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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

THANK YOU! 🤗

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: KReyAS
congress fr another story
loved it
realy love maan and khushi bonding and kushi and arnav chraacter
good tht u continue lj
thnx fr pm
cont soon

Thank you for your kind wishes!

And thanks for the review!

Glad that you liked my idea of continuing LJ!😃

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: chavvi16
Happy holi
Damn can't post DFL till later even though done no net at work
Hope you enjoying your holi

Thanks dear! Happy HOLI to you too!😃 🤗

Post DFL review aaraam se! I dont mind!😃

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253
datz awesome
thanx fr d pm

Thank you!😃

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: archa2810
this looks interesting... it was an awesome dose... loved it

Thank you!😃

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

To all my readers,

I have already written half of the next chapter and will write remaining part tomorrow but will not post it till I write down DFL's next chapter! So hang on for atleast three days for the next update!😃😉

Thank you,

Kalpana

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fffan123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Awesome update. Love the ARHI nok-jhok. Looking forward to Khushi-Maan's history and ARHI back story.

One request, can you put a character sketch for the FF.

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: fffan123
Awesome update. Love the ARHI nok-jhok. Looking forward to Khushi-Maan's history and ARHI back story.

One request, can you put a character sketch for the FF.

Thanks for the review!

I will think about putting up Character Sketch but I am not sure about it coz I want the readers to discover about the characters' stories as they read about it in further chapters! For example, Geet's story was revealed in Chapter 1 - 4 and Maan's story is revealed in Chapter 4 - 6, Arhi's story will be revealed in Chapter 9. This is my writing style. The only time I put Character Sketch was in Kahaani Zubaani and that was because I could not incorporate their backstory in the story itself!

I generally let the readers discover the story as they read further. Like in Chapter 1 no one knew whom Geet is running from and where is Maan but later on as Maan narrated his story Geet and the readers came to know about Maan. And like in DFL where Geet's full story was revaled only after Chapter 54! Till then she was your mystery girl! You understand? Also this way I create some mystery about my characters amongst my readers! When Arhi entered the scene I wanted the readers to think "Yeh Khushi kahaa se aayi?" coz Maan does not have any sister and when they see a lattu Arnav they should think "Arre! Yeh kab hua?" I want my readers to be curious as to what is happening and what will happen next!

BTW, if you are asking for CS coz you dont understand from where Arhi came in, that is the problem every reader is facing and that is what I wanted you to be confused about. You will know the backstory of Arhi in next chappy!

And if you are asking CS coz you are curious about the Annie mentioned in the intro, then even CS wont explain her coz she is a mystery that I will not reveal right now!

If after reading the explanation, you still want CS, I will put it up for you! Do reply what you think about my monologue above!😃

Take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. I will reply your mail later! Give me some time to think! Right now my mind is swamped with DFL's next chappy and DP's next chapter's ending scene!

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_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Lovely update !!

i really liked arnav ..he is deewana of khushi running behind her even aftr her constant rejections ..tera peecha naa chodunga soniya (this song perfectly suits him) ..

maan thinking abt geet & her blabbering ..imagining her doing his tie & hugging her ..trying to look extra good when he remembered tht geet maybe coming to office was really cute n lovely ..

missed geet in the update :( ..waiting for nxt one ..cont. soon

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_
Lovely update !!

i really liked arnav ..he is deewana of khushi running behind her even aftr her constant rejections ..tera peecha naa chodunga soniya (this song perfectly suits him) ..

maan thinking abt geet & her blabbering ..imagining her doing his tie & hugging her ..trying to look extra good when he remembered tht geet maybe coming to office was really cute n lovely ..

missed geet in the update :( ..waiting for nxt one ..cont. soon

Thanks for the review!

Hey nice song! Maybe I should use it later on for some scene!

Next chapter will be fully from Geet's point of view as she encounters Khushi, Arnav and Maan (in that order) on her visit to KC with Pinky!

Will try to update in three days! Chapter is almost ready, but I will update only after DFL Chappy is ready as I want to put them up together!😃

Take care,

Kalpana