THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

such alovely and romantic update avi😳😳😳main kabka thud hogayi thi ab hosh mein aayi

agar itna pyaar se aur teasing se saari pehenayega tho uska haal kaisa hoga giit ko dekhkar patha chalega😆😆

Kuch karna bhi nahi padta hai inhe aur pyaar aa jaata hai inpe, she wondered.

just lovely dialogue yeh dekhne mein kitna simple hai par dil ko choo diya👏👏

aur immediately possessive ness came out by thinking Mere itne paas ho kar, kya soch rahe hai#,😆😆😆

oh god ladoo wala tho maarhi daala😆

and the best part giit calling him jaan which he wanted to listen from her mouth atlast came😳
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itne pyaar se usko sajraha hai uska saajan shaadi hone ke baad ab kya kya karega wo😳😳😳lagtha hai utni hi pyaar se usse utaar bhi dega😉

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

Amazing, cute, lovely n romantic. ..

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

i am loving it more & more.so romantic.gosh you are a queen when it comes to romance.

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Lovely update

maan is very naughty.

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

completely mesmerizing and so intricately described feelings ! i always found it heart warming whenever maan used to dress geet up. because men are generally not into these things. but so beautifully written and depicted. thanx avi for bringing back those moments

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

chap 76

wonderful day started with with a wonderful experience...having her in arms listening to her sweet sounds...the passion they couldnot hide...the special day making them open up with each other ...maan was not able to leave her...but apne engagement ki tayyari tho bhi karni hai !! and darji was so relieved after seeing maan's care and love...the elderly person...who should have been resting under his children's care had to shoulder the responsibility of four year grand child...and he did it with so much love...that child blossmed into beautiful innocent kind hearted young lady...all credit goes to darji !! hope maan proves to be wonderful support to him too...! and maan helping geet in sajna and sawarna...haiii !!

chap 77

so beautiful !! maan and his naughtiness...his passion...his two minutes...geet all blushy blushy...!! he didnot like the idea of geet getting ready by herself !! he took his own time to dress her up to his heart's content !! what the wish ...he wants to ask her...and waiting for their engagement...

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Avi "Gandi Baat" 😡
Mene pm pe comment kia tou he 😆

😆😆 Red face

Pyaar ki nishani..😆

Gussa toh koi apno se hi karta hai na..😆

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Ann

@annbell

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

hayee .. !!!

i dont kno wat to write ..

soo romantic ..

he can't keep his hands n eyes off from her ..

he wants her besides him all da tym ..

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: Alamelu
Just read the update. Loved it. That is so maan to dress his beautiful wife to be...so very caringly and beautifully...he is completely fida over her and vice versa...
waiting to see if geet would agree to go with him to manali!!! hmmm

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian
beautiful update...👏...Maaneet passionate romance...☺️☺️...Maan makes Geet ready......loved it...❤️❤️...eagerly waiting 4 next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

Glad you liked it.😃