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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 5. DHOOM DHADAKKA MAAN STYLE! FINAL PART

Maan Singh Khurana was a happy fellow right now. He had planned to not follow Geet and his plan was turning into a success. From the time the Saat Phere ended to now, he did not seek out Geet, he did not stalk her and he did not think of her once. So he was happy. But he was happy due to another reason too. Just right now the Bidaai had ended and soon Geet and Maan would go separate ways. Maan was sure that once that happened, the attraction he felt for Geet would go away and he could go back to his normal lifestyle. Hence, Maan was happy and promised himself that he would make sure that he stayed away from Geet Handa till she went back to her town.

Of course, all promises made by Maan to himself flew right out of the window the moment he saw Geet sitting under a table crying her heart out. Maan felt pain well up in his heart and he subconsciously promised bodily harm to the person who made her cry. Maan sat down beside Geet waiting for her to acknowledge him. After a while, Maan offered her his kerchief which she clutched in her hand but continued to cry out.

Maan's heart clenched at her sobs and he could not stop himself from speaking to her, "Geet! Shaant ho jaao! Rone se kuch nahi hoga!"

Geet glared at him and spoke between his sobs, "Aapko kaise pata hai ki rone se kuch nahi hoga? Kya pata? Mere rone se mera dard thoda kam ho jaaye!"

"Dard?", outwardly Maan frowned but inwardly he was seething. Who dared to give Geet pain? How could they! He would tear them to pieces with his bare hands. He looked at Geet who was sniffling and crying and Maan wondered how could someone look so cute and innocent while crying her heart out?

Geet spoke up bringing Maan out of his thoughts, "Haan! Dard! Mere Didi se alag hone ka dard! Didi ki aaj bidaai hui na? Lekin yeh dard aap ladke waale kya jaane! Yeh dard toh sirf ladki waalon ko pata hota hai!"

Maan rolled his eyes. That's it? That was the reason behind his crying? And here he thought something bad happened to her! He tried to tell her about his sister who he gave away just two months ago but then his mind reminded him about his promise to stay away from her. He instinctively leaned back a bit; chaddo iss kudi nu! You are done with her Maan, remember?

Maan tried to get up when Geet caught his hand. And then Maan Singh Khurana got the shock of his life. Geet, the girl he was attracted to, the girl who he stalked, the girl with whom he loved to fight, lunged forward and hugged him tightly. GEET HUGGED HIM! Maan was stupefied. This was dream come true; Geet in his arms. His breath hitch as he felt her body melding into him and he had to take few deep breaths to calm his heart beat down. He slowly hugged her back and relished the feeling of her in his arms. He closed his eyes and tried to savor the feeling. He tried to memorize each and every breath and move of her while he held her tightly in his arms. After a while, Geet pulled away and wiped her tears with the kerchief he gave. Maan was still in shock at what had happened. It took him a while to get back into the real world. Stop fantasizing you idiot! She is crying! Kuch toh sharam kar! This is not the right time to fantasize about how awesome she felt in your... Maan! STOP FANTASIZING!

Maan tried to get up again wanting to get away from her before he crossed his limits like hug her again or worse; kiss her.

But Geet stopped him again with her hand and smiled at him, "Thank you!"

Maan frowned.

Geet continued, "Main aapke saath subah se lad rahi hoon aur aap hain ki mujhe dilaasa dene pahunch gaye! Thank you!"

Maan's heart melted at her words and he smiled back.

"Koi baat nahi! After all kuch der ke liye hum log jhagde ko side mein rakh sakte hain, right?" Maan said unable to resist from teasing her.

Geet giggled and Maan felt as if her giggles sounded like the tinkling of bells.

"Lekin sirf aaj ke liye truce! Next time phir se ladenge!", Geet spoke.

Maan was surprised at her friendliness and teasing tone and let out a laugh.

He nodded, "Good idea!"

Maan walked out of the hiding space and walked a few paces. He did not know what made him turn and say the next words but he did say it.

"Miss. Jhagdaalu!", he called her and she looked up.

"Next jhagde pe milenge!", he told her and was rewarded with a bright smile from her.

Maan walked away with a smile on his face, his heart beating in happiness and his whole body abuzz with feelings of more than attraction towards Geet. And he knew! He knew that he could not get Geet out of his system! Whatever method he would use to remove her out of his mind and heart, she would not go! Geet had become a part and parcel of him and his life! And surprisingly he did not mind it! He may not know what he was feeling for Geet right now, but he knew one thing; it would be a fun journey, discovering what was between him and Geet! After all, if nothing then atleast this journey would provide him a chance to fight with Geet daily, right?nfact, he was ready to fight with her daily all his life.

Hello my readers,

If you seriously think this story ends here, then you are definitely wrong!

Stay tuned for the next chapter where the aftermath of Dhoom Dhadakka will be shown!

See you with an update in few days!

Buddy me if you want PMs!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. As usual, I read your reviews daily, but they will be liked or liked and replied slowly!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww that was so cute
did he actually think he could get away from her
dream on dude
well he got that too
that he cant run from her
not really
am glad that he got that
and all because she cried
awww he was like why is she crying
who dared to hurt his geet
that person who is your brother and your family even you indirectly would have had it
he was very very mad at them
well of course he was
no one makes his geet cry and get away with it
when she said why she was crying he was like this is why she is crying
well what else did you expect mate
this is geet we are talking about man
aise hi kuch kehti naa woh
and as if anyone would take panga with geet
not with you there or with her family there too
so they are back to their fight mode for next time
well before that their hug
haiyye kya baat hai
he was so stunned with it
the girl he stalked fought with and wanted to be with hugged him
that hug was like heaven right
of course it was
for them both
they needed it for sure
but mind outta gutter please
not really
that was funny where his thoughts were going
but dude all your running from geet is not gonna happen
not really
not when you realised that there is more to this attraction
so this is it for jab se right
or another one chapter after this
next series surely
ahhh in the end we will know all
shame geet wont know it all
but she will make him suffer for sure
that am very excited about
so this is their new beginning right
he wanted to let geet be and let her cry
but she beat him to it right
hell yes she did by hugging him
awww that was so cute
cheers for pm
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Agle jhagde pe phir milenge. 🤣
wat a way to say bye. 😆

nice update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n marvellous update! beautifully written! Ah Maan's inner feelings well portrayed! Maan resolves to nt go near her bt wen her sees her crying he cannot help it! He comforts her! Maan shocked y she is crying! she hugs him! Maan ecstatic! Maan chides himself n is his thoughts! they declare a truce n will wen hey meet the next tym! Maan cannot het her out of his mind! He does nt realise he loves her! n he does nt mind! he is ready to fight with her daily in his life! wow! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww maan was sooo cuteee
he console geet n the awesum part is geet 🤗him😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
maan ko toh reward mil hi gaya😉
n reallyy!!!!!!!! i just can't belive maan just said tht ki nxt jhagde par milengye😆😆😆😆😆😆
cont. soon
im waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update maan saw geet crying he talk to geet and convincing her she hugged maan finally each other comfotable waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome & very entertaining update...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
cute and lovely update. waiting for their next jagda😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg how could i miss this.. read all 5.. now im finally getting ur ff.. lol.. cont soon.. now lets see where thos dhoom dhadaka leads to and how maan and geet fall in love.. well maan babu was already fully talli over geet.. lol.. cont soon hun with the next chapter..
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan kitna dur jaana chahtha hai wo utna aur khareeb jaane laga hai ab dekho uski aankhon mein aanson dekhkar aagayauske paas.
arey wah different bye bola😆😆😆

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