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Updating today...

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Thank you all of u for the likes ,comments and support...I have gone through each and every comment...thanks a lot for the commetns...these are the driving force...couldn't reply ...sorry for that...



For the first time i am using a song...Pehli nazar mein from the movie Race...This the VM made by our own Valli30...When i saw the Vm i felt this will suit the story line in expressing maan's feelings...Valli readily agreed and let me use it...Thank you Valli...Love u baby...


Past in Italics


Here is the Part...


Part 18

Maan landed in Mumbai and checked into the hotel...He freshened up and laid down on the bed for a while...He started remembering Geet...in Meera's marriage...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v0xOo2y4dQA[/Youtube]



Pehli Nazar Mein
Kaise Jaado Kar Diya
Tera Ban Baita Hai
Mera Jiya

He was following Geet in a trance...but in a safe distance...He could feel that Geet was tensed...She was looking here and there...but was hesitating to talk to any one...First she went to her Dadi...but she is busy in instructing people about some work...she turned to geet and smiled...Geet also gave a nervous smile and went away from there...

Jaane Kya Hoga
Kya Hoga Kya Pata
Is Pal Ko Milke
Aa Jee Le Zara
Mein Hoon Yahan
Tu Hai Yahan

Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Aa Bhi Ja


Maan suddenly noticed her choli...on of the hook was off...He tried to call her but Geet was in her thoughts...When she was passing by...Maan pulled her ...She was startled bu the pull by Maan...she looked into his eyes...He slowly turned her and helped her with her hook...



O Jaan-E-Jaan
Dono Jahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Bhool Ja

Baby I Love U 4 So More
Baby I Love U
O I Love U
I Love U
I Love U So More

Baby I Love U

But he was brought back...some one has collided into him...the person was having some garlands in his hands, couldn't balance and collided with maan...Maan started helping him and looked for Geet...

Maan smiled when he remembered how he imagined helping geet with the choli hook... He was completely smitten by geet...He followed her everywhere he could in the marriage...but geet was very tensed then...now he knew the reason...

His mobile buzzed and he checked it...it's time to go to the conference...he took all necessary files... And moved to the conference hall...

The day was busy for Maan and at the end of the day...there was a party for the delegates who attended the conference...maan went there...its was more like a get- together...all the people present there were laughing and mingling with every one...Maan had a small chat with some and moved to the end of the hall...as his mind was full of his Geet...


Har Dua Mein Shamil Tera Pyaar Hai
Bin Tere Lamha Bhi Dushwar Hai

Dhadhkon Ko Tujhe Se Hi Darkarr Hai
Tujhse Hai Rahtein
Tujhse Hai Chahtein

Har Dua Mein Shamil Tera Pyaar Hai
Bin Tere Lamha Bhi Dushwar Hai

Dhadhkon Ko Tujhe Se Hi Darkarr Hai
Tujhse Hai Rahtein
Tujhse Hai Chahtein





He saw someone standing there ...He kept his hand on her shoulde'r and she turned...She was Geet...She turned to leave...but he held by her stomach and stoped her...she was about to say some thing...he stopped her...he just wanted to relish the moment in silence...Geet was tensed...


Tu Jo Mili Ek Din Mujhe
Mein Kahin Ho Gaya Lapata

O Jaan-E-Jaan
Dono Jahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Bhool Ja

O Jaan-E-Jaan
Dono Jahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Bhool Ja


He hugged her from back...she turned to him and he planted a series of kisses on her face...Geet has unable to say anything she tried to move away from there...


Kar Diya Deewana
Dard-E-Kash Ne
Chain Cheena
Isqh Ke Ehsaas Ne
Bekhayali Di Hai
Tere Pyaas Ne
Chaya Suroor Hai
Kuch To Zaroor Hai

Kar Diya Deewana
Dard-E-Kash Ne
Chain Cheena
Isqh Ke Ehsaas Ne
Bekhayali Di Hai
Tere Pyaas Ne
Chaya Suroor Hai
Kuch To Zaroor Hai

Maan came back to the Room...He changed into his night dress and laid on the bed...he remembered the day when he was coming to delhi leaving Geet in Amritsar...Geet was very sad and tensed and added to that her only support he leaving her and going to delhi...that was the time maan and geet spent their first private moments...Maan was lost in his thoughts and slept...after a tiring day...

Yeh Dooriyan
Jeene Na De
Hal Mera Tujhe Na Pata

[O Jaan-E-Jaan
Dono Jahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Bhool Ja]


O Jaan-E-Jaan
Dono Jahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Bhool Ja

Baby I Love U 4 So More
Baby I Love U
Uuh I Love U
I Love U
Baby I Love U
I Love U U U U



Next day was hectic for Maan...as he was to present on behalf of KC...his presentation went well...He was about to leave the hall...He saw Inder handa entering the hotel...Maan was surprised to see him there...He went and Greeted him...


Maan went to him and took his blessing ...


Maan - Papa aap yaha...


Inder - Haa Maan Main yaha kaam se aaya hoon...kuch export orders hain...wahi dekhne aaya hoon...tum yaha...


Maan - Main yaha conference attend karne aaya hoon...


Inder and Maan went to the pool side and sat at the restaurant and started their talk...


Inder - Meera kaisi hain Maan...Main usse dekhne bhi nahi aa saka...Main Maa ki baat ke khilaf nahi ja saka...


Maan - Main jaanta hoon Papa...ki aap majboor hain...Meera kaafi theek hain...woh ab normal hogayi hain physically...par usse kuch yaad nahi aarah hai...


Inder - Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha hain maan...main kya karoon...Maa ki baat maanu ya Meera ko maaf kardoon...


Maan - Mujhe lagta hain ki aap ek baar meera se mille...shyad usse kuch yaad aajaye...aapko dekh karr...


Inder - Main bhi meera se milna chahta hoon Maan... Main ek aur baar maa se baat karunga...


Inder and Maan discussed about meera some more time...Maan had told all the efforts of Geet...and Meera's reactions...


Maan - Papa aap apni beti ke bare mein nahi poochenge...woh kaisi hai...


Inder laughed and said...Mujhe meri beti ki chinta nahi hain maan...usse tum jaosa pati mila toh kya poochna...mujhe poora yakeen hai ki woh waha bohut khush hogi...


Maan felt touched with his belief in him...He said ...I promise dad...main aapko kabhi bhi shikayat ka mauka nahi doonga...


Inder - Mujhe yakeen hain maan tum par...Bhale hi hum zyaada Nahi mile ho...Lekin main tumhare bare mein sab jaanta hoon...mujhe tum sab ki Khabar rehte thi...maa hamesha tumhari baatein share karti thi...savitri maa bhi tumhari tareef karti thi...aur meri maa toh tej ko tumse inspiration lene ko kehti hai...tej kam Nahi hai...phir bhi maa kehti hai inspiration lene se koi kam nahi hojayega...aur geet ki toh mujhe bilkul bhi chinta Nahi hai...Woh toh meri maa par gayi hai...Uska sochana, baaton ko samajhna...sab meri maa jaisi karti hai...ghar mein sab se choti hai...Lekin kabhi kabhi Lagta tha ki Woh sab se badi hai ...tum toh jaante ho...shaadi mein usne Kya kiya...koi aur hota toh...

Maan - Haa papa...main samajh Sakta hoon...aapki baat...

Suddenly they heard some one calling ...Inder handa... what a surprise...

Inder stood up and turned around...looked at the person...a man of his age stood in a business suit and has an strange smile...it took time to recognize the person...once he recognised his expression changed into hatred and disguest...he turned to maan and said...Chalo maan...we will go somewhere else...



Man - yeh toh bohut buri baat hain Inder...apne purane dost se gale Nahi Miloge...

Inder - I am sorry mr...Lekin I don't know u...

Man - mujhe hi bhul Gaye...Baal Kya Gaye tumne toh mujhe pehchana hi Nahi...and started laughing...

Inder looked at him and said...I am saying again I don't know you...

Man - yeh bohut galat baat hai Inder...main tumhe pehchan gaya...par tum toh mujhe bhul hi Gaye...chodo...he turned to maan -yeh kaun hai...

Inder - tumhe isse koi matlab Nahi hai...aur tum mere pariwaar se door raho...he said in a serious tone and he turned to maan .

The person also replied in very harsh tone ...exactly my point...tum bhi kaho apni beti se ki Woh bhi mere pariwaar ke khusiyon se door rahe...warna acha nahi hoga... pichil bar Bach gayi ...is baar Nahi bachegi...

Inder looked confused...but maan got what he is saying...he said...papa chaliye yaha se...

Man - oh toh yeh tumhara damaad hai...toh woh shaadi ke liye maan gayi...dekho mr. Maan...tell ur wife never to mess up with me again...warna main usse Nahi chodunga...

Maan's anger shot up...he was silently listening till now...moved ahead and stood in front of the man... I don't know who are u...but if u ever even think to harm my family...u will see the worst in me...and in ur life...this is a promise by MAAN SINGH KHURANA..and .don't ever dare to forget that...he turned to Inder and said...chahiye papa...

Both Inder and maan left from there...the man thought ...Maan Singh Khurana...




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Thank once again Valli for the Awesome VM and suggestion...

Thanks Priya for the Pics...and banner...

Thanks Rashmi for the Title suggestion...


I know this is small...But i want the whole prank scene in one update...and after the Prank part...the past will start...


Over to you guys...Plz let me know how it is...Waiting ...

Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry yaar it was avery confusing update for me ..and now I know that i will only know that when you will give full past of Maan and Geet
yahaan main sabko confuse nahin karna chahti issiliye no questions here😉
pahle tpo main past me bhi tumne dream daal diya usse confuse ho gayi baad me wo samajh me aa gaya
Maan geet ko Amritsar kyun chhod kar aaya ye bhi ek confusin hai aur dadi ne bataya ki meera ko ki wo road par mili thi tab kya Maan ke saath Geet nahin thi
ab jaldi se mera confusion dur karo
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so maan is in mumbai n he is dreaming about his geet...
maan is imagining geet everywhere...
maan met with Mr Handa...
the man he is referring at meera right??!!!!
Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago
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So this is the new entry...villian...

i thought girl friend for RB...
Kahaani nein ek air twist... Interesting...
My guess...that bald man Meera's BF's father...
Where is he? ...Maneet met in Meera's wedding...
More questions...waiting for the past...
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Sorry yaar it was avery confusing update for me ..and now I know that i will only know that when you will give full past of Maan and Geet

yahaan main sabko confuse nahin karna chahti issiliye no questions here😉
pahle tpo main past me bhi tumne dream daal diya usse confuse ho gayi baad me wo samajh me aa gaya
Maan geet ko Amritsar kyun chhod kar aaya ye bhi ek confusin hai aur dadi ne bataya ki meera ko ki wo road par mili thi tab kya Maan ke saath Geet nahin thi
ab jaldi se mera confusion dur karo



Tune update theek se padha ...Maine bataya tha ki jab meera road par mili tab geet bhi Saath mein thi...par dadi he meera ko Nahi bataya...



Aur mujhe tumhe confuse karna acha Lagta hain😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
love the way maan was imagining geet
maan was happy seeing the belief inder has on him regarding geet
who is the new entry nd what connection he has with Handa's
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Originally posted by: -indu-



Tune update theek se padha ...Maine bataya tha ki jab meera road par mili tab geet bhi Saath mein thi...par dadi he meera ko Nahi bataya...



Aur mujhe tumhe confuse karna acha Lagta hain😉😆

par tune kaha na ki Maan geet ko amritsar chhod kar dilli aaya tha😕?
iska matlab shadi se pahle dono ko pyar ho gaya tha kya?

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