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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

beautiful part !! maan's longing portrayed well !! ek hafte me shaadi hai... BB2B unwell hai...and he couldnot even meet her...now,when he is in his dream valley... his dream trip felt so lonely...until ...she showed up...!! teaser ne yaade taaza karli...waiting...!!

and sorry for the late comment...little busy thi...!!

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

congrats for the new thread

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: dqno1

There were no names.

That's just how I write stuff, all my stories .. without any names.. he/she parts.😃

phew!! well then a Biiig thanx to me 😃😆 cant imagine this story without maaneet,

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

It was like a Mahaa Thud session I had Ji .. when reading the final showdown between Brij and the rest!!!
What I loved the most was that you didn't make Maan as 'The one-man army' type .. but rather uade sure that they all fight in this together ..and form an army .. almost seemed like Brij vs World!! Even the Gounwaale had their part too... i think I pelted a few stones from here too... Was loving it ..
It's soo endearing to read how love can transform a person so much
! Be it be our Bambi who overcame her fear of heights...or endure the revolting ensnare of the animal Brij!! All for her Love !!
Megha too ..her child like innocence is almost making me emotional every time ...how she jumped in to save her new found family or how Chandan Thakur tore through his docile character and beat the crap out of Brij !!
Loved every lil bit that each of the characters played ...
It was a much awaited high point in the story so I am glad that its turned out like I have loved to imagine: Brij get a gaali and dishum dishum from everyone!!! Hehee

Awww I was missing the brothers and Naina too ... Looking forward for the most awaited turns ... I think mujhe Dil ko thaam kar baithna chahiye...thud-thud Bohot hone waala hai ❤️

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Congrates :)

Muahhh teaser Avi :)

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

teaser
awesome...
sigh their love is so endearing...
cont soon dear...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: dqno1

Teri meri song selection👍🏼
Dreamland already?😆

Teri meri song selection kitni milti haina 😆
Yuppo, already in Maan Dreamland 😆
Maan *thud* ke liye ek song aapki khidmat me paish hai 😆

"Dekha hai jabse tujhko haye main tou hil gai, Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gya" 😆

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat
It was like a Mahaa Thud session I had Ji .. when reading the final showdown between Brij and the rest!!!
What I loved the most was that you didn't make Maan as 'The one-man army' type .. but rather uade sure that they all fight in this together ..and form an army .. almost seemed like Brij vs World!! Even the Gounwaale had their part too... i think I pelted a few stones from here too... Was loving it ..
It's soo endearing to read how love can transform a person so much
! Be it be our Bambi who overcame her fear of heights...or endure the revolting ensnare of the animal Brij!! All for her Love !!
Megha too ..her child like innocence is almost making me emotional every time ...how she jumped in to save her new found family or how Chandan Thakur tore through his docile character and beat the crap out of Brij !!
Loved every lil bit that each of the characters played ...
It was a much awaited high point in the story so I am glad that its turned out like I have loved to imagine: Brij get a gaali and dishum dishum from everyone!!! Hehee

Awww I was missing the brothers and Naina too ... Looking forward for the most awaited turns ... I think mujhe Dil ko thaam kar baithna chahiye...thud-thud Bohot hone waala hai ❤️

Story khatam hone wali hai😆😆

Thanks Mishti. I am so glad you are caught up in time for the ending😃

Fight of good vs evil was there, but I also wanted to show how we need to rise over our fears.

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Chapter 90: Nakhre

Blog update. PLEASE do not share passwords. The whole reason for going through the headache of the blog and password protected updates is to make the silent readers participate in the forum.

The less people that participate, the more writers we lose and the less Maaneet stories we get. Silent readers please stop taking writers for granted. I know for a fact that most writers are so upset with the less comments and likes that most are not going to just finish their story and not write more. That will be a loss for us all.

Links have been sent to those who have commented regularly and on the last chapter.

If you have not got the PM check that you commented on the last chapter first. If not please comment first, then and only then PM me.

So many of newbie and groupbie messages are not going through because your mailbox is full. Please delete some messages before sending me a PM.

NOTE: FOR THOSE STARTING THIS STORY LATE

I do expect a comment at least for every thread or so if not for each chapter. You may PM me if you are not able to post the comment. There are romantic parts further on which are password protected. I will not be giving passwords if I don't find comments from you.

SILENT READERS, please skip this story

A/N: This story has reached more than 500 pages. That is a long novel. Please leave me some of your words and comments here and on the discussion thread. I appreciate it.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3922455/ff-discussion-dqno1s-ff

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Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago