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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was honestly the most beautiful thing I have ever read. Res for more
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fabulous totally out of words
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow what a story
loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was Beautiful ❤️... I loved Geet's strength & Maan's bond with his parents . His imaginations played a vital role in his realizations .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is verygood ff I read it one go I like it very much keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i m one of the semi silent members in IF lol reading from phone between breaks in class .
it was a lovely story hoping to read more on maaneet
thanks for the awsome story ^^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i guessed it could be arhi story first but i could relate it to maaneet...
beautiful story and wonderfully written...
little differently handled..
loved it
keep writing for us RB
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Subtle- It made me ditch my sleep n laziness to probe into the words n grasp the emotions as subtle as sea tides.
My observations went on change riot with each chapter... the leads were same throughout yet their journey from mere attraction to elegant relation was beauty personified.

Apart from the leads i found the parallel lead(if i can call Sasha one) was something to remember along...

The family and office set up , a bit of characterization did out of place on MG... but i can't stop myself from imagining them in every possible situation !

More then any thing i liked Maan's characterisation... it made me believe how beautiful a person could be. Most characters were confined to their role but it was Maan who took the liberty of salvation ... to find love, to find life. In all vertigo he did find Geet quite clearly :)

Looking forward to more MG story then maneetified :P

Thank you for this beautiful story :)))))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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❤️ so good to see the purple again; missed one of my favorite authors. My prev id's were ucompleteme and had2bu.
I remember reading this on AK
can't wait to reread it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: COLOGY

Subtle- It made me ditch my sleep n laziness to probe into the words n grasp the emotions as subtle as sea tides.

My observations went on change riot with each chapter... the leads were same throughout yet their journey from mere attraction to elegant relation was beauty personified.

Apart from the leads i found the parallel lead(if i can call Sasha one) was something to remember along...

The family and office set up , a bit of characterization did out of place on MG... but i can't stop myself from imagining them in every possible situation !

More then any thing i liked Maan's characterisation... it made me believe how beautiful a person could be. Most characters were confined to their role but it was Maan who took the liberty of salvation ... to find love, to find life. In all vertigo he did find Geet quite clearly :)

Looking forward to more MG story then maneetified :P

Thank you for this beautiful story :)))))



it wasn't written for this couple so you may feel a bit odd and out of place. Then again let's just call it as AU :-) office set up should technically work for the two.

don't think I will republish anything old. bit in do have some origin unfinished work that again hm planning to complete. check out serendipity thread and vote :D

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