera rishta pakka kardegi and I don't want that! Maan thought but outwardly he replied, "Ummm... Kyunki... Haan Kyunki tum baat karogi toh Daadima tumse impress hogi kyunki tum apni behen ke baare mein itna soch rahi ho! You know what I mean!"

NT nodded and smiled again, "Thank you Veerji! Hum bahut lucky hain ki aap humaare Veerji hain!"

She walked away and Maan smirked. No NT! I am the lucky one kyunki bahut jald Geet mere ghar mein hogi!

After half hour, Maan hid by the stairs and noticed NT and Daadima coming out of Daadima's room and Daadima taking the phone and calling somebody. Maan smirked; Mission accomplished. Geet Handa! I am waiting for you very eagerly! After all, maine waada kiya tha ki main agli baar jab miloonga toh tumse jaroor ladoonga! Toh chalo Miss. Jhagdaalu! Lets fight!

Next update: Maan's plan is successful and Geet arrives at Khurana Mansion!

Buddy me if you want PMs!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. As usual, I read your reviews daily, but they will be liked or liked and replied slowly!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
really mate
was she the one who was stalking you
no naa
it was you who was doing it
and even then he is blaming her
hawww yaar hadh hai besharmi ki
jab dekho tab inhe hi blame karte rehete hain
wait dude till last series where she is gonna make you pay for all this
wow he got it bad dont he
ahhh isnt that just bliss though
him being that desperate to talk to her
who would have thought right
oh ho toh unka ghar ka muumber bhi hai
waah aapki toh nikal padi boss
aww bless he is lost in her voice
wait what why is she being so nice
or guess after what happened she is seeing him differently
stop getting lost dude
she will think you aint there on line
kaise aashiq hain yeh
inka kuch nahin ho sakta
hopeless he is in love
but does he realise it
wait what he gonna tell her why he called
lagta hai satak gayi hai inki
did he just say fight with me
aise namooni harkat karenge toh yeh sochengi he has lost it
which to be sure he has
who says that to someone
but of course he said that
is he kidding me
you dont need any reason to fight
well the reason to fight or not is enough reason right
if you know what i mean
wait she did what he asked her to do
fight and then cute the call
kyaa baat hai
haan ji yeh toh pagal ho hi gaye hain
she is doing what you asked her to
and yet he was mad she cut his phone
koi inke dimaag ka ilaaj karre please
oh teri she didnt
waise kya idea hai
now he is for sure doomed
she is so naughty aint she
dude in a way you are doing that
eve teasing her mate
pagla gaye hain
seriously does he know what he is doing or saying hell no
oh teri he is going full on war mode
nahin khana nahin bana rahi hai
aap ki aankhein kharab ho gayi hain
choti behen se seekha kahan banna kya baat hai
thanx for helping him out
hey now she will come here for sure
he will make sure of it
he is good
but yes best his grandma knows nothing about him
right his grandma will so do this
sahi jaa raho ho
lord save him from her
kappa make the boys suffer a bit please in last series
am sure they will
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part..Maan can't stay away from Geet..Maan's plan work..

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