Wired Hearts (4) Ch:34, Thread:5 (June 26)

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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: Susegad

Eeekss!!! Lookie lookie who's here.

Aap aaye toh bahar aayi.

🤗

Hi Doc. Kaisi ho jaanemaan.😃

Nishaji ... 🤗

Mein bahut mazze mein hu... Relaxing and enjoying freedom. How are you??

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: Onir
Nishaji ... 🤗

Mein bahut mazze mein hu... Relaxing and enjoying freedom. How are you??

Pulling all nighters.Crazy busy Doc. Just waiting desperately for the month of June to be over.😭

But dropping in here and bugging you twinnie is a real life saver. 😆

Yo Kittu cat whatcha doing behind the scenes, busy with your paw on that like button😲

Bahar nikal.

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#913

Originally posted by: Susegad

Pulling all nighters.Crazy busy Doc. Just waiting desperately for the month of June to be over.😭

But dropping in here and bugging you twinnie is a real life saver. 😆

Yo Kittu cat whatcha doing behind the scenes, busy with your paw on that like button😲
Bahar nikal.

😆😆 Im out!!!

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

😆😆 Im out!!!

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#915

Ch 32

I don't have much to say about this chapter, though it was the most fun to read.

Neil it seems has passed on his flirting baton to Maan (much toRaunaq's relief)😆

And Maan is an apt pupil.😉

However, one thing Maan has learnt is: don't poke at things, if you don't want them to rear up and take a bite out of you😆

But ...but...but... then again, maybe he does enjoy being bitten at by the gorgeous Geet Handa.😳

You had sent me a part of this chapter in Feb, but at the time I could not figure out, how it was actually going to be played. ...Now I know.😉

Ch 33

Do I know...or am I practicing willful ignorance; that is the gist of Geet of WH.

Attitude and sarcasm now being served liberally at ARK..especially to all things... Vyan😆

Geet is a mass of contradictions to herself, more than she is to anybody else.

She knows, yet she refuses to see what lies right in front of her eyes.

Who will be able to reach out to this tightly clammed shell called Geet, I wonder?

I feel that not only Maan, but to a certain extent Vyan is also propelling her towards self discovery.

The things that are happening around Vyan and because of Vyan will lead her to discovering what it is, that is most important to her.

The chaos are building around her. Vyan, the changes in Maan, the past that she has learnt about from Ayush; everything is building up into a conflicting maelstrom that is going to rip Geet wide open.

For whatever reason I feel that the realization of her feelings will not be a slow deliberation for her, even though it seems so now. The truth will slam home at one point suddenly and fiercely.

I could be completely wrong, but I think that she has deliberated and pondered and stood back for so long and watched that she just needs to be overwhelmed and the ground ripped from under her.

I do not know how and what it is that you have planned for her, but I am extremely excited and looking forward to it.

Now actually coming to the chapter after that long deliberation.😆

There were more undercurrents in this chapter than in a stormy sea.

There was a whole slew of conversation going on, beneath the things being said.

"My cabin?" Maan interlaced his fingers.

"It has to be a combination of light and dark."

"Any specific reason about that?"

"It has to be a representation of the personality of its owner, don't you agree?"

At my words, I saw Maan's lips curl slightly upwards. "Light and dark, huh?" There was a very apparent ease in his manner. He seemed to have gotten over the bad mood he was in earlier.

He wants her to realize and acknowledge the change in him. Maybe it is an unconscious feeling for him, but the moment she acknowledged it, the anger and irritation in him rapidly flashed out.

Likewise he is also acknowledging the excellence of her professional work.

However, the professional lines are getting blurred as far as Geet is concerned. Or else the the distinction between the Mr. Raheja and Geet would not have happened.

Now Geet is getting in hot soup. Do parent's really want to meet the person who is their son's partner at work. This a quite obviously a whole different partnership Vyan is aiming for.

Good. I am very glad. The harder Vyan pushes the faster Geet will realize what Maan really means to her.

She seems to be still in doubt if she knows him at all?

Sorry for the late, late late comment Mayyo. My brain just wasn't functioning and churning out the right words.🤢

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#916

Originally posted by: Susegad

Dil mein jaane yeh kaisi ajeeb umenge hai jagi,
Main Shayar ko Chod, Kalam ke piche bhagi.

😆😆

Shayari toh Kalam se hi likhi jaati hai na 😳

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#917

Originally posted by: custodian75
Both are blowing hot and cold. Vyan will be totally lost when these two are together.
Geet going to meet Vyan's family. Something is going on in Vyan's mind.

Maybe we shouldn't underestimate Vyan so soon...

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: spvd
part 33
excellent...
u know what am enjoying this more that the previous one...
this is so good...
awesome part...
Maan has changed so much in fact too many characteristics...
cool, flirt, arrogant, determined etc etc etc...
well had it been someone else he would have shouted at that person too its Geet here so he didnt make it too hard...
interesting...
oh how i wish to see a flirt Maan get so J over Geet and Vyan...
at least in one update its needed...
and Maan is impressed with Geet...
lovely...
and Geet is going to meet Vyan's family...
cont soon dear...

Thank you so much, Deepa! It is such a pleasure to know you're liking this! 😃

Don't worry, Maan will surely have his share of the green-eyed monster. 😉

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#919

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
part 33 - lovely part...maan was to his MSK mode when geet was late for the meeting...vyan was totally scared seeing him like this...
loved maaneet'sconvo...maan was taking his frustration on them and geet confidently reasoning him back...they were only two conversating as ifchecking each other, reminding their past...

so geet agreed to go with vyan...glad that raya put some sense in geet's mind why he was taking her...hope geet will stop him at right time...butit means vyan ka dil toot jayega...my poor vyan...

raya's love for her shoes...lol...liked her excitement...

Thank you! I am glad you liked it.
Be assured that Geet will be firmer this time around, not out of cowardice but out of determination of what she wants.