Wired Hearts (4) Ch:34, Thread:5 (June 26) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
part 28 - beauttiful part...read two times...loved maan-geet part...
loved the tension bet both...and how perfect dialogues are...
geet accusing him for his changing behaviour and maan giving reasons, loved their convo...
but he never stops his teasing, knowing smirk that annoys geet very much
loved the ice cream part...he still very well know her when she choked ice cream while listening that song..
hope that she is not giving wrong signals to vyan...i dont want heart-break for vyan
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Edited my comment @ page 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
part 28
awesome...
excellent...
too good...
Maan has changed so much...
but loved this update so much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Now finally I am slowly understanding Get and Vyan's equation.
Poor Vyan, as far as Geet is concerned, Vyan is like the outermost ring of Saturn. His presence is there, in fact constantly, but it barely effects her.😛
While Maan, he is like the blazing sun. Sometimes when he is hiding behind the clouds of pretense, he may seem mild; however slowly but surely he is emerging from behind the clouds and it is making Geet uncomfortably hot.😉

"Yeah. You see, bland people need to spice themselves up with external ingredients, like the spices you are talking about. Naturally sizzling people just wouldn't care." He winked while I gasped at his remark.

"Yes, but when people just get attracted to your charm and follow you around, you need to change a little to accommodate them, right?"
The best part is, he knows he's hot and he makes her uncomfortable. He is testing her limits time and time again.


"You tend to have troubles accepting truths, I have noticed."
This one sentence opens up so many possibilities.
He wants her to notice the change in him. He needs her to notice it. To him, her noticing would be like a little pandering to his ego, that had been so badly damaged along with his heart.

On the other hand, he thinks she has not changed much from the old Geet.
But she has. Perhaps not as obviously as him, but they both have changed.
And this change within them is what is going to finally enable them to find each other, where before they could not.


And finally the song. 😆
He is loving her, but definitely not like the old Maan. To me, the old Maan is somewhere inside the new Maan, who is wearing a facade or rather an armor of sophistication and flirtation.
But whoever he is, he's really, really getting under her skin😉

This one was definitely the best update yet. There was a whole different conversation going on under their their conversation.
I absolutely loved this one.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Why is this thread so quiet?
Halla Bol.😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Susegad

Why is this thread so quiet?

Halla Bol.😆


I don't know. Maybe because Avi isn't here. Hence proved, she talks a lot. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayyo


I don't know. Maybe because Avi isn't here. Hence proved, she talks a lot. 😆


Yeah missing DQ
She talks and what do you do?😲
Just respond right?😆

Since she is not here, let me ask you
Next update kab milega mohtarma?

Ab tak toh sari ice-cream pighal gayi hogi.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Susegad



Yeah missing DQ
She talks and what do you do?😲
Just respond right?😆

Since she is not here, let me ask you
Next update kab milega mohtarma?

Ab tak toh sari ice-cream pighal gayi hogi.😉



Of course! I just respond. See, I haven't posted a single thing here after the update so that proves it. 😆

Ik sawal se kar jaatey hain wo be-sudh yu'n humein
Nazar mila paatey hain unse na hi lafz zubaan se ada hotay hain!


Okay. That was ridiculous. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mayyo



Of course! I just respond. See, I haven't posted a single thing here after the update so that proves it. 😆

Ik sawal se kar jaatey hain wo be-sudh yu'n humein
Nazar mila paatey hain unse na hi lafz zubaan se ada hotay hain!



Okay. That was ridiculous. 😆


Waah bohot khoob mohtorma bohot khoob👏

Aur iss ke saath saath mohtorma bohot khoobi se, patli gali se, phir se nikal gayi, sawal ka jawab diye bina😆

WH is at such an interesting part right now, it's so unfair of you to pause now.😭
Mujhe agla chapter padhan hai😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Susegad



Waah bohot khoob mohtorma bohot khoob👏

Aur iss ke saath saath mohtorma bohot khoobi se, patli gali se, phir se nikal gayi, sawal ka jawab diye bina😆

WH is at such an interesting part right now, it's so unfair of you to pause now.😭
Mujhe agla chapter padhan hai😃

I


Ha ha! You caught me before I could escape from the patli gali. 😆

And what if I say this update was a pre-pause update? 🤔

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