THE LOCKET (21) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago
There is some error in connecting to the blog
I am misssing reading parts 90 and 91
is there any other way
kindly send if there is
i am a regular reader of this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.
Sherni managed to bring back her besharam.
Maan giving THE talk to geet. He he he!!
Geet & her doubts!
Dev & maan can fool anyone but their CID dadi.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

killer pay back

👏👏
I loved how beautifully u got the pay back keeping geet in character
simply loved it
hats off to ur crativity


Thank you😃

Payback was your insistence and Jas

Ab iss bholi ladki se payback kaisse karwa sakti hu? 😆

I think epilogue likhne se pehle bhaag jaane wali hu 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

Buhahhaahhaaa... Besharmi main twist !!! It was Besharmi with Gyaan !! Honestly I'm happy that there are girls like Geet in the world who have no clue of such gyaan... Like moi ! 😆 😳 Khair meri maasomiyat ka kachra IF waasiyoun ne kar daala... I got so much of unwanted gyaan from reading from works here that I didn't know if it was me living under the rock and having no clue or if it was a New world !!
I can only hope for ppl like me there is a Maan-land gyaan ..jahaan sab pardey utt jaatey hai ! Hahaa I can't stop laughing at all the paagalpan u have written Avi ji ...jiska naam mohabbat hai !! Waiting for the next lessons in this gyaan 😳


Geet's jhalliness courtesy of Avi's past😆 I drove my husband crazy😆

Palin (palindrome, writer of some of the best stories on GF) created a new genre for my writing ..
Pas-com passionate comedy. I was missing writing this way in this story. Aaj kasar puri ho gayi 😃

I agree with you about IF.😳

Thanks Mishti😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cool banner
So their mahi dance huh
Very appropriate

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update !! his naughtyness and her jhalliness... perfect combination !! somehow wanted them to wait !! dev and naintara's case is different !! with geet's innocence...chote chote gyan ki boondei are more than enough ...at least till marriage !! love maan for controlling himself...!!
sorry not able to press like...will try later !!
Edited by kavya.sravya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update. Killer combination- his naughtiness and her innocence. 👏It was beautiful and sweet too in a way. How you guys can express all emotions so well is beyond me. Hats off to you.👍🏼
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet doesn't know anything abt husband wife relationship nd maan is explaining every thing so sweetly.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice banner. Lovely update. The part where maan asking about pills and geet's answer was hilarious . The library part also was very nice. Geet is very innocent. Poor maan 😆 😆 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for pm
the update was so good
maan giving lessons to geet was nice as it happens in society when girls do not know much about husband wife relationships
she was a kindergartner in real sense

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