THE LOCKET (19) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 71

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: varu

HAPPY HOLI DEAR WITH DER SARE LOVE

What a mindblasting update avi ji sooo hot n sooo romantic
kaha chupi thi ye nayiwali aviji ithne din tak. Aaj achanak se ye smoke smoke hot ... kahi holi ka bhang to nahi peeli na


I don't drink😆 Since this is the closest I am going to write them, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks Varu.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bbindu

Just read chapter 79, 80 and 81 now, as I was on vacation.

chapter 79: Kabir's pain was so heart wrenching. Totally felt for him and his confusion about what to do- who to pick : his mother or love as he does not that Brij is not really a "Thakur".
and the bonding between the girls were so great: all three did not really get their mohter love and care during childhoos.
chapter 80: so romantic. Maan decided to tell Geet how he feels for her and let her decide the pace of their relationship. And Geet's list of things she likes about him and Maan asking 'aur" - all very lovely and romantic.
Chapter 81: what can I say, " SO HOT" Their passion for each other and Geet's submission and Maan's control. All I want ot say is "Babaji inki shaddi jaldi karado."
thanks for pms

Thanks Bindu.
Yes, 2 updates left so shadi is almost here.😃
Vacation wo kya hota hai...😆😆 Trying to take a break from work to ask innocently😃
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

wow!! that was really a very hot update!...I loved how geet took the initiation to kiss maan...it was slow , sensuous & beautiful...😳...I loved how maan at the end mumbled to geet's babaji "ab humari shaadi jaldi karwa do"...😆...poor maan ab kab tak apne aapko control kar payega...& the worst is that geet is making it even more hard without her knowledge...😆

😆True.. bholi hai but she will make him crazy. Thanks Sanghita.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

sardi mai garmi ka ehsaas
*wink*
yaha itni thand hai but now i'm feeling hawwwttt ...warmmm

Omggg ...out of control

Thank u Viduji😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Happy Holi to you too Shivi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

This was such a beautiful maan geet eventful update.

That is so sweet of maan that even at such a time he is mindful of his promise to her. That is his deewanagi for her. Glad geet too is loosing her inhibitions slowly under his loveful eyes

Loved all the shayaris...

Like maan I am too waiting for such beautiful nights and beginning of days

That's the only one I am going to write, so glad you enjoyed.😆
Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Me faints.. 😛 Passionate update of Maneet... Both were carried away in their passion.. But for Maan her wish is more imp.. He stopped .. this was kind of exp on his Giit to let go of her all shyness n drown in his love N passion.. Giit so gayee..Hey Babaji.. SR pe kya hoga..?.Maan talking to Geet's Babaji..😆
Just loved it..


Throwing cool water to wake you up..😆
Thanks Teju.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

ek different sa thudilicious update diya avi 👏👏👏its so pure just like maan and giit which touched the heart with its simplicity. the romance which u showed definitely out of reach aur mere paas lafaz hi nahi hai jo mere dil mein hai ab shayad main bhi ek ache sa writer hotha jo sab kuch bayaan kar paathi.


only i can say that its one of the best update with pure and heart touching 👏👏👏👏









waise i have to thank u for making me to learn how to edit the audio kyun ki this is the first time i edited the audio which till now i didnt know how to edit the audio aur tere wajah se aaj yeh bhi seek liya

The audio edit turned out beautifully, just the way I wanted it. I did not even know you were doing this for the first time. Removing the male singing and the chorus made it a serene peaceful love song, which is what I wanted. Perfect Priya..Clap
You are the only person who remarked on their closeness like this. There is a pure heart in this Maan. He wants her not only to fulfill himself but to please her. Glad you got it.😃
Thanks Priya🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

happy holi

love the way u showed how geet is feeling and how she shed all her inhibitions and
rang gayee maan ke rang mein😆😆😆😆
then maan wanted to do everything but still holding himself because he promised geet was fab
awesome the way u showed how poor maan trying to hold back but geet's innocent touches were making him insane😳😳😳😆😆😉

poor guy.
thanks u did not add any brij here😡😡

warna is update ka maza hi kharab ho jaata😆😆😆

I hope mein teen besharmo mein se ek hoon😆😆😆

thanks for updating another passionate update
baba ji karien tum par passionate maaneet ka bhooot swaar rahe😆😆😆

Khud apne aap ko besharam declare kar rahi ho..😆
I will so miss all your smiley comments when this ends.
Thanks Jas😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

OFFFO so sensual so passionate ..geet maan mein rang hui n her innocent acts..Hatts off to maan control or says MSK promise ..Awesome update ..

ab jaldi se inki shaadhi karwa hi do ...poor maan i must say..


Happy Holi

Thanks Fairy. Happy Holi to you too😃

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