THE LOCKET (20) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

koi aur site se nahi try kar sakthi?

Tujh se baat ki toh ho gaya😃

Check pm in a few minutes..😃

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Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: dqno1

Tujh se baat ki toh ho gaya😃

Check pm in a few minutes..😃

tum meri aadat bigaad rahi ho

and i love being spoiled😆

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#843

Hello Avi... 😃 I'm going to complete my comment on this chapter this time.

Loved loved loved this song and the way you gave new meaning to it. Kailash Kher's voice is so soul touching and heart warming that it adds magic to the lyrics... and you emphasized each word , stanza in a contemplative and meaningful manner for each of the couple be it MG, CP or DN ... ❤️ Especially I loved the way Chandan's thought of Poonam being Pak/pavitra was followed by the stanza that connected the sentiment beautifully. It truly showed his feelings of being unburdened of his guilt by the forgiveness by Poonam. 👏

Dev and his excitement, playfulness and his love for his shrew well depicted in his actions... he wanted to bribe the pandit that too after declaring it in front of his jassoos Daadi 🤣. Loved his expression of Joy "Dilwale dulhania le jayege" at least one khurana brother could express it all in front of others. 😉

The last paragraph about MG 😳 "I was yours the first time I saw you; one said. I will be yours until the last breath I take; the other replied..." and " It was our destiny to walk together" 😳

These lines actually sealed all their promises and vows together... indeed now they would be walking together...

Hayee I'm still in Maaneet induced coma . ... all thanks to you 😃 And I said earlier this was "The Locket" Heaven for me...

And I will always crave for more from you Avi... Even if it is after your vacations. 😃

🤗

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#844

A/N: Wondering if you guys want more or whether an epilogue is necessary? Are you guys done now? Can I consider this the end or are you equally mad as me and want more romance, lol?

WHAT A QUESTION

HOW CAN THIS BE THE END

ABHI THODA AUR ROMANCE HO JAYE

BUT A LOVELY UPDATE

DEV WANTED TO TEASE MAAN BUT DADI TURNED THE TABLES ON HIM

AND I LOVED CHANDAN AND POONAM

IT WILL TAKE TIME BUT THEY WILL HEAL TOO AND FIND LOVE

LOVED THE WAY SHE CAME AND CARED FOR HIM

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divya22

@divya22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#845

Lovely part ..

Finally sab khatam n shaddi ki date bhi fix ho gayi...

Really dev loves to trouble his bro..

N nw even poonams n chandans relationship is taking a new shape...

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Deelight

@Deelight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#846

nyc update..missed maneet
how can u even think one can evr get ovr dis FF so easily...i want more of their romance n epilogue to banta hi hai.. jz imagine itna acha FF bina epilogue ke kitna adhura lagega...😒 so i guess epilogue ke liye 10 to 15 parts challenga.. if u want u can add more to it...bt loadzzz n loadzzz of Maneet n DevIstar tooo n hw cld i fagt kabirmegha.. uff luv yor FF... waitin fa d nxt.. update sooon! 😊

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swatikgupta

@swatikgupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#847

lovely part. finally everything is happy happy. song was one of my favourite . but u send me 2 pm for part 88. why???? and what about part 89????

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#848

gr8 part.

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: swatikgupta
lovely part. finally everything is happy happy. song was one of my favourite . but u send me 2 pm for part 88. why???? and what about part 89????

I usually have an extra one, which I am working on.

It will be ready next week

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bbindu

@bbindu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#850

wonderful happy update! very happy for all the family reunions and how the misunderstanding betweeen chandan and Poonam got solved. Dev teasing Maneet us usual and Daddi being naughty again. finally, they are getting married in 14 days.

And want more updates with romace, its not done yet. Will be waiting for next part.