Teri Deewani- a cute love story.... updated part 35 and epi on pg 163 - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Lovely Update

Geet is feeling the same way just as maan was,eagerly waiting for maan,s proposal and geet,s reaction.
Loved it


Thanks Preeti
I always love ur emoticons , they r just awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_

superb update !!

neha left maaneet alone to spent sometime together n shop for each other ..
hahaha maan becomes free ka driver of geet ..afterall hw can he leave a chance to spent time with geet ..


Maan ko toh bas Geet ke saath time spend karne ka bahana chahiye iss liye toh uska driver bhi ban gaya hai
Thanks Dear

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Posted: 11 years ago

Banner Credit goes to Vrinda di. Thank u sooo much di🤗

Thanks Pooja and Spoorthi for helping me in this update, Thank u soo much guys, muahh😳


Part 14

Annual Day,

Maan and Geet has not seen each other from morning as it was the day when they have to perform and school was closed due to that, both were getting restless and wanted to confess their love soon but didn't got any time and in evening Maan went with Purvaa to help her with the function

The Leela Palace, where the Annual day was going to happen

Maan was helping Purvaa and others by instructing the staff how to manage the music system and other things, he was waiting for Geet but she was nowhere to be seen, then he saw Neha entering alone, he went to her to ask about Geet

Maan : Neha, where is Geet?????

Neha : Geet is at home right now she is getting ready and she didn't have any work here so I asked her to come when its time and I think she will be arriving in few minutes now

Maan : But she could be ready here, then why u asked to stay at home, he asked getting restless to see her

Neha : Why she can get ready at home too and that too properly, and why did u asked that, ooo Mr Majnu is missing his Laila, haina??????? She giggled and Maan blushed hearing her comment, OMG Maan u r blushing, God I have never seen any guy blushing yaar, she winked at him and Maan just shook his head smilingly but then his eyes stuck at the door and was just staring at that place only, Neha waved her hand in front of his eyes seeing him not saying or doing anything, she too turned towards the way Maan was seeing and got to know why he was reacting like that and she pinched him bringing him back to his sense again

Maan : Ouch, what was that for, he said rubbing the place where she pinched him

Neha : That was bcoz if someone would have seen u staring at Geet, anyone would have known what u feel for her, and then she went to Geet and brought her to Maan

Neha : Here, Maan here is ur partner and now stop asking me question about her, Geet got confused and Maan was getting embarrass, seeing Geet confuse she said, U know Geet, from a long time Maan was asking me about u, where is Geet, why didn't she come till now, So Maan here is Geet now ask her whatever u want to ask, I m going now, she left the place leaving Maan and Geet alone there

Maan : Ahem... Geet u r looking stunning, he said to start a chat, hearing his comment Geet blushed and lowered her eyes

Geet's dress

Geet : Thank u Maan, and U r amazing any girl will be ready to be ur girlfriend, she said smilingly so that she didn't get caught with her feeling forMaan

Maan's dress

Maan : Will u???? He asked staring at her eyes

Geet : Ha.. she replied lost in his eyes, they come back when they heard noises around them, both looked away not knowing what to do

Maan : Lets go inside, our turn is going to come in next few minutes

Geet : Ya, she said getting nervous, Maan saw that

Maan : Nervous????

Geet : Little bit, I have stage fear, she said rubbing her hands together, Maan took her hand in his hand

Maan : Don't be, just close ur eyes and think about the person u love the most and then everything will be fine, Geet did as Maan told her to do and saw her parents smiling at her and it brought a tear in her eyes, as since the time her mother went to London, they didn't call her for once also to know about her, and when she open her eyes she saw Maan standing there giving her confidence, she smiled looking at him, Maan saw a drop of tear in her eyes and rubbed back side of her hand with his thumb, and smiled at her standing beside her.

The function was going perfectly kids performing on difference songs and in between some skits to entertain parents ,After sometime it was turn of Geet performance, she took a deep breath and looked at Maan and Neha who gave a smile and thumbs up, that gave her confidence and she went on stage with lapel mic attached with her dress, She stood in the middle of the stage and closed her eyes thinking about Maan and Neha who was with her every time she needed some support

Geet : Yaa Kundendu tushaara haara-dhavalaa, Yaa shubhra-vastra'avritaa

Yaa veena-vara-danda-manditakara, Yaa shweta padma'asana

Yaa brahma'achyuta shankara prabhritibhir, Devai-sadaa pujitaa

Saa Maam Paatu Saraswati Bhagavatee Nihshesha jaadya'apahaa.

Shuklaam Brahmavichaara Saara paramaam Aadhyaam Jagadvyapinim,

Veena Pustaka Dhaarineem Abhayadaam Jaadya'andhakaara'apahaam

Haste Sphaatika Maalikam Vidadhateem Padmasane Sansthitaam

Vande taam Parmeshwareem Bhagavateem Buddhipradaam Shardam,

All the teachers and parents were shocked hearing the Saraswati Vandana from today's generation girl, all were lost in her beautiful voice and were praising about her in between themselves when suddenly the hear a loud noise which was made by guitar and all saw Maan entering the stage with his guitar in his hand

Maan : O Malang Hua
Dil Ye Mera
Hai Mast Malang Hua
Dil Ye Mera

Geet saw Maan and again her confidence level gain and she started to sing her lines

Geet : Ishq Fikar Da Chatte Balla
Mauj Karda Ho Ke Jhalla Jeeve...
Ishq Mein Dil Na
Hoyea Fakeeri
Maange Sab Ki
Khair Sukayya, Jeeve...
Gira Deewareee...
Laga Lalkareee...
Ishq Di Masti De
Vich Sone De Jaage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage...Ve...
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage... Ho Dhunki Laage Ve
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage... Ho Dhunki Laage Ve

Hearing the song all the student started to have fun and were dancing at there place hearing the song and seeing their children happy all the parents were happy but Purvaa was first shock hearing such song but getting positive response she was satisfied with their work

Maan : O Malang Hua
Dil Ye Mera
Hai Mast Malang Hua
Dil Ye Meray
O Malang Hua
Dil Ye Mera
Hai Mast Malang Hua
Dil Ye Mera

He was too enjoying seeing everyone enjoying the song and seeing the happiness on Geet's face

Geet : Tu Hawa
Paani Aag Hai
Tu Daga
Daani Daag Hai
Jo Bhi Chave Tu...
Ban Jaave... Re...
Hai Bana Mera
Dil Khuda
Hai Khuda
Kab Mujhse Juda
Khudko Dhoonde
Toh Ussko Pave Re
Gira Deeware...
Laga Lalkare...
Ishq Di Masti De
Vich Sone De Jaage...Ye...Yeah...
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage...Ve...
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage...Ve...
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage...Ve...
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage... Ho Dhunki Laage Ve...

Now hearing the lyrics all got to know why they selected such song, all were happy and enjoying it and Geet was enjoying seeing all enjoying on the song which she was singing

Maan : O Malang Hua
Dil Ye Mera
Hai Mast Malang Hua
Dil Ye Meray
O Malang Hua
Dil Ye Mera
Hai Mast Malang Hua
Dil Ye Mera

Maan ended the song with his words and stopped playing with guitar and went and stand next to Geet and bowed down a little holding Geet's hand in his making her bowing too in front of the audience, they stand straight hearing the applause which was coming from students and parents and they went back to backstage, as soon as Maan and Geet were backstage Neha rushed to Geet and hugged her tightly

Neha : OMG Geet, it was awesome performance, it was best till date, no one would have thought to select this song and that too for an Annual day function, Geet smiled at her

Geet : If u liked it so much then, u should appreciate Maan for that, he selected this song, she said looking at him and smiling, Maan also smiled seeing her smile, both were going to lost in each other again when other students came to appreciate them for their song and team work, Maan and Geet were happy getting to much appreciation from everyone

Finally, It was time when all have to go home and Neha and Geet went together with their others friend, and Maan was sad as he couldn't spend more time with Geet as he had to help Purvaa in other things before going home, but before Neha and Geet can go, Maan messaged Neha to meet him in garden alone, seeing the message Neha went to meet him

Neha : Maan, why u called me here

Maan : Listen Neha, I m going to propose Geet tomorrow on her birthday and I want to be first one to wish her, so its ur duty that no one wish her before me

Neha : Oh, that, it won't be a problem, Geet doesn't like to celebrate her birthday so very few people know about her birthday, but I wanted to wish her first but koi baat nahi, I won't do it for her and ur's happiness but after that I want a party

Maan : Done

Neha : But Maan how will u propose her

Maan : That's on me but u have to do my one work

Neha : And what's that

Maan : U have to send Geet with me tomorrow at 9 in morning

Neha : But how

Maan : That u have to think

Neha : What???? she was shocked, but how will I do that

Maan : I don't know that, but u have to do it

Neha : FINE... it will cost u more treat

Maan : Fine, I will give u as many treat u want but u have to do that

Neha : Ok, now I have to go, or Geet will come for me

Maan : Ok, Bye, Maan smiled standing there content with the feeling that he was going to propose Geet on her birthday


At night in Neha's room

Neha was sleeping and Geet was laying at her side and was seeing moon through the window and thinking

Geet ( st ) : Tomorrow I will confess my love for Maan to him, I can't hide it anymore, this is making me insane, at least I will be free from this unknown which is eating me up for not telling him anything, and bcoz of me Neha is also hiding it, nd supporting me in my every step, I will just hope for best to come my way, and she closed her eyes thinking about it

Maan's room

Maan was laying on his bed and staring at ceiling

Maan ( st ) : I will tell u about my feeling Geet, I can't wait anymore knowing that u too love me, nd will make ur birthday special for u by confessing my love for u on tomorrow, just wait for one more day Geet then I will make ur birthday the best birthday of urs ever, I promise u that, he smiles and close his eyes thinking about Geet and planning how to make that day special for her


Precap

Who is going to say I love u first



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Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow that was a fab song selection!⭐️
So next we hav proposal coming up. .
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice...
it came out well...
well done 👍🏼
waah maan ne toh pehle hi propose kar diya... "will u be" 😉
nd neha is helping thm so mch...applauds to their frndship...
n finally the celebration..
birthday cum proposal cum bst day of maaneets life 😉
waitingg 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
v nice update dear!! good job👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
lol i wont be surprised if geet says it first.. lol.. awesome yaaar.. cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely cute touchy emotional update..te way my maan ki restless without his geet and once he saw her, his eyes got struck on her was lovely cute..te way my maaneet complimenting each other and blushing was lovely cute..te way my maaneet stage performance was lovely cute emotional touchy.. te way my maan deciding to cofess his love and seeking help from neha was lsovely.. other side geet too thinking to cofess her love..we will see who is going confess first or both at a time?..i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan restless geet did not come neha teased maan blushing geet nervous maan supporting her teacher are hearing geet song finally celebrate annual day maan geet thoudht propose their love nice update

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maaneet performance went amazing!!!!!!
both are planning to propose each other!!!

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