Teri Deewani- a cute love story.... updated part 35 and epi on pg 163 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

hey i dont know u r writer too

sooo awsum update
geet total dewani maan k pyar main
maan is sooo cute
neha poor she bear geet
love this payr howa bhi toh principal k bahi say
song is
yaro dosti



thank u
but dear that song is in male version nd i want song in female or duet only
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

nice part...
maaneet ki kahani dheere2 aage badh rahi hai..
n maan teaching geet ws so nice..
n thier talk with themselves...
abb toh geet ki double treat ho gai..
maan k saath padhna n practice 😉
waiting for nxt... 😊


thank u

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Posted: 11 years ago

Banner Credit goes to Vrinda di. Thank u sooo much di🤗

Part 7

At Geet's home

Geet's Mom ( Sonal ) was waiting for Geet, as soon as Geet entered the house.

Sonal : Geet beta, mujhe tumse baat karni hai.

Geet : Ha maa, bas thodi der main dress change karke aa jau, phir hum baat karte hai.

Sonal : Thik hai beta, par jaldi aana important hai

Geet : Ok maa, main yun gayi aur yun aayi, saying this Geet went to her room

Sonal : Geet chal khana kha le phir mujhe tumse baat karni hai.

Geet : Ha mumma, bolo na main khate khate sun sakti hoon.

Sonal : Nahi Geet tu pehle kha le,

Geet : Aap bolo na maa, kya hua hai, jabse ghar me enter hui hoon, aap ek hi baat bol rahi ho, that u want to talk about something important, aisi kya baat hai mumma.

Sonal : Geet, mujhe tere papa ke paas London jana hoga.

Geet : Ha toh jao na, maine kab ruka hai, aap iss baat ko bolne me itna time laga diya.Saying this Geet started to eat her lunch

Sonal : Tu samjh nahi rahi hai beta, tumhare dad mujhe wahan apne saath chahte hai, not for a day or two but for few years, to set up his business there, listening this Geet stopped eating

Geet : Aur main maa, mera kya?? she asked with chocked throat, main yahan par aapke bina kaise rahungi aapne socha

Sonal : Beta maine Neha ki mummy se baat karli hai, aap unke saath unke ghar me rahoge, Geet main aur aapke papa bhi chahte hi aap humare saath aao but u can't leave in mid term, iss liye beta aur mera jaana important hai, warna main... Geet didn't let her complete

Geet : Agar aapne pehle hi sab kuch decide kar liya tha, toh mujhe kyu bata rahe ho, jao aap I won't stop u, saying this Geet ran to her room and locked it, Sonal came behind her to make her understand but found her room lock,

Sonal : Geet, meri baat sun, dekh agar zaruri nahi hota toh main nahi jaati

Geet : Aap jao yahan mujhe aapse baat nahi karni hai, saying this she started to cry more.

After few hours she opened the door nd rushed out of her house nd ran towards Neha's house

Geet ringed the bell, after few minutes door was opened

Neha : Arey Geet tu yahan, chal andar aa. Neha noticed her eyes which were red nd swollen nd took her toward her room. Geet tu roo rahi thi kya????

Geet : Nahi, main kyu rongi, mujhe kya padi hai ki main kisi ke liye roun.

Neha : Dekh Geet teri aankhe poori laal hai nd u know u can't hide it from me, tune bachapan se lekar aaj tak apni har cheez mujhse share ki hai, even what u feel about Maan, tune yeh sab baat kisi aur se nahi mujhse share ki hai, nd now u r hiding things from me, cupping her face in her hand she asked, Bolna kya baat hai, aunty se jhagada hua hai kya ya uncle ki yaad aa rahi hai??????????

Geet : I don't want to talk about them now plz nd saying this she again started to cry

Neha : Ok, ok, tu ro mat, ruk main paani lekar aati hoon, she went to take water for Geet she was having a feeling that something is terribly wrong with Geet but what she couldn't understand nd seeing Geet condition she didn't want to pressurize her.

After some time when Geet's cry subsided nd she was quite Neha tried to ask again about the issue which was bothering her

Neha : Geet r u feeling better now????

Geet : Hmm

Neha : Do u want to share it with me, u know u will feel better.

Geet : Can I hug u??? Geet asked in low voice

Neha : Of course Geet, saying this hugged her

Geet : U know Neha, mumma is going to London

Neha : Toh kya hua???? aunty thode dino me aajayegi.

Geet : Nahi Neha, she is going bcoz papa needs her there, leaving me here nd she said I will be staying with u guys.Saying this she started crying, Neha was shocked listening to this bcoz she knew Geet can't live without her mother for a long time, Neha composed herself and said

Neha : So what, tu positive side dekhna, we both r going to live with each other 24x7, aur phir dekh tu toh har din Maan ko bhi dekh payegi, chahe din ho ya raat subah ho ya shaam,nd winked she said that to make Geet's mode happy

Geet : Neha... here I m sad nd u r in mood of joking

Neha : Ab main kya karoon, yeh kaam toh tera hai aur tu roo rahi hai, ek second agar main tera kaam kar rahi hoon, toh phir mera kam kaun karega, she said making a serious face

Geet : Tera kaisa kaam?????, saying this she wiped her tear nd sniff her nose

Neha : Tujhe nahi pata, tera Maan puran sunane ka, saying this she laughed, listening her Geet started to throw pillow on her

Geet : Neha tu kabhi nahi sudhregi, saying this she started to beat her more

Neha : Sudharne ki zarurat mujhe nahi pagaloon ko hoti hai, joh tu hai, listening to this Geet started to hit her with pillow

Geet : Teri toh main, main pagal hoon, toh tu moti hai

Neha : Oyee Geet, dekh, mujhe moti mat bol, dekh teen saal se mere 1 kg weight nahi bada hai

Geet : Oye hoye, badi aayi 1 kg weight nahi bada, kis se jhoot bol rahi hai mujhe pata hai, tu kitni moti hai,Moti

Neha : Dekh Geet, mujhe moti mat bol warna main na tere babaji se bolungi ki tujhe tera Maan na de, aur waise bhi Nikita ko toh pasand hai na Maan, main Nikita ko Maan ke baare har ek cheez Aaru se puch kar bata dungi usse patane ke liye

Geet : Oye, tu aisa karke tu dekha, main tujhe chodungi nahi, aur agar tune uss Nikita ki bacchi ko Maan ke baare me kuch bhi and I mean it kuch bhi bataya na toh main, main

Neha : Ha ha soch le phir mujhe bata dena tu mujhe kaunsi dhamki dene wali hai, saying this she lay down on bed

Geet : Teri toh main... she stopped nd smirked evilly nd seeing her smirk Neha thought Iske dimag me zarur koi khichadi pak rahi hai

Neha : Geet, tu aise kyu smile kar rahi hai???

Geet : Agar tune Nikita ko kuch bhi kaha toh main Puri ko bata dungi ki tu usse kya kya bolti hai uske baare me dil hi dil me

Neha : Dekh Geet tu aisa kuch nahi karegi, plz yaar tu toh meri BFF hai na

Geet : Toh tu bhi toh Nikita ko Maan ko patane ke raaste batane wali thi aur main tujhse help maangoon toh main pagal hoon

Neha : Dekh Geet I m sorry thik hai, main kisi ko kuch nahi kahungi, promise

Geet : That's better, agar tune.. but Neha cut her in between

Neha : Nahi nahi I promise I won't say a word to anyone

Geet : Good

Neha sighed in relief and was going to lay on bed again but Geet threw a cushion on her nd was again going to do that

Neha : Oyee Geet kya kar rahi hai, pagal ho gayi hai kya???

Geet : Oye tune promise kiya tha ki tu mujhe pagal nahi bolegi, saying this she started pillow fight from her side

Neha : Maine bola tha, main Maan ke baare me Nikita ya kisi aur ko kuch nahi bolungi, ouch Geet dheere lag rahi hai

Geet : Toh main kya karoon, main toh pagal hoon na

Neha : Teri toh tu ruk, saying this Neha also started hitting her with pillow

After sometime

Both were laying on bed tired and trying to catching their breathe, they looked at each other nd laughed remembering their kiddish fight

Neha : Chalo madam ke muh par hassi toh aayi

Geet : Tu bhi na Neha, but tujhe pata hai, tu issi wajah se meri bestie hai, mujhe kab time dena, kab aur kaise sambhalana hai, u know it very well , tere saath rehti hoon toh humesha accha feel karti hoon

Neha : Thank u mam, waise Geet ek baat boloon???

Geet : Ha bolna

Neha : Geet tu uncle aunty ka bhi POV samjh, shayad uncle ko aunty ki real me zarurat hogi, iss liye woh unhe wahan bola rahe hai, warna tu bhi jaanti hai uncle aunty tujhe kabhi akela nahi chodenge, uncle wahan kitne time se hai but unhone kabhi bhi aunty ko bolaya, nahi na but maybe this time he want some support, thats why he is calling her there, aur waise bhi main hoon na tera saath, hum dono subah se shaam tak masti karenge, aur joh chahenge karenge, kya bolti hai???

Geet : I think u r right Neha, I just over reacted nd made it a big issue, but tu jaanti haina main mumma ke bina zyada din nahi reh sakti, nd this sudden trip that too for year just blocked my rational thoughts nd I reacted like that

Neha : I know, chal ab jaa kar apna face wash karle, aur phir jaakar aunty se baat kar lena, mujhe pata hai gusse me tune kuch bhi bol diya hoga aunty ko. Listening this Geet gave her a cheeky smile nd Neha shook her head

Geet : Ha, ab jaakar mumma ko bhi sorry boloon warna woh bhi worried rahengi mere liye, saying this Geet went her home

At Geet's Home

Sonal was worried for Geet and pacing left to right in the hall, at that time the bell rang and Sonal ran there to open the door nd sighed in relief seeing Geet there nd hugged her tightly

Sonal : Geet, tujhe pata bhi hai main kitni pareshaan ho gayi thi, tu bolegi tu main nahi jaungi

Geet : Nahi maa aap jau, said Geet coming out of hug

Sonal : Mujhe pata hai Geet tu mujhse naraz hai par... but Geet cut her in between

Geet : Nahi maa, main aap se naraz nahi hoon, mujhe pata hai main kuch zyada hi gussa ho gayi thi nd i m sorry for that.

Sonal : Nahi Geet tu sorry mat bol, galti toh meri bhi thi, mujhe tujhe aaram se baat karni chahiye thi aur samjhana chahiye tha

Geet : Accha ab woh sab chodo aur mujhe batao ki aapki flight kabki hai??????

Sonal : Kal sham ki

Geet : Itni jaldi!!!!!!!!!, she was shocked listening to that

Sonal : Ha Geet but zyada time ki baat nahi hai, jaise hi tumhare papa ka bussiness waha par bhi set ho jayega hum wapas aa jayege bas thoda sa time cheeze settle hone ke liye chahiye.

Geet : Hmmm... maa kya main aaj aapke saath so sakti hoon

Sonal : Kyu nahi, yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai, chal ab aaja tune subah se kuch bhi thik se nahi khaya hai, iss liye itni haddie ho rahi hai mujhe na Neha ko bolna padega ki tere khaane ka dhyaan rakhe warna tu toh ek din dikhegi hi nahi

Geet : Common mumma, main haddie nahi hoon, isse size zero bolte hai, aaj kal yehi fashion me hai, ab jaldi se mujhe khana do mujhe bohot bhuk lag rahi hai, saying this Geet went to dinning table nd seeing Geet back to normal Sonal took a breathe of relief and thank god for making Geet understand their POV too


Precap

Geet living with Neha




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Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mee first for the first tym...

YUPPIE 🥳
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet gets angry on her mum..
cz shes going to london for a year...
its very difficlt to manage without mumma..
bt inn sab me ek chiz achha hua...
ki now geet will stay with neha...
n she wil b maans neighbour 😉
n neha ws too good in bringing back geet in mood...
we all need such a frnd...who can bring u back to laugh evn wen ur in ur worst mood..
cheers to their frndship 😊
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
geet's mumma is going to london for few years...
geet gets angry after listening this...she cant live with out her mumma for long time...
geet will stay with neha in her mumma's absent...
geet went to neha's home...
geet talked with neha n she understands her parents POV..
naha was to good a true friend who can bring u back from ur worst mood ...she brought geet bake to her mood...
geet went back to her home n talked with her mother..
inn sab me ek baat achhi hui abhi geet will stay with neha n know more abt maan
loved it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
geets mom leaving her n going 2 london
bicahri geet
will miss her mom
she is angry on her mom n went to nehas house..
loved nehas part n their friendship..
very lovely
their cat fights rootna manana..daring each other
thats real friends..loved it
now geet with neha..
as neha said now geet will be able to drool maan all time..
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Neha is the true friend of Geet.
She made her understand her mother. and she understood it too
Their cute talk was lovely.
both blackmailed each other to keep their secrets under cover😆
Finally Geet said sorry to her mother and Now Geet can drool day and night at Maan from Neha's home😆
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
its natural kids get angry on parents specially mother for leaving them alone

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Posted: 11 years ago
living with neha
droling on maan 24 *7
geet loterey lag gaye
first geet become emotional
neha geet bonding sooo awsum
the way she made her understand
thankyou for pm

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