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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: singh24

WOW!! good start ...
Congo BB..

Thank you!

Glad that you liked it!😃

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

awesome update...for a change good to see a strong geet fighting goons...I think the man in vest is maan...but is he from that same khurana family or not???😕...If he is maan then the khurana who killed handa family is not maan ...r8???...confusion...confusion...lets c ...I hope ur next update will clear all my doubts...😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

kya banner hai dear
thanx to the reader who made this banner
wow loved it
why because got to see geet maa kali avatar yaar
and its fun when that happens
and why not i believe that women arent weak
you always show that in your stories
so thanx to the ajnabi who might just be maan or not our geet handa sure showed those goons what sheis made of
kya baat hai
resourceful aur bahadur ho toh geet jaise
aur helpful ho toh uss ajnabi jaisa
so they did manage to escape
well almost got caught but they made it for now
and he dont even know that the girls are hiding in his jeep
am glad geet stood up for her sister and her
good going sweetie
haiyye that was such actions packed update
and i just loved it
hmmm cant wait for more
but of course that khurana person isnt gonna let go of geet that easily
dont take panga with geet handa though
now she will fight against him for not herself but her little sister
that was pathetic how those people didnt help her but told her not to get them into trouble
thankfully ajnabi's advice she took and took matters in her own hand
cheers for pm

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

wicked loved the fight scene, continue soon

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

so Maan Singh Khurana in fray... loved it..

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Awesome update !!!!

woww punjab di sherni geet ne kali maa ka roop le liya ..loved it ..

im sure it was Maan who encouraged geet & helped her ..

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

awesome update

geet escaped safely!!!!!!!!

awesome banner

loved it!!!!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
awesome update...for a change good to see a strong geet fighting goons...I think the man in vest is maan...but is he from that same khurana family or not???😕...If he is maan then the khurana who killed handa family is not maan ...r8???...confusion...confusion...lets c ...I hope ur next update will clear all my doubts...😊

Your questions will be answered in next chapter and fifth chapter! Till then let the confusion confuse you more!😆

Thanks for the review!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: chavvi16
kya banner hai dear
thanx to the reader who made this banner

Isn't the banner simply awesome? I am in love with it!

wow loved it

Glad to read that!😃

why because got to see geet maa kali avatar yaar
and its fun when that happens
and why not i believe that women arent weak
you always show that in your stories

Yes! Girls in my stories will always be strong! And even if they are weak, they will have their reasons and they will become stronger as I write them (Hint hint: I am hinting about a story I will write after DFL, DFL one shots and DFL Second Version ends😉 )

so thanx to the ajnabi who might just be maan or not our geet handa sure showed those goons what sheis made of

I have given enough hints! If you still did not recognise the guy, then wait till next part!😆

kya baat hai
resourceful aur bahadur ho toh geet jaise
aur helpful ho toh uss ajnabi jaisa
so they did manage to escape

Yep! But they are still in danger! Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!😆

well almost got caught but they made it for now
and he dont even know that the girls are hiding in his jeep
am glad geet stood up for her sister and her
good going sweetie

Thank you!😳😃

haiyye that was such actions packed update
and i just loved it

And I am grinning like an idiot coz you loved it! Coz LJ is my first attempt in action story! Babaji! Raksha Karna!😃

hmmm cant wait for more
but of course that khurana person isnt gonna let go of geet that easily
dont take panga with geet handa though

Agreed! Geet Handa rocks!👏

now she will fight against him for not herself but her little sister
that was pathetic how those people didnt help her but told her not to get them into trouble
thankfully ajnabi's advice she took and took matters in her own hand
cheers for pm

Thanks for the review! And I am really glad that you liked this story so much! 😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_
Awesome update !!!!

woww punjab di sherni geet ne kali maa ka roop le liya ..loved it ..

im sure it was Maan who encouraged geet & helped her ..

Thanks for the review! And the truth about Maan will be out in next chappy!😃

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