Wired Hearts (3) Ch:28, Thread: 4

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#921

^Katti tou mujhse aise kar rahi ho dono jaise maine aagey post karney se inkaar hi kar diya ho. :P

It's just going to be a few days. Not as many as I took during IOYSM but I still need a few days.

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#922

vyan trying to spend more tm wth geet ...geet searching old maan...maan making geet jealous or really its time pass

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dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#923

Originally posted by: mayyo
^Katti tou mujhse aise kar rahi ho dono jaise maine aagey post karney se inkaar hi kar diya ho. :P

It's just going to be a few days. Not as many as I took during IOYSM but I still need a few days.

😭

reverse dhamki😲 de rahi ho

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Originally posted by: dqno1

😭
reverse dhamki😲de rahi ho

Hawww 😲

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#925

Yeh dekh Avi 😳

I was talking about this 😎

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Nostalgia : Such updates always make me feel nostalgic, and you somehow brought a smile on my face reading this one. Thanks Mayyo 🤗

Sasha makes an appearance as Maan's "friend" 😆 is this in response to Geet's Vyan 😉. Mayyo must say this is turning out to be more interesting.

I liked how in few words and in between the story you do give a glimpse about the person's characteristics and persona, like Geet's detailing and silent observation of her cabin is a window to her skills as an Interior designer. 👏

Vyan as I said before is a voyeur and keenly observes things related to Geet ... be it her spending time with her near ones, or her covert observing Maan, or even when she makes plans with her friends to relive her moments with them.

SBV has made a special guest appearance here... hayee Not only Geet even I was drooling. 😳

Their reminiscence and the joy of reliving those each moments that can never return but was always treasured by all 4 became a beautiful means of thawing some ice between M-G as the atmosphere was lightened by presence of A-A. The whole recollection when they spoke of their trip and late night walk made me recollect that chapter which is one of my favorite written update by you as it was a nostalgia for me then. 😃

I did get a glimpse of my hidden Tortoise here 😉 The way he was again being the referee between A-A tu tu main main. 😆 and at the same time involving Geet in the whole tug of war.

Loved the last line "We were just four college friends taking a nostalgic walk down the memory lane together. " 👏

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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#927

Parred: The days on the cruise are passing quite soon. But with the pace of the story Twinnie you've made a point to give refined details of each activity and events going on ion few sentences which give the whole picture. 👏

I would go with Geet in her opinion of not being a big Romeo-Juliet fan ... as I said earlier neither Jack-Rose or Romeo-Juliet story appeal to me much (It's just my opinion)

Vyan is slowly taking his token gifts in return as the one who advised this trip 😉 Golf coruse pe khelte khelte chance pe dance... 😆 Waah ji waah! I like him he's sweet & harmless.

Geet wanting to take efforts in being presentable and being bothered with her looks for the ball seemed justified as any girl (for that matter anyone) would want to look good when going for a date or a ball. I don't think it was in special reference to it being with Vyan.

Geet collision with Sasha the Bimbo 😆 Loved it. What caught my attention was how Maan did observe the exchange and continued to focus on Geet for a few moments before going away with Bimbo. 😉

She came to the conclusion of Sasha being his GF ?? Kya baat hai. 😲 She has a tainted/prejudiced view of him I guess, may be due to the presentation he keeps in front of her, or all the gossip or her own way of controlling her feelings for him or excuses she keeps giving herself to rid herself from over thinking ... which she fails time and again. 😆

"Sometimes, things are funny in the way they change" 😆 I guess it is applicable to both M&G.

Edited by Onir - 11 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#928

One last chapter left ... but I'm at present very tired and sleepy. 🥱 Going to sleep now. Will read it in peace tomorrow and comment then.

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan
Yeh dekh Avi😳
I was talking about this😎

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I've seen this but I had quite a different image in my mind...