MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread- 7~ UPDATED Pt 59 / Pg 139/ 11th Apr........ - Page 74

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa


hassooo na yu karke hamare didaar...
abb ki baar MODI sarkaar...


😆😆 kya baat hei kiddo.. modi ka rang chada hei..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 kya baat hei kiddo.. modi ka rang chada hei..😃


chada nahi puri doob gayi hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


chada nahi puri doob gayi hai😆


isss dariya me to swimming bhi nahi use karni abb yaar..

abb ki baar MODI sarkaarr..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 57


Whole day passed Geet was in her room doing random things nd spending time sitting lazily ,, she tried to get some concentration in her study to divert her mind but d trespassing of her past consumed her again nd again .

Sometime there r things in ur life that aren't meant to stay Sometime, change may not be what we want sometime, change is exactly what we need nd sometime, saying goodbye is d hardest thing to think u'll ever have to do , but sometime, saying hello again is d thing that break u down nd make u more vulnerable then u ever thought possible sometime, changes is too much to bear but most of d time , changes is d only thing saving ur life.

Maan came back from office spending an infuriating day ,, from mrng to eve he was in a very foul mood ,, he was very punctual nd had a good control on things but today everything went wrong with him ,, a lil change nd disturbance had spoiled his mood nd vividness of d day. Maan changed nd hit his gym to pour out his anger through exercise ,, he made him tired nd then after taking lil rest he went for swimming to sooth his body nd mind ,, after two long hrs he was feeling better . Dadima knew his nature so she didn't budge him but Nakul nd Satish wr praying to their god ,, they wr fearing to face him . Nakul opened a new juice container ,, checked that nd then brought that for Maan in his room ,, he quietly placed that on d side table nd moved back ,, Maan threw a hard glare to him but didn't say anything .

On d other side Geet was watching him from distance oblivious to him ,, she was sensing that he is in a very bad mood bcoz of morng incident ,, she smiled meaningfully ,, her eyes wr on him ,, he was in d pool nd taking lap after lap ,, it was night nd d water of pool was shining aqua blue in d pool lights ,, his wet shining taught body in water making him desirable ,, she gulp hard many times when she saw him coming out from d water level ,, he was looking like a Greek god partially submersed in water ,, she tried many times to divert her gaze but her naughty heart was in full mood to tease her ,, her eyes wanted to quench their thrust seeing that hankering sight * she felt warmth nd tingling in her body ,, '1st time she was watching him like this ,, after more than half hr he was out of pool ,, her heart skipped many beats when she saw that wet body only in a swimming trunk ,, he wrapped him in a bathrobe nd went in d washroom totally unaware of that effect which he was leaving on a naive girl.

Both came face to face at dining table with Dadima ,, Nakul came to place d dishes ,, Maan stopped him .

Nakul's breath stuck in d throat he stood there with hanging head nd dull face.

Maan: ruko aur Satish ko bulao.

Nakul: ji saab.

Dadima: Maan hum baat ker lenge ,, tum rahane do.aur dinner karo .

Maan: nahi Dadima , aapki soft nature ka fayada utha rahe hei ye sab ,,, koi kam theek se nahi kerty *

He looked at Nakul nd said .. tum khade kya ho suna nahi , jao aur dusre ko bhi bulao.

Geet was watching all this quietly ,, she didn't give any look to Maan nd Dadima though she was feeling bad for Nakul but she remained quiet nd watching d drama * Satish came there behind Nakul nd stood there with lower head.

Maan: so tum dono ko subha ke apne shandar kam ke bare mei kuch excused dena hei ?

Nakul in a meek voice: saab wo pata nahi kaise hua ,, mai to daily ke jaise hi BF ready kiya tha,, aur full container ka juice mei namak tha ,, mujhe nahi pata sab kaise gadbad hua?

Maan: accha aur tumhe kya kahana hei valve kisne band kiya ? cleaning ke liye kaun jata hei upper ?

Satish: ji mai jata hun ,, lekin maine kuch nahi kiya .

Maan: fir shayad maine ya Dadima ne kiya hoga ,, ku?

Dadima: tum dono drink to nahi kerty raat mei ? kabhi subha tak nashe mei tight ho ?

Geet gave a light smile nd Maan noticed that ,, ye dekho mera pura din bekaar gaya aur ma'am ko hassi a rahi hei .

Nakul : nahi Dadima ,, wo bas ...

Maan: wo bas kya tum sudhroge nahi ,, jaroor tum dono ne pee hogi aur ab drama ker rahe ho ,, ye last warning de raha hu ,, aaj ke baad ek galti aur tum KV se bahar.. soch lo agar KV mei rahana hei to mujhe har kam perfect or time per chahiye .

Nakul: sorry saab ,, per maine sab theek se banaya tha .

Maan: ku nahi ,, maine kiya sab .

Dadima: Maan now stop this nd take ur diner ,, aage se hum check ker lenge ,, don't spoil ur mood now.

Maan: Dadima mera pura din mood off raha in logo ki bewakoofi ki wajha se ,, aur aap kaha rahi hei inhe kuch na kahu ,, nikamme ho gaye hei dono ,, aur tum dono yaad rakhna ,, ek galti aur tum out ,, samjhi ,, jao ab dinner serve karo .

Both left from there quietly saying sorry to Maan * Geet gave a thoughtful glare to Maan nd then looked down with a sneer * her this mocking act annoyed Maan ,, he looked at her narrowing his eyes.

Geet didn't look at him though he was sitting opposite to her but she was avoiding to look at him which making Maan more annoyed ,, he wanted to see her jovial nd talkative ,, her quietness was irritating him but he can't say her anything bcoz of Dadima * all took their meal silently nd left from there * Dadima instructed Nakul nd Satish for next day nd left for her room * Geet was in her room nd standing near d window ,, she was thinking on today's matter ,,, cool ,, only a small disturbance in daily life routine could effect nd irritate him this much than what wd happen if he had to face much more ? Let's see mr Maan .. she smirked with an evil glint.

Geet lazily spent some time on net nd then called Pandeyji ,, they talked for few min then Geet wished GN assuring him that she wd come to meet him nd other on d site TM at lunch hr * she thought something nd then slept switching off d night lamp ,, d light from d pool side lamps was entering through d window glasses nd that was enough for her .

Maan came in her bedroom after finishing his work nd looked at screen ,, her room was lil dark nd he was not able to get d clear view of Geet ,, nodded his head in disappointment he slept mouthing GN to Geet.

D next morning was as usual nd maan finished his routine ,, went to gym ,, got ready nd came down to take BF * today Geet was also there with Dadima nd she was talking to Dadima in a low voice ,, Dadima was listening her with a smile * He left a sigh of relief at least she was talking to Dadima normally nd Dadima was happy ,, he thought that Dadima was right giving Geet some time to consume d mishap * he settled in d chair wishing GM to both ,, Dadima replied back but Geet didn't ,, Maan nd Dadima exchanged d look ,, Dadima gestured him with eyes to keep calm .

All wr taking BF when d driver of Maan's car called him nd informed that there is some prob in his car.

Maan: what happened ?

Driver: sir d two tires r flattened.

Maan: what ? ,, hmm OK then filled them ,, there is pumping machine in d garage ,, nd fast .

D: but sir i checked that nd that was non opps ,, d valve is not there in d pipe so how cd i filled d air?

Maan: what? Go and ask to d other driver he knew about that ,, nd make it fast ,, i don't want to be late,, clear ?

He cribbed cutting d call ,, don't know what is happening with my things from ystrdy ?

Dadima: don't spoil ur mood in d morning ,, ho jata hei kabhi-kabhi ,,, cheeje kharab nahi ho sakti kya ?

Maan: meri hi ku? Mei aaj fir late ho jaunga ? again a bad start .

Dadima: ku sabki kharab ho sakti hei to tumhari ku nahi ,, MK ka label laga hei esliye?

Geet smiled at Dadima's remark nd add d fuel ,, kuch logo ko sabkuch apni marji ka chahiye ,, bechare tires ne galti ki ,, pahale MK se permission leni chahiye thi flat hone ke liye.

Maan gave a hard look at her teasing remark ,, he was already at d edge of getting angry nd Geet's words irritated him more * his phone buzzed again nd d driver was on other side .

D: sorry sir i'm helpless ,,d pump is not working now i have to take d tires to filling station nd it took lot of time .

Maan: what d hell is this ? (he thought for a sec nd asked to Dadima) Dadima , today I'm taking ur car ,, d other driver'll fixed d tyres nd u cd use that if u want to go for ur work .

Dadima: OK , but i'm not going anywhere ,, my car is in d shed from last few days nd if we need then Geet's car is here .

Maan told his driver to take out Dadima's car for him nd got up to go annoyingly.


Precap ---- Geet tried to accept d reality .. ..



Part - 58

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update ..
so geet trying to make maan life's hell...😆 geet don't do like this ..soon u r going to realise what maan means to u ..
nice update seeing maan angry and geet talking to dadima..
hope sooon she will be out of her traumatic mood ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
kyaa mene batya , mom firse karne lagi hai spying baar baar..
abb ki baar MODI sarkaar..
jana padega jaldi me yaar..
abb ki baar MODI sarkar..

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