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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 24


After four days Geet's legs was plastered for 30/40 days and she was in bed * Maan and Dadima spending their lots of time with her but she was tired bounded to a place * Maan started going office for few hrs but in that period he called many times at home to ask about Geet * he attend his imp meetings and other work in office and then did rest of d work from home * Manish-a was shuttling between KV to KC with files and folders * Sasha was becoming impatient every passing day with Maan's changing behavior and at last she asked to Manish-a though she knew he won't give her proper reply regarding MK's personal life ,, hotty ka aashiq jo tha.

Sasha: Manish now a days u r spending lots of time in KV with MK , what happened ?

Manish-a: yes Sasha , MK is busy in some other work and need time to spend at home?

Sahsa : why so , I think Dadima is fine .

Manish-a: why, he could have some other work , do u have any prob in it ?

Sasha: no , I was just asking , by d way who is Geet?

Manish-a: Oh Geet , she is d girl who save MK and a client from an accident at our site and got injured * Dadima and MK r helping her .

Sasha: Oh!! And when it happened ? U didn't inform me.

Manish-a: why , am I bounded to inform u everything ?

Sasha: don't be over smart Manish-a , u r only an accountant in KC and i'm chief Architect and Sr to u.

Manish-a: Miss Sasha , i'm MK's employee not urs , so mind ur own business and don't try to spy MK.

Sasha: huuhhh,,, u don't know me .

Manish-a: I don't want to know.

Sasha stormed from his cabin fuming over her insult and Manish-a gave a lopside smile . Sasha took Geet as a charity case and overlook that .


Here in KV Maan was becoming over protective and he didn't allow Geet to move a bit * his do and doesn't list was annoying Geet. Mr David d client who was with Maan that day wanted to meet Geet and he was at KV with his wife * all wr sitting in lawn near pool * Maan brought Geet there and she felt fresh after long spending some time in open area with natural surrounding * Mr & mrs David talked to Geet on her education and job and praised her * they thanked Geet and offered their help .

Mr David : GS , we know MK and SD r doing everything for u and we r also here for ur help any time in future ,,, plz don't hesitate to contact us .


Geet thanked them for their concern * both left after some time and Maan came to take her back but she denied and wished to spend sometime in open * Dadima too backed Geet * Maan went back to his study and Dadima went out for some purchasing ,, bcoz of Geet she was enjoying Indian dishes daily which was not possible with Maan * he likes Italian foods , but now she made only Indian at dinner and Maan ate quietly with them .


Maan stuck in his video conferences * Dadima was out with Nakul and Geet's phone was in d room * it was eve and weather became cold and cloudy due to winds after Sunset * Geet was in lawn and unable to move without support so helplessly stuck there in cold.

Maan came out from his study after 2 hrs and find Geet's bed empty then he remembered that she was in lawn ,, he peeped from d window and he stormed outside.

Maan: my goodness !! she is in d lawn at this hrs .

Geet was sitting there shivering in cold * she looked at him and he started his chanting...

Maan: Geet , i'm sorry , I forgot d track of time in work * why didn't u call me ? now u definitely catch cold .. OMG!!! How I forgot about u ?

Geet: my phone was in d room

Maan scoop her and brought her in d room , placed her in d bed and covered her with blanket .

Maan : where is Dadima and Nakul ? Why didn't they notice u ?

Geet: she is out with Nakul for some house hold shopping * it's OK , don't panic .

Maan: u r shivering Geet ,, see urself * I'm sorry, I left u there and forgot.

Geet: it's OK , MK , it was me who decided to sit there .

Maan: and see d result .. mai coffee lata hoon .


Dadima returned and Maan told her about Geet * she too got worried for her and rushed to her * Maan brought hot coffee for her and handed her , but d weather did its work . Geet started sniffing .


They took their dinner * bcoz of cold Maan forced Dadima to sit in bed with hot water bottle for back pain and take rest as she was out in d eve. Geet started sneezing which tensed Maan * when it became worse he gave her few spoons of Brandy in warm water to swig down ,, eeewww yuckky ,,, chup-chap peeo Geet * he brought olive oil to massage her soles.

Geet: no plzz , don't touch my feet .

Maan: Geet it'll help u in cold * Dadima did it when I catch cold .

Geet: OK, give me ,, i'll do it .

Maan: tell me how ? u can't fold ur leg ,, let me do it and try to sleep.

Geet: no , plz don't touch my feet , it doesn't look nice * she spoke with sniff.

Maan chuckled : Geet ek baar jidd kerne ka mja le liya na ab aur jidd matt kero ,, see ur nose red cherry lag rahi hei ,,now happy ,, Bahar baithna hei open mei ?

Geet looked at her pouted and then sneezed 3-4 times * slowly - slowly Brandy started showing its effect * Maan was massaging her sole when he heard her words which startled him .

Geet: Maan , mamma ki yaad aa rahi hei ,, tumhe nahi aati apni mom ki yaad ?


His hands stopped ,,, Maan , she called him Maan and talking about her and his mom * he looked at her and find her eyes teary * he covered her feet and came close to her .


Precap --- sharing pains and happiness ...

Part - 25

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
rok sako to rok lo.. i m 1st... yahhoo...!!

Edited by mauaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya se kya hogaya 😆😆

maan ko dekh kar aisa lagraha hai dekho geet keliye kitna badal gaya hai.

poor sasha usko koi bhi info nahi mili geet ke baaremein😆😆😆


arey waah maan itna seva karne ki return mein kita mewa milne laga hai pehli baar uska naam sunne ko mila😳😳



Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




kya baat hai aaj badi chamkthi huyi nazar aarahi ho😆


colorful hello 😆😆
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aaj maitri khushi se naache gi ki wo mere hothe huye baazi maari😆😆
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Originally posted by: priya111111

aaj maitri khushi se naache gi ki wo mere hothe huye baazi maari😆😆


bada rear mamla hai di ye😆😆
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Originally posted by: priya111111

aaj maitri khushi se naache gi ki wo mere hothe huye baazi maari😆😆


meri khushi kaa koi theekana hi nahi hai prya.. if by chance i cm 1st in yr absence.. i alws mention thanks to priyaa.. but today in yr presence.. i won that 1st place.. ohhh lord.. i dnt hv any words.. my eyes r painig.. tears hs startd to come..😊 thats it.. v emotional...
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Originally posted by: mauaa

rok sako to rok lo.. i m 1st... yahhoo...!!





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abyeh lakshu apne kachue ke saath kaha baiti hai

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