THE LOCKET (20) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 94

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Posted: 11 years ago
Tujhse Naraaz nahi Zindagi ... A beautiful rendition in remembrance of your mother Ji🤗👏
This song is soo beautiful Ji, I have never understood its meanings until recently when I was listening to it in the same context as it was sung in... The thoughts of a mother... A mother standing at the periphery of life and looking on in bemusement at her child whose innocence raises unanswerable answers and she with empathy realises that as her child will grow up and on they will go through the same and know that you pay the price of even a smile... but this melancholy in the cocoon of her love becomes a lullaby for us all...

I mentioned above of what this song means to me because you have done just exactly that Avi ... given the daughters in your story that ideal- Figure who can turn those songs of their sorrow into lullaby ... the beauty of your story is that you have made all these people One.. One-family.. bound with blood, love and most of all humanity! I gave humanity a bigger value than love because I know out of anyone here you would understand me the most by that... since through out the sequence of your story.. the foundation to all forms of love has been the basic Insaaniyat..sympathy towards others..Be it be Geet towards Maithalima, Kabir towards Geet (Brij incident), Kiran and Raj towards Megha.. Maan and Dev with Megha.. are all small examples here I have picked out.. I can go on and on Ji

muskaraaye toh muskaraane ke karz utaarne honge...
muskaroun kabhi toh lagta hai Jaise hothoun pe karz rakha hai

These verses are antagonised in your story now Ji...Poonam and Chandan Thakur have paid the price of their Tears and now smiles are the only companions of their lips... Beautiful thought I thought😆

Ok... so I am still under the dazed and happy-shappy family reunion effect of ch.83 and 84 so I don't think I can fully justify how I liked the previous three chapters to them.. but Haan I don't have words to admit without besharmi in them but I cannot look at Laddus in the same way😆☺️... and this is actually traumatising 🤣 because I don't want to imagine what lays ahead in a girl's future love life...!! I am having a heart thuddd thudd waala attack for even thinking on these lines!! 🤪

Lastly... I am soo khafaa with IF!! stupid thing froze on me twice while writing to you this very comment!! once last week then once yesterday, hence the delay... but now I finally done it..!!

I just read the previous comments to where mine will be on this page.. and kinda understood that you are on a break...so enjoy the break ji with your hubby and family.. and when you are back.. pm me the next set of password for ch85.. I want to read and be ready for the finale Live..on the day ..I think there is gonna be competition to comment first hahaa.. I am in the race already 😆😳

Mishti Love 😳🤗 esp for ch84 and your personal note at the end... I can't say much else...



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Posted: 11 years ago
Is anyone in the mood for an update?
😆
I am back
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Is anyone in the mood for an update?

😆
I am back


Meee...i am so greedy 😆...missed u...hope u had wonderful time... a mishti welcome back for you 🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--


Meee...i am so greedy 😆...missed u...hope u had wonderful time... a mishti welcome back for you 🤗


Welcome Images, Scraps and Comments for your profiles

Thank you darling..🤗
Perfect weather for it too..😃
At last spring has sprung in New York😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
replies begin on pg 142
Chapter 89: Baby I love you

Blog update. PLEASE do not share passwords. The whole reason for going through the headache of the blog and password protected updates is to make the silent readers participate in the forum.

The less people that participate, the more writers we lose and the less Maaneet stories we get. Silent readers please stop taking writers for granted. I know for a fact that most writers are so upset with the less comments and likes that most are not going to just finish their story and not write more. That will be a loss for us all.


Links will be sent to those who have commented regularly and on the last chapter.
If you have not got the PM check that you commented on the last chapter first. If not please comment first, then and only then PM me.
So many of newbie and groupbie messages are not going through because your mailbox is full. Please delete some messages before sending me a PM.
NOTE: FOR THOSE STARTING THIS STORY LATE
I do expect a comment at least for every thread or so if not for each chapter. You may PM me if you are not able to post the comment. There are romantic parts further on which are password protected. I will not be giving passwords if I don't find comments from you.
SILENT READERS, please skip this story

A/N: Please leave me some of your words and comments here and on the discussion thread. I appreciate it.
Thanks Mari for proofing all my work

Thanks to Lakshmi for the banner

Song by Barry Manilow

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Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It seems like a lifetime😛
Res for don't know how many


Jaadu ki jhappi to Avi n Maari
❤️ 🤗
Edited by heytal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Res for don't know how many


Jaadu ki jhappi to Avi n Maari
❤️🤗



🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

It seems like a lifetime😛

Res for don't know how many


Jaadu ki jhappi to Avi n Maari
❤️ 🤗

Aap yu'un faslo se
guzarte rahe
dil pe kadmo ki aawaaz
aati rahi
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Aap yu'un faslo se
guzarte rahe
dil pe kadmo ki aawaaz
aati rahi
🤗


Main khud hi kho gayi hoon ek zalzale mein
kadmo ke nishaan bhi mit rahe hain😳

(Please don't laugh at my amateur shayri🤔😆)

Missing u guys
😊

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