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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely part dear.. Geet has also started to feel something something.. :)
continue soon...
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maan ne kya inzam kia hei,,,saare geet ke frends bula lia,,,
meera made geet think about hr feelings 4 maan,,,
maan to pehle hi lattu hei,,,ab geet ki turn,,,😉
babie like s nt wrking,,,,lov dis stry,,,,👍🏼
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hi nabie ,laks priya mona sona dona mauaa ,,,,
kaise ho sab,,??missd u all ,,,vil cm 2nite,,,,cya,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago


my friends ,, lakshu,priya,lily,mauaa,dona,indu,rashmi,sona n
mona...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
babbie.. hw r u darling.. hw ws yr day? dont u hv a vacation? we dnt have btw...😭😭😭
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

im present here already😆

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Originally posted by: mauaa

babbie.. hw r u darling.. hw ws yr day? dont u hv a vacation? we dnt have btw...😭😭😭


Mauaa...
nahi he ,,😲
new session ..🥱
kiddo kal erni jaldi ku chali gai..??😲
mere net ne mujhe bada rula rakha hei..😭😭
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 45


She was in kitchen nd trying to divert her mind ,, made tea for her and poured juice in a pitcher and brought in dining hall ,, Maan was already there .

Dadima: Geet aap kahan thi ?

Geet fumbled : wo ,, mai ,, mai kitchen mei thi Dadima ,, juice lane gai thi ,, BF serve karen ?

Dadima: haan beta badi bhook lagi hei .

Geet nd Meera served to all ,, Geet served cheese paratha to Maan nd he gave her s naughty look for d corner of his eyes then started eating silently ,, Arjun, Geet and Dadima loved parathas and enjoyed their heavy BF ,, Annie, meera nd Prem had their sandwiches ,, Maan was in trouble , d chilly in cheese stuff was burning his mouth and he was sipping juice to ease d burn ,,, Geet sensed his plight and got up .

Geet: mai abhi aai ..

She went in kitchen and brought a bowl of creamy pasta ,, she served in Maan's plate silently , without giving him a look * he gave her a look and understood that she made it in advance knowing that he couldn't eat chilly ,,, badmaash hei ,, pahale chilli khila di ab pasta de rahi hei ,, but he was very happy that she cared for him ,, he thanked her slowly .

Annie: aree Geet tumne pasta bhi banaya hei ,, give me some bites dear , i like pasta.

Geet: yeah sure .

Geet served her too nd kept remaining near Maan ,, pasta was really very tasty ,, all took their fav BF nd then decided to roam in d nearby markets * Geet, Meera and Annie arranged d kitchen * Maan planned lunch outside ,, they came in local farmer mrkt and purchased small-small things ,, it was a big fun ,, then took their lunch and came back,, at eve they had to move back SF * Maan noticed that Geet was quiet after their morning moments ,,, he was cherishing that moment from morning but he didn't like her quietness nd thought that it was all bcoz of him ,, he scolded himself for spoiling her mood * both looked at each other now n then but averted their eyes when came in direct eye lock ,, they spoke very lil nd most of d time Geet was with Meera or Dadima ,, Maan remained behind of all , mostly spending time on his phone but in between his eyes wr following Geet ,, he didn't like her quietness ,, he liked a chirpy and fun loving Geet ,, he cursed himself ,, why i did that stupidity ,, see , she is upset now . He decided to talk her to make her mood .

On d other side Geet was rumbling with these new budding feelings in her heart ,, Meera's words wr hitting her mind and d feelings which she felt in Maan's proximity bemused her ,, she never felt this thing nd changes in her then why now ? Is this love ? Love for Maan ,, No ,, it can't be ,,, it' all my foolishness ,, ye meera bhi na kuch bhi bakwaas kerti hei ,, she smacked her head inwardly ,, no i won't think about it ,, i've to concentrate on other things ,, now sem is going to start and think about study and work only ,, huhh,, i proved that an idle mind is devil's workshop * she tried to rebuff all these thinking from her mind but when her eyes met with him she felt d same uneasiness in her and forced her to look at him again nd again ,, she scold many times to her but failed and this niggling made her quiet all d day...

Tiffani

Butterflies in my stomach,
Soaring up high,
The way you make me feel,
I could never deny.

When you smile at me
It brightens up my day,
But when I look at you,
You seem to turn away.

I try to reach to you,
My scream is loud yet quiet.
I'm floating on a cloud,
Then suddenly its night.

Realization shows me something,
You will never see,
That day by day your love
Is what I need to breathe.

After coming back from mrkt all wr taking lil rest in their room ,,, Dadima was clearing d accounts of last few months with d care taker .

your pretty face
Your cute voice
leaves me to writing this
you beat the beauty of heaven
nothing makes it even
your kindness is too much for hell
you're too much of an angeL
what a smIle
the whole world stops & stares for more than a mile
you light my world
it's too much to afford
Carve your name to my heart
a girl that shot me faster than a dart

one of my fav pics.. @Drashti Shah Dhami

Geet was standing in a lone corner of d big lawn taking rest against a tree trunk , lost in her thought ,, she was unaware that Maan was watching her from far ,, she was looking an angle in her white dress nd open heir ,, some curls played with her cheek when a blow of zephyr touched them ,,he sighed nd then took out his phone from his pocket ,, captured that divine beauty in that ,, he caressed her finger on d screen ,, touched her ever feature with a sweet smile ,, kept d phone back then came close to her ,, he silently stood behind her ,, drank her serene beauty which was glowing in coppery sunlight .. Geet ,,, she turned with a jerk ,, watching sun set ,, hum ? She gave a weak smile in return ,,, Geet don't u like this outing ? ,, i ilke it Maan ,, why r u asking this ?

Maan: then why r u this much quiet ? i hoped for a cheerful Geet with her friends but i didn't get that .

Geet: no Maan , plzz don't think like that ,, i love this place nd this outing very much ,, thanku so much for calling Meera and Prem here ,, u made my weekend very special nd joyful .

Maan: then where u lost ur smile ? i'm searching that from whole day nd i don't want to go back without ur smile .

Geet smiled to fulfil his desire : mai khush hoon Maan .

Maan: fir ye princess esse chup ku khadi ho ,, akele ?

Geet: bas esse hi ,, nd how do u know i'm here ?

Maan: i saw u . Geet tell me honestly ,, r u happy ?

Geet: yeah ,, Maan , why do u think so much about my happiness ?

Maan: bcoz u also thing about me and Dadima.

Geet: when ?

Maan: always .

Geet: no

Maan: no ? OK , then why did u make Pasta in BF ?

Geet: wo ,, wo awyee.. Meera was making Prem fav ,, nd i remembered that u won't like Parathas so i made ur fav pasta,, simple .

Maan: why Meera made Prem's fav ?

Geet: O come on , u didn't realize they r in love ? U r ..

She stopped herself thinking what she was going to blurt ... u r experienced .

Maan: really!!

Geet: yeah.

Maan: do u believe in love ?( he was serious )

Geet looked at him ,, their eyes met ,, a gush of emotions hit their hearts ,, he spoke in a husky tone which shivered her .. bolo na Geet ,do u believe in love ?

Geet: I don't know ,, i don't know anything about love .

She replied still looking at him ,, she felt bad that she hurt him talking about love ,, he was heartbroken and faced betrayal that's why he was asking this Q.

Geet: i'm sorry , if i hurt u .

Maan placed his finger on her lips nd nodded in a no ,, sshhh ,, no, never ,, u can't hurt anybody .

She smiled shyly controlling her uneasiness with his touch ,, he removed his finger at once sensing what he was doing again ,,, chalen , have to pack * she nodded nd both came in feeling better after a restless day ,, Maan was relaxed that she was not upset bcoz of his mrng action nd now she is normal .


Precap ---Geet in outhouse ... 😊

Part - 46



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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Mauaa...
nahi he ,,😲
new session ..🥱
kiddo kal erni jaldi ku chali gai..??😲
mere net ne mujhe bada rula rakha hei..😭😭


poochooo mat itni exhost ho chuki thi.. me 9-30 ki soo gayi thi pata hai.. sidhi morning me uthi hoo

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