THE LOCKET (20) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED

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Shruti_Goyal

@Shruti_Goyal

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#911

sorry for not cmntng regularfacing sm prblm...
cmng to the updates..
luved all the parts..megha meeting her parents and sister...brij part was fully action-packed👏actually i wanted evry person to try their hand on that ******😡...chalo ant bhala to sab bhala😃..chandan and poonam's mu got cleared too..evrything is just perfect...dev teases maan about wedding thru geet😆..i thnk ye v dev ki planning hogi geet ko manali na jane dene me..i hope there wl b a srprse w8ng for him😉
amazing update

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dhanyabinu

@dhanyabinu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#912

lovely teaser. is some plan by dev so that maneet can spent some time alone

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#913

Happpyyy Birthdddaaayyy Lakshhuu 🤗

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mhappy

@mhappy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#914

Very very nice part

Chandan and poonam part was very nice

I love all ur couples in this story😃

dev teasing maan and geet

daadi is really full of life😃

maaneet moments were awesome

one said and the other replied line was so beautiful and dreamy

maan giving geet the first wedding card

😳😳😳

Yeah I want more and more of maaneet romance

I have said it earlier u write it so well make it so dreamy , loveful and passionate that I want to read it again and again 😳😳😳😳😳😳

want more of maaneet romance and their togetherness

Enjoy your vacation dear

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#915

wow... thats so sweet of u avi... thanks a lot dear...🤗

different type of trip///wo kya hotha hain 😈😈 bolo na avi...

will be eagerly waiting for the update...

till that enjoy ur holiday... and bday wishes to my jeej😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#916

wasnt she going with him
then what happened
but she is there right
it seems to be so
awww what beautiful song
and for geet and laks di too

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#917

wow lovely emotional cute update.. te way family ki reunion was lovely emotioanal.. te way dadi teasing her grandson whose face was worth watch,wow naughty dadi.. te way my maaneet ki happiness thinking only 14 days to became one soul was lovely emotional.. te way my maan giving te card and geet ki happiness seeing geet weds my maan and te way they hug was lovely emotional touching..i love te update

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#918

yeh wahdiyaan...yeh fizayen... bularahii hai...tumhe...!! is geet somewhere there...teasing him...hiding from him...!! nice teaser...

Edited by kavya.sravya - 11 years ago

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#919

Hi Avi,

How do you bring these emotions out, omg poonam and chandan are so full of expectations of meeting their daughter and I hope she accepts them. Prevent their relationship will improve due to this daughter...

Very nicely portrayed ...

Thnx