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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



jab tujhe job milegi tab tho sabse jyaada hum hi kush honge na


i know di 😃
bt its too tough
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



jab tujhe job milegi tab tho sabse jyaada hum hi kush honge na

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

hiii all.. babbie, priyaa, lakshmi, v imp guest of tonight dona, mising mising wanted wanted lily.. i m nt gona stay for long.. i m actually watching sm v'dos from y-tube.. study related hi hai yaar... so bye.. good night.. n plzz mere kal k paper k liye pray krna..

or kal sab ana.. priya.. kal jiju ko wo na chahe to bhi bhej dena job pr or aa jana...
lakshmi kal muze update chahiye hi chahhiye..
dona kal bunk mt marna..
byee love u al...😳



hai mauaa... yes kal pakka milega😃

and do well tom... all the best dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 19


All gasped and jolted then rushed towards d spot * Maan and d other man stabilized themselves and turned back * they understood that someone pushed them away to save them * they too came at d spot and find many pieces of broken cemented blocks and then to that side where few ppl wr gathered and 2-3 were holding a girl lying on ground wounded.

G e e t ,,, he stormed towards her , held her in his arms and patted her cheek .. Geet ... Geet .. open ur eyes ... Geet * getting no reply from her he shouted at manish-a .. Manish start d car ,, go.. He lifted her and run towards his car , placed her in d passenger seat , ordered Manish-a to take care of clients and rushed out for hospital * he was calling her name again and again to get a response from her but she didn't * within min he was in d nearby hospital * d Dr and staff rushed towards him and took them in emergency ward * Maan placed her on d bed and Dr started their work at once * they told him to go out but he didn't move then a Dr took him out and consoled him .


Dr: let us do our work Mr. * she'll be fine and filled d papers at d counter .


With heavy feet Maan came at d counter to complete d formalities * he was very disturbed , nothing was coming in his mind . Geet was hurt ,bled and unconscious , only this thing was in his mind * his hands and clothes wr stained with her blood and his heartbeats wr uneven * d attendant at d counter was asking d details about d patient and he was replying but his all attention was at d OT where Geet was treated .


Name of d patient sir? Geet Singh ... Age? Ummm .. 24 ... female ? Yes... Your name ?,,, ur name sir ? Maan Singh Khurana ... Spouse , excuse me sir .. umm Yes ... Med insurance .. hello sir .. insurance? I don't know ... Means? No , no med insurance... Address?... Add .. XYZ, *** , SF( he gave his Add coz he didn't know her full add) . Deposit money sir .. Maan took out his card and handed her * d attendant completed d details , took out print out and handed him card and papers to sign * he signed d papers and came back near d door stood there taking back against d wall .


Manish-a called him to inform that d clients had gone back and d staff from d wounded girl was asking about her * her colleague Mr Pandey wanted to come there and they informed Arjun also about d accident .


Maan: OK , I'm in ** Medi Center and i'll call Arjun .

Maan informed Dadima and then talked to Arjun who was on d way getting news from Pandeyji * every sec was like a death for Maan , praying for her life and his eyes wr fix at d OT door * Pandeyji came and he asked about d accident patient at d counter and then he joined Maan and asked about GS * Maan hardly replied that she was in OT and under treatment .


Half an hr passed and a Dr came out , Maan rushed at him .

Maan: Dr how is she?


Dr: don't worry , nothing is very serious and she is in sense now but her left leg above ankle has fractured * she has some minor injuries on head and hands but nothing to worry * we'll shift her in gen ward after plastering her leg or u can take her home too.


Maan and Pandeyji took a breath of relief * Dadima came there and her condition was not less than Maan * seeing Maan she opened her question bank * Pandeyji was confused but then he thought that GS saved him that's why they wr worried for her * Arjun too reached there after few min and met with Maan and Pandeyji * both gave them all d report * Maan introduced him with his Dadima * Arjun too took their care and concern casual bcoz GS saved MK.


Geet had shifted in d ward and and she was in d effect of painkiller shot which Dr gave them for her fracture leg and other injuries. All came to meet her ,asked about her and she replied in minimal words * Maan was standing at last and didn't utter a word but his eyes wr roaming on her wounds and bandages ..She was hurt again bcoz of him , he was in a very vulnerable condition, every wound of her body was stabbing his heart.. why she put her life in danger for a person like him ,,, I don't deserve her care and concern ,,, why she is increasing his burden ?


Daima was sitting near Geet and caressing her head lovingly with wet eyes * Geet eyes wr dropping again and again in med effect * a Dr came there and asked Maan .


Dr: would u like to take her home or wanted to gave her hospital care for a day?

Arjun: i'll took her home if she is OK.

Dadima: No Arjun , let her stay in Dr care for a day and TM we'll took her with us in KV * i'll look after her .

Maan: yes Arjun , Dadima is right , let her take proper med care.

Arjun: it's OK MK but TM i'll took her with me ,why r u taking trouble ? U already did a lot for her now rest i'll look after.


Though Arjun was alone and had frequent visit to NJ for Annie's help but GS is Meera's friend and didn't have anybody here so he was bounded to take her with him . But Arjun's this wish pricked Maan , he wanted to take Geet with him in KV.


Dadima: Arjun do u have anybody at home for her care in ur absence ?

Arjun : no , but we'll manage .


Dadima : then u can't Arjun , I won't allow , her leg is fractured and she need a person everytime with her so i'll take care of her and u can visit her when ever u want at our home beta * try to understand Arjun beta we can't live her alone.


Arjun understood Dadima's point and agreed with her * it was a big help for him also bcoz in Meera's absence nobody was there at home to look after Geet * Maan took a sigh of relief but he was fearing of Geet's refusal , she won't accept this so easily and that was a big prob for Dadima and him * she was living alone and in this condition he can't live her alone to suffer * he requested Dr to arrange a private room for her then assured Arjun that Dadima and he will take care of everything * Maan sent Pandeyji back to work place to bring GS's belongings * Arjun stayed there for some more time * Geet was shifted to pvt room , she was sleeping and all settled there near her * Dadima was talking to Arjun and assuring him that they'll take good care of GS and he can go back to his work * after spending some more time Arjun left from there to site office to arrange someone for work at GS place in her absence. Now Dadima and Maan left there with Geet to face d toughest task .


Precap --- Geet in KV,,, impossible ...



Part - 20
Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Mickey and minnie mouse disney gifs
dhamakedaar part... geet got injured saving maan...

maan was already pachtaaying for his past deeds... now the fact that she got injured for him will be a blow...

geet in maans house... bahut mushkil hain ... now will she ask them to shift in her house??😉
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai dona dear.. missed u

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di lilydi kaha hai???
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Posted: 11 years ago
oyye dona teri wajah se mein first aayi...

tumhaara hi yaha daal rahi hoon...

upar waala tho edit hoga...😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


di lilydi kaha hai???



lily is real busy... mein bhi mile hue kuch din ho gaya

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