MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread- 7~ UPDATED Pt 59 / Pg 139/ 11th Apr........ - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆 wo to 1 .00 tak bajegi na..
ye lakshu kahan hei..??😲



max 1.00 tak isse pehle bhi aasakthe hai😆😆


lakshu tho apni LPW par busy hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
babie main bhool gay phirse bata rahi hoon pm check karna banner edit karke post kiya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

babie main bhool gay phirse bata rahi hoon pm check karna banner edit karke post kiya


😃 OK dekhti hu..
abhi hello ,, hi hi ho rahi hei meri..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😃 OK dekhti hu..
abhi hello ,, hi hi ho rahi hei meri..😆😆



teek hai tum dekhthi nahi hona😛issliye phirse yaad dilarahi thi😆😆😆warna tu pms par nazar hi nahi daalthi ho
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Posted: 11 years ago
kaun kahaan hain ... bolo tho
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



teek hai tum dekhthi nahi hona😛issliye phirse yaad dilarahi thi😆😆😆warna tu pms par nazar hi nahi daalthi ho


😆 reply kiya..
aate hi socha pahale thodi baat ker lu..😆😆
sab wait ker rahe thy aur mei bhi taras rahi thi..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

kaun kahaan hain ... bolo tho


main filhal yahi hu no ghumna 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago


plzzz give me 2 post..😃
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 51

She had lost all her strength to fight today ,, somewhere she feared about those type of questions that's why she was denying to live in KV but her wracked life forced her to accept their request ,, every time she was gathering her courage nd facing d situation but today she broke down completely ,, today she lost everything respect nd her existence ,, everybody was playing with her life like a dummy * oblivious to her surroundings her mind was roaming in other world ,, she was trying to find out d answers about her scattered life ,, after losing her parents she was forced to live with her relatives who never loved her then this family came and she hoped for a good life but this very person rejected her nd lied in his selfishness which put her life on stake ,, she somehow arranged herself but again her fate put her in trouble nd forced to live with this family ,, it was he who forced her to live with them ,, she again tried to manage but like her Babaji doesn't want to give her a breath of peace so threw her in d pit of barbs ,, she was in d bramble of allegations nd humiliation but this was not enough her fate snatched d last strand of existence ,, this very man d reason of her deserted life blocked all her way .

Geet's pov ...

Now my life is at d square again , that day my life was mine nd i took d decision for my future but now other r driving my life without asking me * it is my life if i'm not interfering in others life then why they r deciding my future? Now what i'll do ? They made my life a toy, a game , why ? Who gave them this right to decide my life? Kya ban gai meri zindgi ? tamasha ban ker raha gai hu ,, mera to jaise koi wazood hi nahi hei ,, meri zindgi ka mujhe hi pata nahi ki kahan ja rahi hei ? kya karu mei ab ,, kya karu ?

Hr passed but she was in a whirlpool of thoughts ,, stunned on this game of fate ,, happiness came nd disappeared in a blink ,, her mind was in a quandary state which made her tongue tight ,, her heart was sinking in pool of grief and moroseness.

He was pleading her to talk but she was struggling to herself ,, what had happened with her? Maan was beseeching her to response and at last she replied coldly ...

Geet: kuch kahane ko bacha hi nahi ,, sab khatam .

Maan nodded in a no ,, sab kuch hei Geet ,, sab kuch .

Geet: haan,,, tumhare liye hei bcoz u eclipsed me . She was still nd cold .

Maan: Geet ,, i'm sorry ,, mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya aur ...

Geet: ab mujhse kya chahaty ho tum log? She cut his words .

Maan: Geet ,, hum baat kerty hei na .

Geet: hum nahi tum ,, tum ,, jo kahana hei kaho aur jao yahan se,, live me alone.

Maan: i can't live u alone Geet.

She became angry on his domination on her nd in frustration she shouted out.. what do u want from me ? Geet ...

Geet: from d day one u r forcing me ,, u scattered my life , i had accepted what u want but no ,,, u r not satisfied with that nd today u snatched my rest of life from me ,, who gave u right to take decision for me ? Who r u ?

She clutched his collar nd shook him ,, tears wr flowing down from her red puffed eyes ,, u made my life a game ,, turn me into a rag doll ,, jab jaise dil kerta hei khel rahe ho . she fell down on bed jerking him back nd cried out saying... mei us din marr jati to accha tha ,, ku essi zindgi de di Babaji ne mujhe ? ku ?

Maan: G e e t.

Maan's heart cried out seeing her like that ,, again he became d reason of her pain nd forced his decision on her but he couldn't re do d things ,, he had to face d heat of her vexation nd didn't know how ?

Dadima was watching all this from d door with teary eyes she was feeling d pain of this innocent girl who was suffering without no reason nd fault ,, she complaint to god that why he was testing them this much ,, she dragged herself near Geet nd sat there on bed caressing her head she tried to quell her anger nd agony .

Dadima: Geet beta apke har faisle mei hum aapke sath hei ,, aapko hume batana chahiye tha ,, chup rahane se sirf complications badhtey hei beta prob solve nahi hoti ,, aapko apni baat kahane ka pura haq hei ,, Geet , hume aap ke upper Maan se bhi jyada bharosa hei ,, esliye ye matt soco ki hum aapko kabhi galat samjhenge ,, tumne apni Dadima per trust nahi kya beta nahi to ussi waqt hume phone ker deti ,, aaker bata deti to shayad ye sab nahi hota ,, u didn't trust us beta .

Maan got up from there nd went out ,, he knew his presence near her could made her more angry ,, right now only Dadima could handle her ,, he was at d fault nd Geet was sufferer coz of him ,, he came in living hall with heavy heart nd called Manish.

Manish : Hello MK , i was trying form long back but u wr not responding .

Maan: Manish , do u get any clue who is behind all this ?

Manish: No MK , u saw that msgs wr from GS's phone.

Maan: nd who put d pics on display board ?

Manish: MK , inquired about that also but i got nothing, when staff ppl came d pics wr on d board .

Maan: keep an eye on all ,, i want that B****** who tried to play with MK in his premises .

Manish: sure ,, did GS say anything ?

Maan: NO , not yet ,,,, Manish brought all d files nd reports at KV OK .

Manish: yes MK.

Maan was lost in his thoughts ,, Geet's outburst was ringing in his mind pricking his heart ,, she was right he was giving only pain to her ,, d torment of last deed was still there nd he piled up that more in his anger ,, he didn't know what wd come out from this commotion.

Maan's POV ...

What i did with her again ? I threw her again in d pit of sorrow nd tears ,, everything was fine nd she was very happy then why i lost my control ? why didn't i wait for d right time or d other way to pacify her ,, in d fear of losing her again i threw her more away from me ,, i don't know how she'll take all this ? i'll bear everything ,, her outburst , anger nd punishment but i won't leave her alone , never. He sighed thinking why god has cursed him to live a tormenting life?


Precap ... stubborn Geet .. Maan angry...

Part - 52

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3971721/mg-ss-the-torment-thread-7-updated-pt-59-pg-139-11th-apr?pn=30


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago

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