THE LOCKET (19) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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JeevanaP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#681

me will leave from work in another 45 mins... you enjoy the chakki 😉

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maansi25

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#682

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maansi25

@maansi25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#683

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geet going crazy but maan in control

awesome passionate and romantic update

waiting

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TheSunShine

@TheSunShine

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#684

very passionate and romantic update. Maan controls his feelings to keep his promise. Babaji jaldi shaadi karwa do

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#685

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now i understood.. y my stupid sissy is all paani paani.. and seeing ur blog form long time..

i er.. kinda.. its lovely aviii 🤗 🤗

u just nailed it!!

😳

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
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now i understood.. y my stupid sissy is all paani paani.. and seeing ur blog form long time..

i er.. kinda.. its lovely aviii 🤗 🤗

u just nailed it!!
😳

I know your sister loves my Maan :P

😆

If I had to guess I never would have thought you would comment on this part😆

Even Mari surprised me... hers I can understand, she knew how nervous I was about this part..

🤗Kittu

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#687

Originally posted by: priya111111

HAPPY HOLI AVI

Thank you Mrs. S🤗 Happy Holi to you too..

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sohni_kudi_111

@sohni_kudi_111

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#688

speechless... such a bold part n that to without bhaang! imagine wat would b d outcome if they were intoxicated! plz include a HM scene before u end this marvelous ff!

wow... geet has seriously become bold... effect of maan thud n maan has started talking to babaji! lols

i think this is d boldest step taken by giiit so far! wondering how will sparks fly on their SR n HM!!!!!

me faint...thud! ok back to books

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#689

it was just awesome

maaneet lost in passion geet was ready to forget all her sharats and shyness but maan controlled himself for his love❤️

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#690

Originally posted by: dqno1

I know your sister loves my Maan :P

😆

If I had to guess I never would have thought you would comment on this part😆

Even Mari surprised me... hers I can understand, she knew how nervous I was about this part..

🤗Kittu

oh no she is lattooo over your maan... she dint read some of the previous parts.. but i told her the story and their LUB isshhhtttooryy

lol 😆 sometimes i wonder is this the same Avi.. who is all bubbly and cheerful who analyzes and depicts emotions so beautifully 😳

its not like i dont want to comment.. lol... 😆 specially on this part

i like this part.. infact i ...will u b surprised if i say i totally loved it??!!! v☺️ ☺️ ❤️

Mayyo? 😲 innocent lad is shy ?? even she is shy to read these parts??

wait?? 😲 u were nervous about this part?? but why??

its sooo good.. and beautifulll... yes its indeed beautifull.. those desires.. wanting part is written mind blowingly 😳.. i loved it Aviii 😃

during engagement part.. i was pleasantly pleased with the way u picturised it.. and the song selection.. and whole set-up... its like dream... 👏👏 and when i come here to comment, i see soo many pages filled with praises.. analysis.. and very nice feedback.. and some ppl stole my words.. so thats y.. when ever i wanna come here and comment ill b speechless...

i think think .. over think.. think tooo much to form words.. .yet.. ur beloved readers comments make me smile, laugh .. and i just sit and go thru all the pages.. just like Mannu.. ill b silent..

but yea.. 👏 👏 i cant stop thanking u.. and praise enough for such beautiful story.. each and every char,.. and splly the narration... sometimes u beat up Nisha and Mayyo...

You Rockkk 😎 Aviii 🤗 🤗 Hugsss tightly...

Im sooo happy for You!!

Edited by KittuPratzz - 11 years ago