Wired Hearts (4) Ch:34, Thread:5 (June 26) - Page 72

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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaj kaal Paanv zameen par nahi padte mere,
Bolo dekha hai kabhi tumne mujhe udte hue

Mera bhi

THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP😆
Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yikes! I'm going to go hide somewhere! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

For someone in Maan's position to play with her curl; that was a very telling moment.

I don't know if it is so easy to approach someone in that way once you have been spurned by them.

He is still waiting for her consciously or subconsciously; that's why he is breaching the barriers that should be there.

It is a safety mechanism to surround himself with others while he waits for his internal debate queen to be sure.

It is doubly hard for her now. She has to fight her own doubts regarding him and he won't make it a cakewalk like it was before.

Even this approaching him and teasing him that she did, I am sure she will pakao her own dimaagi khichdi of that.😆 Good. I want that to happen. That's the only way she will be good at this. Can't conquer anyone else if you are not sure of yourself.

I love your writing. It takes me to a place where characters and their every movement is meaningful. The journey is as enriching and enticing as the destination.

Sorry for late reply..


@ Bold
Love what you said.
I think that one sentence says it all for Geet.
You boiled it down to it's basic essence😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Aaj kaal Paanv zameen par nahi padte mere,

Bolo dekha hai kabhi tumne mujhe udte hue

Mera bhi

THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP
THAP THAP THAP THAP THAAP😆


I lovelove love that song

was going to put that for the honeymoon part in TL if I wrote it in a seperate chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

Yikes! I'm going to go hide somewhere! 😆


I think we all know where Mari wants to hide 😆

u said Tuesday Mari 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


tumko dekha toh ye sawaal aaya

yeh kaunsi bhoot ka hai saaya😆

🤗 Sweety

mujhse baat kar na

aaj kal koi aur zameen pe kaha hai?😆


🤣
Avi shopping chad gayi lagta hai.

Sweety, miss you jaani.
Tu aaja, bhoot mafia will live again.
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


I wanted to reply to your comment formally and then let you know what I felt. But since this conversation is going on, let me tell you I am in complete sync with how Kittu and Sheen feel about this comment.

Plus, I strongly believe it is your perception and not my writing that has such depth in it. 🤗


@ Bold
😲😲
As in,
Dear Madam in regards to your comment dated -/-/- I am extremely delighted to informing you etc..etc...etc.

Your's Sincerely,
Patli Gali Resident.
🤣

Kuch aise kya?😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



I think we all know where Mari wants to hide😆

u said Tuesday Mari😃


I couldn't write a word and you know why. 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


@ Bold
😲😲
As in,
Dear Madam in regards to your comment dated -/-/- I am extremely delighted to informing you etc..etc...etc.

Your's Sincerely,
Patli Gali Resident.
🤣

Kuch aise kya?😆



Formally, as in, properly. A complete reply. Iss tarhan ki application nahin. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


I couldn't write a word and you know why. 😕



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