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Posted: 11 years ago


Hii donaa.. kitne dino baad mili

mai bilkul thik hu ..tum kasi ho??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites



Hii donaa.. kitne dino baad mili

mai bilkul thik hu ..tum kasi ho??


ha bohut dino baad...kal tum aayi bt mere net ne mujhe bech raste chod diya😭
main achhi hu ...di abhi kaisi hai????

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Hiii lakshu babbie lily sona dona priya mauaa chavi
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Hiii lakshu babbie lily sona dona priya mauaa chavi


hi again mona😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )


Part 133


The next morning Mohan and Jagan thought to leave back to Delhi. They were not sure if they should keep Geet along with them but when Alka and SD comforted that they will take care of her, Mohan didn't feel like to think second time. But he do wants to talk with Yash, for once before leaving her daughter alone there. Though he knew, she would have everyone to have support but still, a father heart was not convinced that he was to leave his child alone in a family whose head doesn't like her.

"Savitri Deviji, I want to meet Yash Sir, for once before leaving. I want to say him thanks that he saved my child's life. Please" He requested when SD refused his wish saying it was not necessary. But in heart she was scared thinking Yash's reaction. Seemed understanding her fear Mohan said, "I understand what fear you have Savitri Ji, but believe me, my regard is much higher for him against his any harsh words he can say to me. Whatever happened or happening is not hidden from me. But still I've no complain or fear, otherwise I wouldn't have been given my daughter in this home. And I also have trust on my Geet. But without obligation leaving would not be any favourable. Please, let me meet him once"

SD couldn't deny. She went to Yash and told about about Mohan. Yash called him inside.

Mohan was not sure where to start, what to say, how to express his regard. He was feeling like standing before a huge mountain, where his eyes were not able to reach to the highest of front. "Yash Sir, thank you for doing this much for my daughter. You saved her life and I cannot forget this debt of you in my lifetime" He said. He paused for some time, waiting for any response back. But when didn't get any, he furthered. "Today, I'm going back to Delhi. I am leaving my child in your shelter keeping faith that in your shadow, she will be safe. Since today, when I'll not be with her, she will have you only replacing me and I hope, you'll also consider her your daughter. Please forgive her fault if any, she does mistakenly". Mohan again waited for his reply but Yash was silent. "That's only I wanted to say. I should leave now" Upset Mohan thought to leave.

"Do you really think Mohan that I will do it?"

Mohan steps paused. He turned to Yash who was still looking in a file, sitting on chair behind huge desk. Mohan smiled, "you've done much more of it Sir and also doing what couldn't have been done by me"

Yash looked him. Somewhere he'd not understood the meaning of these words. But when studied Mohans' face, he found there satisfaction. Perhaps knowing the expression of questioning eyes, Mohan himself answered. "You've gifted her an unblemished life Sir, which had been ruined by her own society. Hadn't been you to give me job in Delhi, she wouldn't have been able to see today's happiness. She was no one to you. If you had wanted, would've left us in that village with her bad luck. But you thought for us, even though you wanted to keep Maan away from us, but, this can be considered as a father weakness. Sir, when today I said you have replaced my place in her life, it's not wrong. You are her father. Or if I call you her God Father, this will not be wrong. I'm leaving my alone child with you, knowing that, you'll protect her from all upcoming ill-fortune, the same you've been doing. This time you can mark me being selfish, but for Geet, I can do anything, the same you're doing everything for your Maan" His throat choked. "I think, i should leave now. namaste" He greeted and left the room before yash could know. After some times, he left. Maan went to drop them airport.

##

When few hours passed, Geet came to find Maan if he was back. She wanted to remind him about their last night talk. "Dadima is Maan back? I am trying his phone but he's not taking?"

"Yes Beta, he is back. But right now where could be found, have no idea. I've not seen him from hours"

"He is back? Why didn't he meet me?" Geet gritted her teeth thinking he is running away from the promise she had taken. "I'll not leave him" She went in his room to see, if he was there but the place was empty. "Where is he?" She turned to leave when two arms grabbed her from waist and rested chin on her shoulder. She got startle. "Maan! You scared me"

"Really?" He whispered in her ears.

"Yes you did. Now leave me" she tried to remove his hold. "By the way, where were you? You know how much times I called for you? Why didn't you meet me after coming back? And how was Baba. Was the departure on right time?"

"Yes madam, plane was on time and Papa was also fine. You don't need to worry about him. By the way, there is another person also, who always wait for your attention toward him. But you, don't even care for him"

"Really? And who's it?"

"Me" Maan tightened his arms around her shoulder, caressing his cheek over hers.

"And when did I ignored you?" She smiled enjoying his closeness.

"Every time"

She turned to look him in awe. "How can you blame me Maan? When did I ignored you tell me?" she asked in anger. Maan smiled. He pulled her closer showering his teasing gaze over her, "Why? Don't you always keep thinking about this family? You have worry about whats' Grandpa's favourites, but you never asked what I love to eat?"

"No Maan, it's not true" She became serious. She cupped his face "I just wanted to make everything fine in this family. That's why I always care for Dadaji but never thought to ignore you. I swear. Don't take me wrong, I was just.. "

Suddenly Maan started laughing out loud. He twirled holding his stomach which was paining due to laugh. Confused Geet stopped speaking and started looking him. "Why are you laughing?"

"Oh Geet.. you really thought I was angry on you? " He moved to her still controlling over his laugh. "You really stupid Geet. I was just joking. Do you really think I can complain over your care for my family? How can I?"

"So you was making fun of me?" she was on verge of cry.

"Oh my sweet Angel. Now don't start crying okay" He took her in arms and caressed her face. "I was just joking, hm" he wiped her eyes and cupped her face smiling. She also smiled. "It's okay" Suddenly she started dragging him out. "Now come with me"

"Geet.. where are you taking me?"

"Why? Did you forget you had promised me, you'll talk to dadaji" She stopped.

"I do remember Angel, but this time?"

"What time? Do you need any appointment?"

"No But.. What will I say him why did I come?"

"Maan! You don't need for reason to talk to your own grandfather. Just go and he himself will start talking you. Now stop making excuse and follow me"

She dragged him downstairs and knocked the door.

"Who's it?" yash asked. Geet runs away leaving Maan there..


"It's me, Maan grandpa. I want to tell you something" He walks inside.

##

Geet went to alka who was in kitchen. "Maa, will you make Kheer for me. Yesterday I loved what you made, really. I am feeling like eating more"

Alka smiled. She prepared Kheer for her. Geet served it in two bowls and kept in a tray.

"Where are you going Geet?"

"To give it to Dadaji" she said but Alka was shocked. She stopped her. "Geet you know he doesn't like it"

"Yes I know Maa and also know the reason behind his hatred. Maa, you don't worry, but I want to make everything okay here. Just give me a chance, please"

"Let her go Alka" They heard SD voice who had heard their convo. She was happy that someone from them at least has courage to face yash and she had hope also, Geet can do really miracle. Her faith had grown when she had seen Geet forcing Maan to go to Yash room.

"I know, I have hope that you can bring back happiness in this house Beta. You're really an Angel. My Maan's Angel. God bless you"

Geet was very happy to find support. Her strength had doubled. Happily she walked toward yash's room holding tray.


Precap : Yash gives a gift to Maan


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hii lakshu
guest chale gaye??
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Posted: 11 years ago

hii dona .. again 😆😆

kasi ho
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Posted: 11 years ago
oyyee mona bat kyu nahi kar rahi?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


hii dona .. again 😆😆

kasi ho


again main achhi hu 😆😆
tum kaisi ho 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

oyyee mona bat kyu nahi kar rahi?


mona ek baar ans de kar ms india ban jati hai 😆

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