Teri Deewani- a cute love story.... updated part 35 and epi on pg 163 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

soo sweet n cute update.. hope maaneet confess soon..😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Lovely Update

Maan knows about his feelings and now want to know about geet feelings.Hope maan will find out soon how she is crazy and deewani of him.Loved the way geet day dreaming of maan and in punishment happily time pass with maan.Loved it



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

arre maan ko itni jaldi pata chal gaya ki he's in love...
accha hai...abb we can c wht miya majnu will do to pataofy his lady...
par geet b already uspe fida hai...toh zyada problem nahi hoga 😉
seems like yaha puri hi villian hai...
n geet ki punishment toh supperb thi...bhagwan sab ko aisa punishment de 😆
n maan teaching geet...wow...i ws waiting for tht...tabhi toh unki kahaani aage badhegi😉

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zyada jaldi ho gaya kya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Lovely Update sia

Geet got her Maan again and she blessed Pooja ma'am

he he har buraayi me achchhai chhupi hoti hai😛

Maan shared her thoughts with Nikhil and he convinced him that he loves geet.

chalo ab dodno taraf ki kahaani aage badhegi😃



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Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Before I start with this update...for the last update I thought kuch Sammy ayegi as Maan's friend, not love but friend and he close to her or something like that😆😆...gosh it isn't😉

Part-5


I really like Maan's jiju (Nitesh) yaar..he is my fav in PKDH and even in KTLK..love the jovial him and getting the same here is a icing on the cake, now I just won't miss him, especially these lines reminded me him of so very much, Oh toh ladki ka chakkar hai, ha toh bol usse friendship karni hai, patana hai ya phir propose karna hai, ...thanku thanku❤️😛

Awww...he is really madly in love😉 and has finally realized it...yeh di😡😆, but yaar we really don't know the real she right?, so waiting for more of her😉

uff when Geet's start cribbing she doesn't pay attention to her surroundsing and woh bhi Maan ko sunna tha, but glad he took it light..nahi toh Geet toh almost kaam se gayi

Pooja aur Geet ki moments acche hai...hope Pooja ki acchi wish Maan na ho😆😆

Loved this sweet lovely update dear...waiting for the next already



actually maine sam ke baare me socha hi nahi tha story start karne se pehle
even I like him, his character always bring a smile
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_

Lovely update !!

So aftr talking with his jiju maan is clear tht he loves geet ..

hehe geet happy & giving blessings to pooja mam for throwing her out of the class & she got the time to spent with maan ..

Maan teaching geet .! ab toh geet science classed attend karna bhi bannd kar degi ..😆

Thanks a lot for pm 😊



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31

Nice sweet part


Maan shared his feelings with his Bro in law...and he supported ... Maan...

Good progress...

I loved Balancing equations

Geet got punished for day dreaming ..

Maan got to see her cribbing ... and he heard the nick name puri...

faking anger and geet got scared ...

Again Neha geet talks ... good

thnx for pm dear

cont soon


I just hate chemistry
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Posted: 11 years ago

Banner Credit goes to Vrinda di. Thank u sooo much di🤗


Part 6

In Purvaa's cabin

Purvaa : So Maan tell me how is ur practice is going on with Geet???

Maan : Its nice di, even more than nice, smiling to himself.

Purvaa : Good, I hope Geet is not doing any mischief in practice time, I know she is brilliant student but at the same time she is very mischievous.

Maan : No di, the practice are going in perfect way, there is no need to worry about it, I won't let u down. I promise di.

Purvaa : I know that Maan, Accha Maan kya tum mera ek kaam kar doge

Maan : Sure di, bolo kya karna hai???

Purvaa : Actually Maan I forgot an important file regarding school at home, can u just bring it for me??

Maan : Ha di, but woh file kahan rakhi hai???

Purvaa : Its in my cupboard, second drawer, here take this keys. Saying this she handled keys to Maan

Maan : Ok di main abhi le kar aata hoon. Saying this Maan left.

In classroom,

Geet : Neha tumse ek question puchoon???

Neha : Ha puch na.

Geet : Kiska murder karne ke baad kitne saal ki sazza hoti hai???

Neha : WHAT???? Tu yeh sab kyu puch rahi hai??? she was writing something in her book, but listing to Geet she stopped

Geet : Mujhe na Nikita ka murder karne hai, making an angry face.

Neha : Kyu ab Niki ne kya kiya??? Tu faltu me uss par gussa hoti rehti hai.

Geet : FALTU ME!!!!!!

Neha : Oyee Geet dheere bol agar kisi ne sun liya na toh hum dono marenge samjhi.

Geet : Ha thik hai, Pata hai woh Nikita ki bacchi Maan par line marne ki koshish kar rahi thi, but thank god Maan ka dhyaan uss par nahi tha warna aaj main uski chatni bana deti.

Neha : God Geet, tu kabhi bhi bore nahi hoti Maan ki baatein karte karte.

Geet : Nahi, nahi hoti, tujhe kya problem hai???

Neha : Bohot problem hai, dekh Geet mujhe isse problem nahi hai ki tujhe Maan pe crush hai, Geet showed her eyes, ok fine love hai, but tu kuch zyada hi uske peeche hai, limit me reh warna baad me tujhe hi bohot problem hone wali hai,

Geet : Ha thik jo hoga so hoga, jab problem hogi usse tab dekhungi,

Neha : Dekh Geet, but Geet cut her in mid

Geet : Plz yaar Neha mujhe tujhse jhagada nahi karna hai.

Neha : Thik hai, jaisi teri marzi, chal me practice ke liye jaati hoon, agar late hui aur Puri wahan par aa gayi to mere sar par tandav karne ke liye ready ho jayegi, chal bye, saying this she made her way to her class

Geet : Bye, Geet also went to her practice room


In practice room,

Geet : Yeh Maan abhi tak aaye kyu nahi????? Late ho raha hai, aur main akele kya karoon, Neha bhi aaj busy hai apni practice me.

Saying this she started to room inside the room.

Geet : Arey Geet tu bhi pagal hai, jab tak Maan nahi aa jaate tu notes bana le science ke, Tu bhi na Geet bas time waste karna jaanti hai, saying this she started to take out her books from her bag nd sat on the bench and started to write down important points in her note book.

Geet : Antoine Lavoisier, aap ko kuch aur kaam nahi tha kya, joh chemistry ke peeche pad gaye the, chalo aap ne kiya toh kiya but aap ko woh sab theoretically likhne ki kya zarurat thi, seedhe se practically kar kar chod nahi sakte the, aapko pata nahi aapki ek galati ki wajah se kitne bacche aap se nafrat karte hai, ab main iss question ka answer kahan se lau, what will be the reaction when AgNO + NaCl will react with each other, mujhe kya karna isse mujhe kaunsa science ki field me jaana hai, Hayyee babaji maher karo apni bachi par aur iska answer bata do.

AgCL + NaNO.

Geet : Yeh aawaz kahan se aayi babaji aapne meri prayer sunli kya????? Agar sunane hi wale the toh pehle bata dete koi acchi wish karti. Kya yaar babaji meri ek wish waste gayi, iske bare me toh kahin se bhi dhundh leti .

Maan : Babaji ne nahi, maine bataya hai.

Geet : Aap???? Aap kab aaye????

Maan : Tabhi jab tum tumhare babaji se complain kar rahi thi chemistry ke baare me.

Geet : Toh aur kya karoon, mujhe chemistry me kuch samjh nahi aata hai, kaunsi cheez ka kya scientific name hai, uska atom number kya hai, uska molecular formula kya hai, mujhe kuch samjh nahi aata, She said keeping her hand on her head, isse accha toh Bio hai usme itna toh nahi padna ya samjhna padta, kuch bhi common sense se samjh kar likh kar aa jao paper kuch toh marks score ho hi jayenge, but chemistry, aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.

Maan : Chemistry bhi itna difficult nahi hai, jitna tum usse bana rahi ho, its simple just tumhe thode dhyaan ke saath usse samjhna hoga.

Geet : But mujhe samjh me hi nahi aata hai!!! Upar se woh Pooja mam, unhe pata nahi mujhse kya problem hai, agar unke paas chali jau toh aise dekhengi jaise main unka khoon karne wali hoon

Maan : If u want I can help u.

Geet : Really!!!!! Plz plz plz help me, Neha ko bhi science samjh me nahi aata warna me usse samjh leti aur mujhe tuition nahi jaana. Please help me, Geet said joining her hand in front of Maan.

Maan : I m ready to help but please aisa request karna band karo, Ok now open ur books main tumhe aaj se hi thoda padana shuru kar deta hoon, Saying this Maan started to teach Geet but Geet was getting lost in Maan again and again

Maan : Ok, so this is how u can know which chemical will react with other chemical. Saying this Maan looked at Geet but he found her lost. Geet... Geet..., he snapped his fingure in front of his eyes nd brought her back. Tumhe samjh me aaya jo maine bataya.

Geet : Ha

Maan : Accha so tell me what are the properties of strong acid????

Geet : Umm...aaa, Seeing this Maan got angry

Maan : Common Geet, yeh kitna easy question hai, why r u not concentrating on what I m teaching u???? For god sake Geet yeh main apne liye nahi kar raha hoon. Seeing Maan angry Geet got scared nd she shuddered.

Geet : I.. m.. sorry, she said while keeping her eyes down. Seeing Geet getting scared Maan tried to cool down himself, he realized a deep breath

Maan : Phew.. see Geet yeh main apne liye nahi kar raha hoon, mujhe isse kuch benefit nahi hone wala hai, I m doing this for u, so that u can score good marks in ur exam, Maan tried to make her understand.

Geet : I know, nd I m sorry for not paying attention, it won't happen again I promise,Geet pinched her throat, seeing Geet innocence Maan smiled a little.

Maan (st) : Koi isse zyada der tak gussa reh hi nahi sakta, iska innocent face dekh kar.

Maan : Hmm... nd I m sorry for over reacting, I don't like when I m saying something nd other is not paying attention to it , nd bcoz of that I shouted at u.

Geet : No, Its fine, galati bhi toh meri hi thi na, I was not paying attention when u were teaching me.

Maan : Ok lets forget all that, nd start a new, I m again going to teach u but this time u have to pay attention, Samjhi.

Geet : Ha.

Nd they again start studying nd this time Geet payed full attention on what Maan was saying, nd whenever Geet comes up with some doubt Maan explained her properly.

Maan : Ok, I think its enough for a day, agar zyada padne jaugi toh jo yaad hai woh bhi bhul jaogi.

Geet : Thanks Maan, U r a really good teacher, tumne mere doubts kitni asani se aur acche se clear kar diye, Itne acche se toh kabhi Pooja mam ne mujhe nahi padaya, once again Maan thank u soo much.

Maan : Its absolutely fine Geet, but I think aaj hum practice nahi kar payenge, Maan said looking at his watch, Bohot late ho gaya hai tumhe bhi ghar jana chahiye

Geet : Yeah, I think so, but kal se hum practice aur padai saath me karenge, aur tum mujhe padhao ge, thik hai???

Maan : Thik hai. But abhi tum jao tumhare parents tumhari chinta kar rahe honge.

Geet : Ok, Bye

Maan : Bye, saying this they made their way to home nd was thinking about each other on the way.

Geet (st) : OMG, aaj maine Maan ke saath padha, babaji thank u so much, but maine usse gussa bhi dila diya tha, but still he behaved very nicely with me, but Maan ne mujhe daanta bhi, lekin Geet galati bhi toh teri thi na, Maan tujhe padha rahe the but tu hi unke khayalo me kho gayi, but phir bhi jo bhi ho hum dono ne ek dusre ke saath bohot time spend kiya, nd now I m sure main science me acche marks score karungi.

Maan (st) : Jhalli hai ek number ki, khud se hi pata nahi kitni baate kar sakti hai, aur jab maine usse uske babaji se shikayat karte hue dikha toh maine khud ko kaise ruka hai uske paas jaane se yeh main hi jaanta hoon, aur jab ussne bataya that she is facing problem in science, how can I sit idle, nd now I m going to teach her chemistry too, but aaj jab maine usse padhaya pata nahi kaunse dreamland me kho gayi thi, aur main uss par gussa ho gaya, mujhe aise chillana nahi chahiye tha but kya karoon, jab mujhe gussa aata hai I m not able to control myself nd I burst on her, but seeing her crying nd scary face I regretted my anger but thank god woh gussa nahi hui nd she too understand my situation, nd from tomorrow we r going to spend more time with each other.

Precap

Geet sad😭😭





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Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haha geet want to murder niki 4 drooling maan
neha is a gud friend
trying 2 make geet understand
in this age her attrction is not love..n if not reciprocated she will be hurt
geet talking 2 babaji
n maan helping her in chemistry..
now both will spend more time
ossum part..
Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing part
geet wants to murder neha for drooling on her maan
maan helping geet in studying chemistry and geet lost in maan but after getting scolding from maan starts study sincerly
first I also used to love chemistry a lot but in 11th & 12th all love gone somewhere
Edited by preeti555 - 11 years ago

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