THE LOCKET (19) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 72

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: valli30

Thud😳

lovely holi gift I say
as you cann't apply the color to us directly
so you have choosen to do that with your update
padthe hi gaal laal aur gulabi hogayi so hogaya na holi ka rang☺️
Happy Holi Avi😃

😆😆 Another way to look at it
Happy Holi Valli.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: annbell

Happy Holi ... !!!

very very sensual update ..
beautifully written ..
she just forgot everything in front of his love ..
both are soo madly in love with each other dat both of them don't want to hurt each other ..

Thanks Annbell. His love overcame her shyness.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian

amazing update...🥳...romantic and passionate moments of maaneet...☺️☺️...Maan controlled himself and pleaded Babaji to make them get married soon...😛...loved it very much...❤️❤️❤️...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...loved the vm too......awesome one...👏...

🥳...HAPPY HOLI 2 u 2 dr...🥳


Glad you enjoyed it, Thanks Jayeeta😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



wow wow wat a update... love u so much dear for giving a very beautifiul emotional heara touching update...i felt like a feather caressing my heart reading tis update...thanku for giving tis feel to me... te way my maaneet ki first ever touch making they body touching each other and burning them with their love, was lovely emotional touching...te way they passion shows their love , their longing for each other was lovely touching...te way my maan pleasuring his geet and geet melting in his arms like ice was lovely cute ... i feeling they passion inside me.. wat to say...no words for tis update...te way my maaneet ki love and their passion making me too carve for them more... te way my maan cribbing to his geet ki babaji for wedding, me too want they marriage to be happen soon.. i cant see my maaneet controlling themselves... pls i want a lovely elaborate sr, bechare my maaneet waited for so long... atleast tis can cool their burning body naa..i love te update so so much

Elaborate SR😲😲😲
Na baba na..
this is the most I can write. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashdd

awsome update...

full of maneet ramance...
maneet passion was awsome...
beautifully written & screen on fire update...☺️

Glad you liked it. thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: baisakh45

at first happy holi.now coming to the update,you know what i felt so much joy in seeing the letter 18+.i loved it.shayari..i don't have any words to say about it.it's so beautiful.loved it.

😆 Really? Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111

speechless... such a bold part n that to without bhaang! imagine wat would b d outcome if they were intoxicated! plz include a HM scene before u end this marvelous ff!

wow... geet has seriously become bold... effect of maan thud n maan has started talking to babaji! lols

i think this is d boldest step taken by giiit so far! wondering how will sparks fly on their SR n HM!!!!!

me faint...thud! ok back to books

We already had a holi and bhang scene, right?
HM scene😲😲 not sure I will be able to write it.
Good luck with your studies.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyaniru

very beautifully written romantic update. You brought out the essence of the nasha they have for each other. It is so easy to get carried away, but Maan is in control and will keep his word!

Thanks. Maan would not break his promise to her. This way Avi gets to torture him some more..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurti30

it was just awesome
maaneet lost in passion geet was ready to forget all her sharats and shyness but maan controlled himself for his love❤️

Thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nahi nahi
U have to write a pay back 😉

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