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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: dqno1

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u r able to read all??? ye lagaa doo?? i thought "struggle " padne mein prob hain... thats y i was looking for other colors

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

i had tried... but i feel tat some wrods are difficult to read .,.. is it??

blue is bright hv 2 struggle to read evrything bt maan in red looks gr8

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

u r able to read all??? ye lagaa doo?? i thought "struggle " padne mein prob hain... thats y i was looking for other colors

if u don't mind my suggestion den go 4 a bit darker blue

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

nimi dark blue se reading is more difficult becoz of the bg

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
nimi dark blue se reading is more difficult becoz of the bg

dark blue is in navy blue lke black or u cn take black it will also go well & let maan b red

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

u r able to read all??? ye lagaa doo?? i thought "struggle " padne mein prob hain... thats y i was looking for other colors

i like the placement on top.

i would make struggle

strength and Maan (capital M)

in red

to emphasize them

also move the words from third line to first and second line

so that on the third line all you have is

my strength, Maan

also it should not be 'about struggle' it should be 'for struggle'

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

Make the writing a bit thicker! It is thin that is why everyone is struggling! Thoda thick karo and har color mein dikhega!

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer
Make the writing a bit thicker! It is thin that is why everyone is struggling! Thoda thick karo and har color mein dikhega!

yay evn dis cn help