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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Who was with Geet???
Geet came first and last to c her child.
Wat didn't Maan do for rose. Wat does she expect from him.

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Anjali

@Gurlygirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

ok so little girl is maan n geet daughter...
is rosa really maan's wife???
so john knows all and geet was with some other guy not maan...
total confusion... cant even imagine how the story will unfold futher... waiting for the update
update soon

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

interesting updates full of mystery!!!!!

i think the little girl is maaneet's daughter

but ye rosa kaha se aagayi??????

update next part soon!!!!!!!!

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Okayyy so the little girls is Geet & Maan's , that can only have two possibilities 1 . Either Maaneet were in a relation before and somehow he had to marry Rosa

or 2. An affair happened after Maan's marriage that's least likely as I recall Geet did have a thought seeing Maan as neighbor that he made a lot of promises . I don't think Maan is shallow to show her dreams whilst having a wife so the 1st incident is more likely 🤔

Whatever it is its super gripping & all updates are like chota packet bada dhamaka 😆😛
Loved it 👏

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

part 17 - so geet was there just meet her daughter...and rosa was not happy with her entry in their family...

johan already knew all this about geet...she gave a birth to a girl child and they gave away...how painful

then he mentioned some other guy who was with her at the time of her delivery...who could be that...mystery still continues...

pari was shocked to know about geet's daughter...

cont soon

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

waiting...

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

awesome...plz do add me to ur PM list...will b waiting for da nxt update

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Kalam.

@Kalam.

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

"You knew all along."

It wasn't an accusation. Nor a statement. It was a fact, a simple fact which seemed painfully difficult to digest.

He didn't dare to look into her eyes, but he could almost feel the disappointment that rolled off her in waves.

A long silence followed. Then she requested for him to drive her to where she needed to be, and he silently complied.

***

Maan stepped into the room to find Geet sticking a piece of paper to the wall. He looked down at the girl stood beside her, their posture eerily similar.

He cleared his throat and Geet stood back onto her heels, clasping her hands together. The girl ran up to Maan, tugging at his hand.

"Papa, look what she drew! Isn't it wonderful?" Her eyes gleamed in reverence. He glanced at Geet, who forced a smile before looking away.

"Why don't you go and help Mama with the dinner, hm?"

The girl's eyes flickered from Maan to Geet, but she understood and left, her hair bouncing with each skipping step she took. He stepped towards Geet but she moved away, standing beside the window.

"I think I should leave."

"Is that what you really want?"

"It's for the best."

"She adores you."

Geet's fists clenched onto the sides of her shirt. "Why did you bring me here?"

"Did you want to be estranged from her forever?"

"You're not answering my question."

"You're evading mine."

She felt his eyes bore into the back of her head.

"This is too difficult for Rosa. It's unfair."

"Rosa knew this day would come."

"No, she didn't. Because I'd promised her, when I gave my daughter away, that I would never see her again."

"No matter what you said, you are her mother and nothing can change that."

"She looks at me and it breaks my heart," her voice wavered, and she sensed Maan step forward but she stopped him with her hand. "Don't come any closer."

Ignoring her words, he reached out and placed a hand on her shoulder. Geet closed her eyes, a lone tear escaping onto her face.

"Rosa's dying," his voice was barely a whisper. She stiffened, her skin suddenly cold.

"That's why I came to find you. That's why I lured you here. She's dying, and our daughter has to return to whom she belongs."