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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

babbie mrko bahot nind aa rahi hai.. aakhe khul hi nhai rahi/ gn// bye


😃 Hi mauaa...
awww,,, kya karu abhi free hui hoon,,, 3-4 guests aa gaye hei...
aaj afterniin se meri band baji hei...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 54


With heavy heart Maan and Dadima took their meal ,, they knew that she was not happy with this encroachment in her life but they wr also helpless at their place ,, Maan gave her a painful look ns came back in his room thinking that he has to face a tough time to bring her back in her normal life ,, he sighed nd started his work * his phone buzzed,, he replied nd it was from Meera .

Meera: hello MK , i'm Meera , sorry to disturbed u .

Maan: hi Meera , it's ok .

Meera: i got ur number from bro ,, wo Geet was not picking her phone ,, where is she?

Maan sighed nd replied : Geet is in her room ,, she is upset from morning .

Meera: why , what happened ? wo theek to hei na ?

Maan: yea , she is fine but very disturbed .

Meera: God !! what happened now ?

Maan : Meera tum Geet ko milne aa sakti ho kya weekend mei ?

Meera: we planned , lekin ess weekend mera SF aana postpone ho gaya hei yahi inform kerne ke liye mei Geet ko phone ker rahi thi per wo utha hi nahi rahi .

Maan: Oh!!

Meera: MK , essa kya hua jo wo etni disturbed hei ? agar jyada prob hei to mei leave leker aa sakti hun.

Maan: no it's OK Meera ,, me nd Dadima r with her .

Meera: MK , baat kya hei ?

Maan: Meera it's good if Geet nd Dadima told u this , i'm sending u Dadima's number ,, plzz talk to her * Meera i'm sorry i had hurt ur friend , i'm really very sorry .

Meera: MK ,,, what happened ?

Maan: Plzz talk to Dadima ,, i'm msg her number .

He cut d call nd msg her Dadima's number ,, only Dadima could describe d thing properly nd made her understand d situation .

Meera called Dadima asked about d matter ,, Dadima described her everything which was shocking for Meera too ,, she was feeling Geet's turmoil nd ,, she had already suffered a lot in her life nd now this ,, Meera herself was in fix to say anything ,, these things matter a lot for a girl ,, she wanted to meet Geet but she was struck in her project work for a week ,, main prob was that Geet was not responding d calls ,, Dadima requested Meera to keep d matter to her bcoz they didn't know Geet's reaction but Dadima assured Meera that she is with Geet nd convinced her to talk to her TM ,, right now she was very disturbed nd not co-operating willingly * Meera was convinced with Dadima's assurance ,,, she knew that both r taking good care of Geet nd could handled d matter in a better way coz it was related to their family also.

Night passed in pain for all but nothing was changed for Geet ,, she was in same condition like she forgot to live her life Maan saw her nd sighed in pain cursing himself for putting her in such situation but there was a satisfaction in his mind n heart that she belong to him nd he could bear every pain to make her happy ,, no matter how she respond ?

He hit his gym to pour out his pain through exercises ,, he had two days off nd in these two days things settle down in office ,, he was still unaware about d person who was behind all fiasco ,, here Geet was not ready to talk to him nd making things more difficult . Geet was not coming out from her room ,, she was lying on her bed lost n dejected .

At BF she didn't come ,, Dadima nd Maan spent time with her ,, Dadima tried to talk her but she didn't reply ,, her aloofness now making Maan worried bcoz in this way she could lost her interest in her study nd work ,, this was more harmful for her which he can't tolerate . both tried their best but she didn't response to any of their talk ,, Dadima persuade her to talk to Meera but Geet didn't touch d phone ,, she only doing things which he n Dadima wr forcing her . Two days passed in this way but Geet remained same ,, she was looking pale nd weary ,, her condition was making Maan restive nd Dadima was stopping him to pressurize her .

It was d 1st working day of d week nd Geet was in bed ,, she didn't get ready for her classes ,, Maan didn't know that her classes wr off for next few days ,,, seeing this Maan lost his all patience nd stormed at her room in anger ,, he held her arm nd made her sit on d bed jerking her ,, she looked at him blankly .

Maan: enough Geet ,, stop all this .

Geet spoke very coldly : ab maine kya kiya ?

Maan: today is ur college then why r u lying like this ? Go nd get ready for d classes ?

Geet: it's none of ur business ,, my classes n study r not affecting u nd ur Dadima's health.

Maan: but these things r affecting ur carrier .

Geet: hone do ,, mujhe koi interest nahi .

Maan : ku ? ku nahi hei interest .. he shook her ,, ku ker rahi ho essa ?

Geet: jab meri zindgi meri nahi rahi to mai uske bare mei ku sochu ? mujhe kuch nahi sochna ess bare mei ,, jao yahan se .

Maan sighed in disappointment ,, she was nowhere to co-operate ,, her indifference was increasing his frustration nd making him angry ,, her mulishness forcing him to become rough about her.

Maan: Geet try to understand ,, everything is urs ,, ur life , ur carrier , ur happiness ,, don't punish ur self for my mistake ,, i want ur happiness .

Geet: then don't force me nd live me alone .

Maan: no i can't ,, i'm seeing u from last two days but u r dejecting ur self ,, Geet essa kuch nahi hua ,, i had fixed everything in office ,, plz co-operate Geet .

Geet: jo hona tha wo ho gaya ,, ab kuch nahi badal sakta ,,

Maan: Geet i know kuch nahi badal sakta lekin dusro ki wajha se tum jeena nahi chod saki ,, chalo uttho .

Geet: why r u dominating me ? Who r u ? Why r u blackmailing me ? it's my life nd i want to live alone ,, go away.

Maan: no ,,, i won't nd if u think that i'm forcing u, dominating u then OK, seeing ur stubbornness i'm helplessly forcing u ,, if it's ur life then why r u not living ur life ,, why r u not facing life nd it's challenges .

Geet: i don't want to,, tumhe koi force kare to tum bardast keroge ,, nahi,, kabhi nahi karoge ,, jao yahan se nahi kerna mujhe kisi ko face.

Maan: aur mei tumhe esse muh chupaker nahi baithne dunga , samjhi tum ,, aur agar mujhe force bhi kerna pada to karunga * Geet gave him a deadly glare but maan ignored that *

Maan: now get ready for d college nd then come office ,, i want u on time nd everything perfect .

Geet: i won't go anywhere ,, u blackmailed me to live in ur house but i won't go to ur office ,, i'll resign.

Maan became angry listening this ,, his gripe tightened on her shoulders nd he jerk her in fury .

Maan: U can't Geet , u can't quit so easily from ur job ,, u had signed a contract with KC for this project nd if u want to quit before d completion u have to give 2 month notice or if u leave without notice u have to pay six month salary to KC .

Maan smirked in smugness nd Geet gave him a confused look ,, she realised that she didn't read d contract thoroughly trusting him and looked only few points that time ,, six month salary amount became a huge amount for her to pay .

Maan: one more thing miss GS , if u try to quit i'll drop this project same day nd with that Arjun too lose this big project who is like a partner in this project ,, i'm not taking any profit from him * So think many times before leaving d job ,, i think u don't bring any lose for Arjun nd his family bcoz they r ur well wishers nd this is d best thing to repay for their helps u take from them ,, nd don't blame me that i didn't warn u .

Geet was stunned ,, how cleverly he was fixing her at every step ,, she was in a tight situation ,, Maan gave her a winning smile nd left from there saying ,,, see u in KC on time GS ,, all d best.


Precap ---- Geet's rejoinder ...



Part - 55
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3971721/mg-ss-the-torment-thread-7-updated-pt-59-pg-139-11th-apr?pn=82


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Lakshu,priya,mauaa,dona,BB,indu,rashmi,sona n mona..🤗



hi di
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Posted: 11 years ago

😛 Hi dona...
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi di aaj yaha bhi by chance 1st aagayi 😳😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


hi di aaj yaha bhi by chance 1st aagayi 😳😆😆


😛 yahan bhi matlab..?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😛 yahan bhi matlab..?


pehle mona k thread me ab aapke lakshmi di ka thread hi chut gaya 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


pehle mona k thread me ab aapke lakshmi di ka thread hi chut gaya 😆


😃 congo dear...🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😃 congo dear...🥳


thank u thank u 😆
part 45 pad rahi hu 😃

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