THE LOCKET (19) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Ameera.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#781

good teaser avi
jhalay maan geet is shy
dont get dissapointed avi we love to read locket😊

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#782

wanted to post here before u see in my thread...

mein late ho gayi...

UR BLUE😃

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

wanted to post here before u see in my thread...

mein late ho gayi...

UR BLUE😃

❤️ it

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Micky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#784

geet ka sharmana

maan ks dil tut gaya

ab manoa maan babu ko

nice teaser

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libros

@libros

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Posted: 11 years ago

#785

awesome teaser😉

waiting for update

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: muskanp
Pay back
😉

My name is Avi😆 not Muskan😆 Mujhe nahi aata yeh sab😳 Even if I write Mari will faint before proofing..🤣

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya
beautiful update avi !! soo much full of love and passion !! even in that moment he waits for her ...cares for her...and giit loosing herself in his love !! all those pent up feelings...longings came to life...!! loved it !! so beautifully written and vm is just awesome...wonderful song selection !! and geet must be feeling all shy shy for her response , may be little overwhelmed too...and maan not able to take her silence...not understanding her state of mind...waiting eagerly avi...
sorry for the late comment...read it in a hurry and ... wanted to read it once more before coming back...thoda saans bhi lena thana😉...but, couldnot get lappy...ofcourse enjoyed whole day in maaneet dream land 😳...wapas ayi tho teaser bhi aagaya...now waiting...waiting...

Thanks Kavya. Priya edited both the audio and video to make a perfect VM. I really liked it too😃

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Part 81 - Beautiful part...
Loved maaneet romance...full of tender love yet passionate...
Shy geet turning into volcano ...lol...
I liked that maan keeping his promise to her and yet still taking next step in their relationship...showing geet how much he loves her and care for her and geet feeling the same in his love that she was ready to break all barriers, vows for him...
Beautifully written Avi..

No doubt she will be so shy to meet his eye...hope that maan will not take wrong meaning of her shyness.

Cont soon

Its always the quiet ones😆

Thanks Madhuri. Glad you liked it.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: LM1991
Avi,
Chapter 80 very cute! Loved Geet's jealousy towards cutie!😉
Chapter 81 very, very hot! I had to drink 2 glasses of cold water after reading th update! 😳Well done!👏

Very teasing teaser! I love it when Geet gives cold shoulder to Maan once in a while!
LM

2 glasses of water😆

You guys are so funny sometimes😆

Thanks LM

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
teaser padne ke baad ... u always make me tempt to read the update soon...😳

maan hurt... ithna bhashan diya maan ne not to be shy and open with him... and agle hi din, is geet ne maan ko avoid kiya??🥱 but ladki hain, sharam aathi hogi... maan ko kaun samjhaye except his mishty!! waiting eagerly

Ladki kya karegi, poor thing.. Thud and delicious se Thudilicious ban gayi hai😆