Teri Deewani- a cute love story.... updated part 35 and epi on pg 163 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: vrinda22

hearty congrats for ur first work..

loved the cs..
looking forward more works from you


thank u di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rose.Mahek22

Congozz on starting the work sweets...


Nice chrs...

Looking forward for its start ...

Much love Rose😉


thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i will try my best😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Banner Credit goes to Vrinda di. Thank u sooo much di🤗



Part 1


Geet was practicing her song which she has sing for annual day as she was singing she saw a figure moving through the corridor, she couldn't see him properly but she stopped abruptly nd went behind to see who was that person but as she reached till door no one was present there.

Geet : Tu bhi na geet kuch bhi dekhti rehti hai. How someone can be here all will be busy in their practice. Just stop all this nd start practicing if anything goes wrong then that Hitler will be ready to eat u alive without any salt or pepper, so u better concentrate on ur work. Samjhi

She was going to sing but poen came nd inform her that princi is calling.

Geet : Ab kya chahiye isse koi mujhe aache se practice bhi nahi karne deta. Saying this geet started moving towards Principal's cabin but at the same time someone dashed into her nd she was going to lose her balance but she stabled herself , she looked upwards to see whom she dashed into but all she could see was his eyes, he was saying something but nothing registered in her mind

Guy : Hey Miss !! R u Ok?? I m sorry for wat happened. Saying this he started to move nd geet came back to he sense nd without wasting a sec she started to move towards principal cabin.

Knock Knock

Purvaa : Come in

Geet : Mam u called me.

Purvaa : Yes Geet. Is everything ready I don't want any mistake as u r in charge as well as going to perform in the show.

Geet : Yes mam everything is perfect.

Purvaa : Ok go now nd mind it if any mistake happens I m going to catch hold of u.

Geet : Yes mam

Geet rushed out from her office nd directly went to the class were her BF was practicing for the annual day.

Geet : Neha!!! Neha!!! Jaldi idhar aa

Neha went to geet nd asked her what happened

Geet : I think I m in love

Neha : WHAT!!!!!! GEET R U OUT OF UR MIND!!!!!!

Geet : Dheere bol me behari nahi hoon. But main kya karoon yaar jab usse dekha toh aur kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha , it was like kewal hum dono hi hai wahan par.

Neha : Geet tu pagal ho gayi hai. Thodi der ruk ja fir choti bhi hone hi wali hai fir hum saath me ghar jayenge. Thik hai.

Geet : Main pagal nahi hui hoon samjhi tu aur sun agar tune iske baare me kisi ko bataya na toh dekh lena. Geet warned her.

Neha : Main pagal hoon joh mujhe tere haathoon se marna hai.

After sometime when all were going home geet dragged Neha with her. They were walking when geet saw the same guy whom she think she fall in love.

Geet : Neha woh dekh , yeh wahi ladka hai

Neha : Kon ladka geet ???

Geet : Are woh dekhna saamne , the guy at the shop.

Neha looked there nd she was shocked to see that guy her eyes went wide open nd her mouth touched the ground.

Neha : Geet r u sure, yeh wohi ladka hai

Geet : 110 % yaar. Tu aisa kyu reaction de rahi hai ?????

Neha : Tujhe pyaar bhi karna tha toh issi ladke se

Geet : Kyu kya hua???
Neha : Yeh koi aisa waisa ladka nahi hai

Geet : Ha mujhe pata hai. Yeh tu mera prince charming hai

Neha : Abey Prince Charming ki bacchi, Yeh humari principal yaani ki Puri ( Purvaa ) ka bhai hai.

Geet looked at her shocked.

Geet : Hey Babaji aapko mujhe pyaar kar wana hi tha toh woh bhi uss Puri ke bhai se, isse kisi aur ka bhai nahi bana sakte the kya?????

Neha : Ab chal yaha se band kar apni pagal panti.

Neha dragged geet with her

Geet : Oye tu toh usse jaanti hogi na. Puri toh teri neighbor ha aur woh uska bhai.

Neha : Nahi main usse nahi janti bas e do baar dekha hai but kuch nahi pata uske baare me.

Geet : Plz yaar aisa mat bol.

Neha : Geet tu pagal ho gayi hai. Yeh tera koi pyaar vyaar nahi hai. Bas Crush hai joh tujhe girly teenage harmones ki wajah se ho rahe hai. Chal ab

Geet : Yeh koi crush wrush nahi hai samjhi. Geet got angry

Neha : Thik hai meri maa. Accha sun maine kahin par padha hai ki agar aapka crush 4 months se zyada raha that means u r in love. Toh tere upar try karke dekhe

Geet : Main kya tujhe TRY ME machine dikhti hoon , joh mere upar apne logics try karna chati hai . Jaa tu yahan se main akele ja rahi hoon ghar.

Neha : Arey Geet sun toh sahi . Accha baba I m sorry

Geet stopped nd turn to her

Geet : Pehle promise kar tu mera mazak nahi udayegi

Neha : Thik hai promise

Geet : aur meri help karegi uss Puri ke bhai ke baare me pata lagane me

Neha : Dekh Geet yeh zyada ho raha hai

Geet showed her eyes

Neha : Thik hai but zyada nahi sirf thode se idea dungi. Thik hai.

Geet gets happy nd hugged her tightly

Geet : I love u love u love u sooo much. Tujhe pata hai

Neha : Ha mujhe pata hai chal ab

Geet : Accha bata kya idea hai.

Geet asked excitedly Neha looked her at shock

Neha : Tu pagal ho gayi abhi ke abhi kahan se idea lau.

Geet : Dekh tune kaha tha tu meri help karegi

Neha : Ha toh but abhi itni jaldi kya hai

Geet : Neha dekh main ro dungi. She made a crying face

Neha : Abhi toh mujhe FB ke alwa kuch aur nahi samjh aa raha hai. Aaj kal har koi uspe toh hote hi hai. Why don't u try it uske baare me kuch pata chale

Geet : Ha yeh accha hai. Chal main jaati hoon search karne. Bye. nd she run away

Neha : GEET !!!!! GEET !!!!!!!! bhaag gayi , dekh lungi main tujhe

Geet's home

Geet : Wah aaj ka din bhi accha hai maa bhi ghar par nahi hai aur papa bhi out of station hai

Geet opened her laptop nd opened her FB account

Geet : Kya likh kar search karoon!!!! Ha Puri ke friend list me dekhti hoon

Geet typed Purvaa Sharma in search box nd started to find her account after sometime she found her account

Geet : Finally mujhe uska account mil gaya ab main Prince Charming ka account dhundti hoon

After searching for few min.

Geet : Mil gaya Maan Singh Khurana. Wah kya naam hai yaar iska ek dum hero types, aur dekhne me kitna handsome or dashing hai yaar, mera naam uske saath kaisa lagega Geet Maan Singh Khurana. Wow kitna perfect match jata hai.

She called Neha

Neha : Ha Geet bol

Geet : Uska naam Maan Singh Kurana hai

Neha : Kiska?? Accha uska ha toh

Geet : Ha toh!!!!!!! abey dekhna humara naam saath me kitna accha lagta hai Geet Maan , Maan Geet, Soch shaadi ke baad mera naam Geet Maan Singh Khurana hoga

Neha : Geet tu pagal ho gayi hia . Abhi se shaadi ke baare me soch rahi hai

Geet : Ha ho gayi hoon pagal usske liye, accha sun main na usse FB pe Friend request send karna ka soch rahi hoon
Neha : Tu pagal hai, agar Puri ne galti se bhi dekh liya na toh tu mari

Geet : Arey ha maine iske baar me socha hi nahi. Koi baat nahi me ek fake acc. bana lungi

Neha : Geet dekh tu had se aage badh rahi hai

Geet : Aisa hai kya????

Neha : Ha

Geet : Thik hai main usse friend request send nahi karungi but uska acc. toh check kar sakti hoon na. U know humare kitne saare likes milte hai

Geet went n blabbering nd Neha shook her head on her crazy friend.

Precap

Maaneet official meeting




I never thought i will write something but i did nd i m very excited as well as nervous about it.

P.S : I knew that writing is not an easy task but didn't thought it will be this much difficult to write a scene but all the writers who r doing this a BIG salute from me to all of u. U all r doing a fab job


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Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
congrats dear
your first new story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Nice start...

Geet toh poori ki poori pagal hain...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
👍🏼
good start...
I loved how geet directly joined their names.. Geet Maan Singh Khurana..😆
Bahut fastforward hai..😉😆
I can already imagin geet proposing and a shocked maan staring at her..🤣
Waiting for next..continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Lovely start.. Geet is so bindaas..
love at first sight!! wow!!
congrats for the new role.. u r going to rock..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
thats superb
geet is full of life
so bubbly n charming
haha a filmy meeting of hero heroin
but geet is full on ladoo over him
knowing from neha he is princi's bro too
she is still crazy on him
neha trying 2 knock some sense in her saying as crush
but who caan stop this crazy geet..
she has find his fb n stalking him..
superb update
n a very gud start
im loving this carefree geet..

if u have given some prologue we would have guessed some base of story..but u said it as simple love story..so u can give it that name itself..a cute love story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for ur first writing Wow geet to puri pagal ho gayi hai maan ke liye i loved it

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