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Posted: 11 years ago

I stare ahead as this world
keep spinning
well i am still alive ,but iam
barely breathing



i just can't stop my tear at time of typing hope you all like this
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
MAAN LIKED THE BABY
AND WANTED TO KNOW MORE ABOUT GEET
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 3


THE BIGGEST DISEASE

KNOWN TO MANKIND

IS LONELINESS

Maan just saw his blood and smile sadly , veer want to give company for some time but he don't know that i am so unlucky person , that I don't have any love , affection from any one , from my so called father , family also , and in whole world one person love me care me that become laying in hospital so life less , This Maan sing khurana world most successful business men is most unlucky person who never got any love, affection from any one ...

Just than veer entered in room and say so Msk how is my arrangement or kuch kiya ke kahi ashi hi you know ... beep beep how was that s**t yaar is she beautiful or not just than geet painful , lifeless eyes come in front of him ...her baby ...veer always talking nonsense but his word s**t just cut maan heart some wear , veer again asked , can I call her ...the image of her strip , her dance and maan action , and her feed ...he just feel disgust about himself ...

maan just slap VEER ...how cheep you are, you arriage s*** for me , who never ever touch any girl in his life time why you do it this why veer you calling me friend we are together from childhood you know me from inside and outside , and you done this or like other you also want to make on joke on me or hurt me ...maan just grab veer colar

veer just look in maan eyes and say with angry tone

veer ...yes I am cheep because , I want to my friend live alive not like machine



you tell me Mr msk when last time you laught forgate about laugh just tell me when you smile las time ...yaad hai nahi , nooo because you become machine , money making machine for that so called family of your , because last night me and adi saw you totally breakdown in front of us , BIG business men of world ...Msk

I know my way is wrong but , i don't regret , i can do anything for you ,and lesion carefully , for your happiness I will go to any low or high extend , and don't tell me about this moral and all because in age of 26 it is need of your body ,you never touch any girl because of your moral and your so called family granted you like machine which don't have need , so tell me Mr. khurana , can your family say something about your marriage ... nahi na , or wo bolenge bhi nahi ...they don't want to share their money luxury life with other , even that person is your wife your children , then tell me where is my wrong , when you want become Rama for your family , obedient child who don't want to go against them

I know you don't touch any women but I just want to at list someone for some time share your loneliness , than it is not imp who is that person is she S*** or else , there are so many royal house girl is after your money what you called them who always throwing on you you know this loneliness eating you day by day because I cant see you breakdown ...because of that bloody bloodsucker your so called family , who just forget to invite you in your sister marriage what a joke maan, jab tak wo thi tumare sath , idont have to worry about you , but she also lying in hospital lifeless , , veer say with teary eyes maan just sit on chair like lifeless body

veer just went out from room

image of maan past start to come in front of him

10 year maan ... father father don't send me in hostel , I never ever touch my sibling things , I promise father i..., just tight slap on maan cheek

11 year maan just mummer in fever , papa dard ho raha hai , dar lag raha hai please come please come ...but father naver come just send doc with note ...don't call me for stupid reason , maan suffering from malaria is stupid reason

Mujhe yunhi karke khwaabon se judaa
Jaane kahan chup ke baitha hai khuda
Jaanu na kab hua khud se gumshuda
Kaise jiyun rooh bhi mujhse hai judaa

I don't know where God has hid himself
After separating me from my dreams
I don't know when I got missing from myself
How do I live?Even my soul is separated from me

12 year maan just standing near phone in hostel today is his birthday , he just waiting for call from family ...warden ...maan phone nahi aayega beta ...tear just start to come in little maan eyes ...graduation ceremony msk top in university and his eyes on only gate , just than adi put hand on his shoulder wo nahi aayenge maan , when they don't come from so may years how today ...maans painful eyes just hurting adi ...

yesterday he coming home after two year from Landon brought so many gifts for family and just froze in entrance looking name of weeding his sister wedding ...he just not invited ...he just turn his car and went to veer home , veer say maan you don't go home ...

maan say painful voice , Without invitation how i will attend marriage accha nahi lagata na ...maan brust in tear , what is my fault ...veer

Kyun meri raahein, mujhse pooche ghar kahan hai
Kyun mujhse aake, dastak pooche dar kahan hai
Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin
Dhoondho mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin
Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin
Saansein hai magar kyun zinda main nahin

Why do my path ask me
Where my home is?
Why does knock ask me
Where the door is?

Search me on the paths which have no destination,
I stay there
Heart and heartbeats are at different places
Though I am breathing, why am I not alive?

next evening geet denied to went to call ...muskan have fever


dev just come in her room and held her with her long hair ...geet moan in pain ...but he just put cigar near her wrist geet hissed in pain , and next moment , he just slap geet on her cheek , geet just fail on ground , with noise muskan start to cried loudly and dev just march to her ...geet just froze in her place ...but next moment she come back from shock and just run to save her baby she just push dev out from room don't know from where she got his courage , and took muskan in her hug and try to clam her she just shaking with fear ...and muskan fever just increasing second by second ...



Rait bani haathon se yun beh gayi
Takdeer meri bikhri har jagah
Kaise likhun phir se nayi daastan
Gham ki siyahi dikhti hai kahan
Aahein jo chuni hain meri thi raza
Rehta hoon kyun phir khud se hi khafa
Aisi bhi hui thi mujhse kya khata
Tune jo mujhe di jeenay ki saza

My fate spilled everywhere from my hand
Like sand
How do I write a new tale?
I can't see the ink of grief to write with

Whichever paths I chose was my will
Then why do I remain angry with myself?
What was my mistake?
For which you punished me to live



geet just weep her tear , dev closed door from outside , geet just went near window , with help of sari she come out from window , she have to do this for her child , her life , she just praying that dev don't get it please , please ...she come out from gate and just run to road side and called cab ...


she just say took nearest hospital ...near is KH hospital , she just pay to cab and run inside ...and went to reception area ...she shaking with fear , tear flowing from eyes , sister just took her to DR nanina cabin ...child specialist of KH ...dr just took baby and give water to geet and say clam down ... dr just check that little life which is verge of fainting

Dr nanina become tense ...if anyone with you ...geet just nodded in no

Dr look , you have to come early ... but don't get panic , it is not too late but we have to hospitalized her ...for treatment geet just fail in chair ...hospitalized ...word hammering his mind ...she just mummer i don't have that much money, next moment because of fear losing muskan geet just run to baby with crying taking baby in her hug, wake up baby wake up, I will die baby , I will die , geet crying her heart in hospital

Banday tere maathe pe hain jo kheenchay
Bas chand lakeeron jitna hai jahaan
Aansu mere mujhko mita te hain rahe
Rab ko hukm na mit ta hai yahan
Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin
Dhoondho mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin
Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin
Saansien hai magar kyun zinda main nahin

The world is as big as the lines
On your forehead,human
My tears keep erasing me,
The word of the God does not erase

Search me on the paths which have no destination,
I stay there
Heart and hearbeats are at different places
Though I am breathing,why am I not alive?



Kyun main jaagoon, aur woh sapne bo raha hai
Kyun mera rab yun, aankhien khole so raha hai
Kyun main jaagoon

Just than clam voice with authority tone ...come from door doc start treatment imm. don't think about money and he just went to muskan ...and touch her forehead with care ...geet just froze in her place , that person looking to baby with painful eyes , and give not so happy gaze to geet ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet😭😭😭so maan entered in her life and that dev kya karein uska par koi baath nahi ab maan aagaya hai uska band bajane aur geet ko save karne. she is doing all for the sake of muskaan and now she is in hospital may be that voice will be of maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice ab se maan h na geet k liye...
N geet is there 4 maan..
So no more tension!😃
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
How do Maan knows that Geet bring Muskan to hospital..I hope Geet don;t go back to her house..Maan bring them with him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
kaun hai?maan hai ya koi aur...maan toh hotel mein tha...phir kaise?...shayad unko dekhne k liye ay ahai jo hospitalised hai...aur hospital toh khuranas ka hi hai na...

koi parents itna ganda kaise ho sakte hai maan k jaise...kitna ghatiya family hai...maan ko unko ignore karna chahiye...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update !!!!

Loved the pics of baby ..really cute ..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really painful & heart touching update ..

Hope baby will be fine ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is being ignored by his family
loneliness eating him
he was not informed about his sis marriage too..
veer n adi are gud friends..
thinking about maans happiness..
oh baby is sick..
n geet has to escape to hospital too..
maan came at time ..nice part

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