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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: Susegad

I knew you'd love the library job.😃
But kya karey, it is a library from my story, so obviously it was not going to be an innocent place. You should have known that.😆
Hey, but it was all about the art form you know, what's with the green disgusted face😲
Hmm, Physiology Anatomy classes were the most interesting.
I remember when we were studying the reproductive organs during Anatomy, my friend who had missed a few lectures during those days, asked me how the classes were. I remember telling her depending on how you look at it, you can either call it an atomic class or anatomy-ick class.
🤣
Yeah, yeah I have been just like this all my life and some things never change.😆

Never studied biology to such depths but the basics that I had to study were actually taught by a male teacher. It was so damned hard to put up a serious face! 😆

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy
Just coming frm library🤣mayyo.. how was the diagram??was it labelled r not?😛😛
While i was reading it i did get a faint idea that it culd be u but cuming here the doubts got clear . But anyways forget the diagram thing aye haye the way maan tslked to u..nisha di did just erite an awesome piece i culdnt stop laughing
^ avi di whenu talk about vyan being fawad khan...god fk has an enormous screen presence and here vyaan reding his character gives me that imagination..a young boyish looking person trying his luck hard with a girl whom he has secretly starte liking but the girl seems to ignore all his approaches. If i think too hard then fawad f zindagi gulzar hai i.e. zunaid (i hope i m rite) will b ok. Becoz there the main lead was lyk geet not giving much of bhaav to him athough he tried his level best to befriend her. And that befriending session had started only in the second half til then theyy we were jaani dushmans.
If u talk about fawad f humsafar then i wuld rather think him to b ranbir and mahira khan as zara.although i love sanam baloch more but she is cute and zara here seems to be sophisticated lady
I havent seen humsafar saw only the vms but then i have seen daastan fawad and sanam all the scenes and i loved them together. This man has got a beautiful face with those eyes and in daastan their eye to eye scenes were fab.
Nisha di...even i like fawad got to know about him last year in may and since then i watched all his vms with his costars.

I just had a glance at that diagram and paled so Maan took it away quickly. Can't tell details of it, Nivi. 😆

You three talking about Fawad Khan makes me feel out of place. I feel so dumb right now! 😆

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: dqno1

I sent you the teaser but I didn't have the picture that goes with it...
here you go..
provided by Nisha..😃

This one with the teaser?? 😲

Let me go read it once again.

PS: This picture mostly remains as my wallpaper. 😳

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy
Just coming frm library🤣mayyo.. how was the diagram??was it labelled r not?😛😛
While i was reading it i did get a faint idea that it culd be u but cuming here the doubts got clear . But anyways forget the diagram thing aye haye the way maan tslked to u..nisha di did just erite an awesome piece i culdnt stop laughing
^ avi di whenu talk about vyan being fawad khan...god fk has an enormous screen presence and here vyaan reding his character gives me that imagination..a young boyish looking person trying his luck hard with a girl whom he has secretly starte liking but the girl seems to ignore all his approaches. If i think too hard then fawad f zindagi gulzar hai i.e. zunaid (i hope i m rite) will b ok. Becoz there the main lead was lyk geet not giving much of bhaav to him athough he tried his level best to befriend her. And that befriending session had started only in the second half til then theyy we were jaani dushmans.
If u talk about fawad f humsafar then i wuld rather think him to b ranbir and mahira khan as zara.although i love sanam baloch more but she is cute and zara here seems to be sophisticated lady
I havent seen humsafar saw only the vms but then i have seen daastan fawad and sanam all the scenes and i loved them together. This man has got a beautiful face with those eyes and in daastan their eye to eye scenes were fab.
Nisha di...even i like fawad got to know about him last year in may and since then i watched all his vms with his costars.

Ou Mayyo is a darling.Only on her could I write such a humorous piece, without worrying too much about it.😛

Yay!! Another Fawad Khan shipper. 👍🏼

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: mayyo

I just had a glance at that diagram and paled so Maan took it away quickly. Can't tell details of it, Nivi. 😆

You three talking about Fawad Khan makes me feel out of place. I feel so dumb right now! 😆

Are you sure?😆

Why are you feeling dumb?😕

Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago

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Mishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

This is really awkward and weird because I feel so embarrassed to write this now! But I couldn't keep myself away and increase the weight of my guilt even more!

Let me first begin at mid-point (weird I told you!) I have actually stopped reading at chapter 10 of 'Wired Hearts' because it was a point that so deeply affected me that I felt the lurch of Geet's agony, grief and the need of closure all in reality and knowing that my needs for closure coincides with her made me halt and take a break Ji ...💔

I am only telling you this so that you may know of how brilliantly you have written this piece.👏. esp this chapter... there is no frivolous hype or sense of drama in portraying Geet's tragedy to us as your readers... you have just laid it all so bare in your own style that its really intriguing to read.

Now let me begin at the Beginning: 24 Chapters Prior to the above 23..

They really have not only laid a foundation to this story but strengthened my love in your writing! ... you are an amazingly gifted Writer with the talent of "Wiring" your Words to our "Hearts" ... "If Only You Saw Me" ...for me was a treat I felt I would want after passing every exam.. I call it a treat because of your generous doze of length in your chapters, the innocent portrayal of life in that phase where with friends one moulds their identity and future ..and in this case ..their Life... (Its awkward now😆) a rare combination to get in every chapter but you delivered it all so effortlessly in your words...

I actually have no excuse as to why I couldn't write a comment of appreciation earlier to you!! I really don't know esp when you deserved one like every other writer does from a reader!! deep heart felt sorry Ji ..I really don't want to give reasons.. coz 24 chapters of bliss shouldn't be tainted with my lame of excuse of silence!! 😕

But I imagine you are more generous hearted than myself and find it in your heart to forgive me ❤️... I solemnly promise to stay right with you in this journey of wired hearts though I am 23 chapters late😕😳 for this too! but this is because I have not read most of them for now!

As I do.. I will get back to you.. 😊

Now coming to the end! .. uff.. my longness! ... I must say that to say I was heart broken is an understatement...when Maan turned back at the airport with a broken heart and just left to just say in mere whispers "If only you saw me" Coz I was wailing !! 😭😆

I know it was all justified esp that it was inclined in the title itself but the tragedy of it all left me so much in tears... I guess there are many of your readers who were in the same state.. but when I did I was lucky to have read it late since by then you had left a note of a sequel which promised to bring them beyond that phase and ventures them into new lives and situation but with the same simmering love and golden hearts 😳❤️ Haayyee..

so here is what I am doing ...enjoying this beginning to an end of their closure in Love.. their reunion which I swear I wished to wish on a shooting star if it was possible coz I just didn't want such a beautiful couple of your story to be ever left apart!!! *I know talk about heights of melodramatic-nesss**

I can't remember what else I wanted to say since I have had this msg stored in my brain for so long!! but yee I will resume reading from chapter 10 onwards since I have quite recovered from that chapter.. (I just had lots of chocolates..ice creams and movie times all by myself!! to recover.. coz my friends were laughing at my plight for having such an attachment to a fictional story in their eyes!! but how do they know that any Maaneet story which would have an essence of reality and dream like yours can never remain just fictional in our minds and hearts now can it!😆😉😛)

Thank you for sharing these lovely love stories with us.. I am looking forward to catching up 👏