Mission Impossible:The Don n The Diva part 55 updated

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

finally got some tym to read the parts...still reached only 41...7 more to go...awesome parts...eager to see both of them confronting eah others feelings

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minelove24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

suspense hamko mar dalega..geet in danger,vikram kamina,waing 4 next

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

awesome update

DCP is helping vikram , why????

so brij has loss his memory and now he is gaining his memory back!!!

now i am sure that he is ranveer only!!!!

maan went in geet's car, kahi car mei koi problem toh nahi???

hope maan is safe in that car!!!!!

brij got to know DCP intentions, good!!!!!

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

So much suspense, you keeping readers on their toe

Nice ..

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janvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

gr8 part..

cont,soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Mission Impossible: The Don N The Diva

Part 49

Breej still couldn't believe what he is seeing, "That means DCP sir was messaging to Vikram, or this is an mere coincident," he thought, his thought was disturbed by his phone's ringtone, Breej took the phone and a big smile appeared on his face and he attend the call, "Geet" he screamed as he took the call, "are you ok, where are you now," Breej asked without a gap,

Geet was so confused by his question and tension, "sir, what happened," she asked slowly, "where are you now, first tell me that," Breej asked in a hurry, "in Khurana Mansion," Geet said coolly, "what, how did you go from hotel Sun shine," Breej jumped up, "By Car, sir, what's happening and how did you know I was in hotel sun shine, and what's all this fuss about," Geet asked really getting worried,

"You are alright," Breej asked Again, "I am totally fine, for heaven's sake, please tell me what's all this about," Geet asked frustrated, "oh, Geet, but." Breej turned silent thinking up, "Sir, tell me what's this about" Geet asked as Breej turned silent, "well, tell me one thing Geet, your car I mean DL-4CB - 1230 where is it now," Breej asked again, "oh, that Car Maan, I mean Maan sir, took to office," Geet said,

"what" Breej freaked out hearing it, "I mean, you were in that car right," Breej continued, "ya, but we exchanged, I came in Maan sir's car and he went in mine, but sir, what's going on" Geet asked again, Breej turned silent again, he wasn't sure, whether to say this to her or not, should he betray his own higher official and he decided not to, "Nothing Geet, Nothing, just wanted to make sure, you are ok, ok, now I got to go," Breej said and cut the call,

Geet stood in her room puzzled, why did he call now and was asking all this, Geet thought as her heart started to beat high, Geet called Maan, but his phone came switched off, "Switched off," Geet freaked out for a second and then relaxed, "then what will it be, he is in the meeting, he would have switched off his phone," Geet thought and decided to go and meet Dadi Maa, and went to the Mansion, throwing her mobile on her bed,

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Maan was driving up thinking about his meeting and was cursing up for not charging up his mobile which was now charging up in his car, "god, wish I could speak to Geet," Maan thought and was driving up thinking about Geet,

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Breej was in his cabin, no knowing what to do, should he stop it or do something to save MSK, or leave it as of, atleast Geet would be free from trouble after that, and he still can't get Vikram out of his mind, "should I Ask DCP, he lied to me, but he will have his answers and Vikram, can he do so, no, no, I am turning crazy, but right or wrong, MSK is trapped now," Breej thought,

An fear and concern was hovering in his mind, "God Damn, why am I worried about him, why the hell should I care for what happens to him, he deserves what he is going to get" Breej thought yet his heart ached to save him, Breej walked around and hit himself on the table and MSK file fall on the floor, opening itself up and Maan's photo was shining up, Breej took the file and looked at Maan's picture,

Breej closed the file staring into the face of MSK which always caught his heart and decided to go by his instinct, and called someone up, "located DL-4CB - 1230 the car now, soon," he said and cut the call, and called another number, "located this number," Breej said giving MSK's number, "I need it now," he said and waited up,

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Maan was driving up and suddenly stopped his car when he saw someone on the road as few yards above and went towards the spot as he went there, he saw an women on the ground, in blood and a small Girl standing there crying up, Maan immediately went and picked that little girl up, "Guys," Maan shouted and his four body guards waiting for him, outside their cars came running towards him, "what happened Dear" Maan asked that little girl

"An car," was all she could say and Maan understood her and hugged her up and comforted her, "It's ok, it's ok," he said, "Mama," she said weeping up, "your mom will be fine," he said and turned to his body guards, "Ashok, stay back, Ram and you two guys, take her up to the Khurana Hospital and treat her up, say that I send her," Maan ordered and then one guy rushed and bought their drive near them and took that women up, and put her inside the car's back seat,

"Baby, go with that uncle, he will take you to the hospital and your mom will be ok soon," Maan said and the little girl smiled up abit and kissed Maan on his cheeks, and Maan too kissed the little girl and gave her to Ram, "take care" Maan said, and Ashok rushed towards Maan's car and Maan as he saw the other car drive away speedily and walked slowly towards his car and saw Ashok standing there holding the back door opened, Maan was just a few feet's away, when an suddenly blast of fire hit him strongly pushing him off the road into the greens on the side,

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Geet and Dadi maa was talking on up having their evening tea as it was 4.00 now when the land line rang up, "Dadi maa, I will take," Geet said and went and took it up, "Hello" Geet said slowly, "Geet," Adi's voice made her jump up for a second, "Adi sir, what happened," Geet asked worried, "Geet, where is Maan sir," Adi asked worried, "What" Geet freaked out now, "Adi sir, what are you saying, he said he is going to the office" Geet said tensed now,

"No Geet, Maan sir, didn't come here, Mr.Tandon waited up till now and just now he signed off from the conference call, but Maan sir didn't show up, his phone is also switched off, so I called you up but you too didn't pick it up and so I called up here, where is he," Adi asked and Geet's was feeling an fear covering her heart and mind, suddenly her fear she felt in the morning, Vikram's card, Breej's call, everything came up in her mind, and her head spin up pulling her on to the floor and she fall on to the floor, fainted up,

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It started to drizzle up a bit, the tiny rain drops spread on Maan's face, who was laying there unconsciously, as the blood was flowing up from his head, and from his arms and legs, the rain drop gave an instant pain on his fresh blood running wounds, pulling Maan conscious, Maan felt an pain killing him up but he used all his strength to pull himself up and try to stand up, his legs were weak but he wasn't going to give up,

Maan struggled and finally stood up, he held his head as it was feeling so heavy like an huge rock on the top, his eyes showed him double visions and his legs were trembling up, Maan took a few steps and then exhausted and tripped and fall off in to greens again, "Maan don't give up" Maan thought to himself as he held to an broken tree truck but his body had already given up and his eyes started to see the spreading darkness around him and finally his eyes closed up, and he laid there near the tree truck,

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Dadi maa was holding Geet who was unconscious, they made her sit on the sofa and Nakul was standing there with a jar of water and Dadi maa was hugging her up in sideways, "Geet, please open your eyes Dear, please," Dadi maa was tapping her face worried and Geet slowly got her conscious again, "Maan, Maan," Geet murmured as she wake up slowly, "Dadi maa, Maan, Maan is in danger, my Maan is in Danger," Geet freaked out as she saw Dadi maa's face as she opened her eyes,

"Geet, relax, who was on the phone and what happened," Dadi maa freaked out too, "oh, Adi sir, Adi sir said Maan didn't come to the office and I know, he is in some danger, I can feel it Dadi maa, My Maan is in Danger," Geet freaked out tears rolling down as an rain, and Dadi Maa hugged her up and she was feeling worried too, "Nakul Call Dev and ask him to come here soon," Dadi maa ordered, as she held Geet tight who was freaking out like hell, "Baba ji, Baba ji, please keep my Maan safe," Geet heart begged up as she was holding Dadi maa up tight in fear,

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Breej rushed to the spot his informers said and stood there seeing the car spilled up into pieces on the road due to the blast, "Maan," his voice went low, he don't know why but his tears flowed down with the thought that Maan is dead, he don't know why he was feeling so emotional towards an criminal and he walked slowly towards the spot closer, he saw the blood on the road and his heart ached up, and he saw the body part spilled up, he cried out not knowing why as his mind showed him Maan's face,

Breej rushed away from there and a stood a few feet's away and took control of his emotions and took his mobile to call his team up and to share the news that MSK was Dead, as he was dialing, Breej heard a slight moan, Breej looked confused and looked around the deserted area, "Geet" the sound came clearly now and his heart skipped a beat, "MSK" Breej thought and started searching around, as he searched he found Maan near an tree truck, his was totally unconscious and yet was murmuring Geet's name,

Breej found an smile in his face and rushed towards him, as he went close and saw Maan for the first time so closely in real, don't know why but his heart felt an happiness which can't be explained in words, "Geet" he moaned again, "Breej" kneed down and held his hand and put it around his shoulders and pulled Maan along with him, and started walking up, "MSK," Breej called out, but Maan was so not in sense,

"Maan," Breej called slowly and Maan tightened his hold on Breej shoulder, Breej slowly walked him to his car and Made him lay in the back seat and went and took the drive, "Geet, I won't leave you again, I will not lose you again, I will be with you, I will be," Maan murmured and Breej was driving up, listening to his soft murmur, "My Choti Rani," Maan said and Breej hit the break suddenly and turned around and looked at Maan,

"Choti Rani," he said again, Breej felt that he was so familiar with this name, the name made his heart melt in second, "why, why, what's happening" Breej looked confused at Maan, every time he saw Maan, his eyes filled up with an affection which was unreasoned then Breej saw his bleeding legs and shook his head and drove away, he reached the hospital and as no introduction was need for Maan, everyone started to freak out and started the treatment immediately, "Sir, what is your name," the nurse asked,

"Oh, Ranveer" He said, "sister, please call his family and inform," Breej requested and the nurse nodded and went up,

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Geet was crying up and trying to call Breej, but his mobile was switched off, Adi rushed into the house and his eyes was teary and his face was blank, "what happened Adi," Dev asked as he saw him, Adi pulled Dev up to an corner away from Geet and Dadi maan and held Dev's hands, "Dev, Maan sir," he said tearing up, "Bro," Dev asked freaking out, "what happened," he asked, "oh, Maan sir's car had been found blasted," Adi said, "No, No, No," Dev freaked out aloud and he said Dev what Maan's body guard Ram said him

"No, Nothing will happen to my Bhai, you get that," Dev yelled aloud making Geet and Dadi maa come there and saw Dev was holding Adi collar up, "Nothing, Nothing will happen, to my bro," Dev shouted up, thought his heart feared the most, and an silent cover the mansion for a few seconds after that which was disturbed by an phone call, and Dadi maa took it up soon and she listened to the call and looked at the trio's watching her, "Maan is in KH, they are treating him up," Dadi maa said as she keep the phone up making Geet, Adi, Dev to relax a bit, Geet rushed away immediately running towards the front door, "Geet" Dev called behind her but she was long gone,

Precap:

"A Part of the truth will make Maan, Geet and Breej tremble up", (Monday, sorry guys for the long gap, will try to give a long one when come back, function at home)