Mission Impossible:The Don n The Diva part 26 pg 97 updated

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_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Awesome update !!

im sure there is something fishy with this breej ..im sure maan is nt into drugs n all bt this brij is confusing geet .!

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gurtimuskaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

both parts were superb..maaneet in past were so sweet 👍🏼

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Rosmitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Part 6 & 7 are awesome updates...

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

maan is not impressed with geet at all

but he was suspicious as to how she knows about the us company

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zaara2212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

sorry for responding so late ...
lovely start of an FF... so maan is the warrior, but why is he being suspected as a drug dealer, is there someone else... geet also feels his innocence... hope they know each other soon 😊

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gbhat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Awsum update. Maan s moves looks suspicious. Waiting for next

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

I think its Brij, the actually culprit.

Nice part

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

sorry for late response yaar...my net was not working properly so many pms accumulated in my inbox...sabko finish karte karte itne dinn ho gaye...

it is already clear from the story until now that Maan is Geet's warrior and Geet is his Choti Rani whom he promised to marry...

why is Geet not wearing that necklace...I am sure Maan will immediately recognize her if she wears that necklace Maan gave her...

but destiny is playing its own game by making Geet and Maan started falling for each other...Geet is suspicious that Maan is not what he is portrayed...he may be innocent...

I feel Brij has some ulterior motive which Geet don't know...he wants Maan to get arrested or destroyed but why?...

Geet's is a ghost agent...this is rule that she can't be in touch with anybody known from previously then why Brij is continuously calling her and that too in office extension phone where chances of the talk being heard by other person from office is very high...Brij is pressurizing her too much to trap MSK very soon...he is in such a hurry...

very interesting updates...

waiting for next part...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

hi dear! Congrats on the news story! Amazing start! Fab updates! So they have a past! She is his chiti rani n he her warrior! update soon! Well written! Caught up on all updates nw!

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maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Mission Impossible: The Don n The Diva

Chapter 8

Maan was looking at Geet who suddenly turned tensed, "Geet, I asked you whether you had been to US," Maan asked again, "No sir," Geet said immediately, "Then how did you know about wellington" Maan asked again, "Oh, Sir, I work in a project dealing with Wellington in my college," Geet said finally finding an answer, "What's your major," Maan asked slowly,

"BA English Literature," Geet said immediately and Maan looked at her puzzled, "BA English and Wellington Group Project, what's the connection" Maan asked confused, "Oh, Sir, the project, the Project was not mine, I mean, I knew an senior who was doing MBA in our college and she was not that good in language, so I help her in typing and she was doing the wellington project and as I was typing it, I also learn about the company," Geet said slowly looking down,

"Baba ji, please, make his believe it, please," Geet prayed looking down, "Hmmm, good that you have learned something new, even if it's not your field, I like that quality, an urge to learn something new," Maan said and Geet smiled big, "Thank god," Geet thought, "Call Sasha Now," Maan said and Geet nodded and used the phone in Maan's cabin and called Sasha,

"Excuse me, MK" Sasha came in and she looked at Geet with her stern look, "Sasha have you made the designs ready," Maan asked and Sasha nodded a yes, "good," Maan said and got the design files and passed it to Geet, "Geet, make an verbal outlay of this designs and bring the file before the meeting" Maan said and Geet nodded and went away with the file, and started to do her work,

While typing she found the materials chose strange, "what's this, Sasha mam had made buildings with granites and thick woods separations, but the wellington groups had always used glasses and that's their main theme too transparency but this " Geet thought but she doesn't know much about the constructions, so she left it and finished her work and took that to the conference room, in a few minutes the meeting started and everyone assembled, and Geet stood a few steps away and there was an discussion between Adi, Sasha and Maan,

And then Pinky entered in, "Excuse me sir, the clients arrived sir" she said and Maan asked her to bring them in and she too brought them in, and the meeting started, Sasha as usual presented the project and Maan and others were looking at them, as Sasha finished the project presentation, the clients looked at each other and discussed something,

"Mr.Khurana, the designs are nice and good, so what materials are you trying to put in," The manager of the wellington group's Indian venture asked, "Sir we are planning to use rough wood structure and granites for the flooring and" Sasha was saying and suddenly the room was filled with whisperings and Sasha turned silent, "What, Mr. Khurana, what is she saying, don't you know our policy," the Manager jumped up and Maan nodded,

And went near Sasha, "Sasha don't you make an study on the their previous buildings," Maan asked and Sasha looked confused, "o, MK, I was," Sasha was shocked and looking down, "Mr.Khurana, didn't we make it clear to you, how could you do an big mistake like this," he asked and Maan found an nerve to yell up, and Sasha was out of words "Excuse me sir," Geet voice came up and Maan looked at her, "Can I sir," she asked and Maan not knowing what she is gonna say nodded a yes,

"Sir, we knew your policy of using the glass walls to prove your company's policy of transparency with your customers but this is India sir, people with high emotions, and you could have see many more violence in the malls and multiplex's and using Glass would be worse sometimes and also people here are so sensitivity, and feels uncomfortable with the idea of "everyone can see everything", they would not see this as transparency but invasion of their privacy, so only Sasha mam had this idea,"

"And it's not an conformed one, I mean the work haven't started yet, so it's changeable," Geet said and Looked at Maan and Maan's face showed no reaction and was staring at Geet, "But We have a policy, it's like our uniqueness" the Manager said, "Sir, if you really need that then we can use crystal glasses, it will be looking like a glass wall, it won't be revealing and also be strong and so your uniqueness will not go away, along with peoples convince," Geet said and there was an buzz there in the place again,

After a few second the Manager turned around, I like this idea, we can proceed with it," he said and Everyone was feeling happy specially Adi , "ok Mr.Khurana we will proceed our discussion on our next meeting and today let's make the final deal," He said and Maan nodded, "I will sigh and send you the papers today," and the client group smiled and went away with a smile and Maan, Adi, Sasha and Geet was standing there and Maan turned to Sasha, "Sasha how could you be this careless, I have told you to review their pervious works and I told you about their policy too, then how did you do such an big mistake,"

"This is how you care for the fame of this company, look at this girl, just came here before two days and she stepped up to save our companies name, and if it wasn't for her, not only this project would have gone but also our reputation would have gone forever," Maan yelled and Sasha looked down," Sorry MK" She said, "Now Get out," Maan yelled and she rushed out, and Geet too was scared seeing Maan's anger and started to Moved away as Adi too had gone,

"Geet," Maan voice made her to stop, "Good work, you saved this project and saved my companies name and you have a nice presence of mind, good, you were not so brain less like I thought," Maan said and Geet was shocked and a happiness was raising in her heart hearing his words, and she turned speechless, "Keep it up," Maan said and Geet started at him with her wide eyes, "Geet," he yelled pulling her out of her stare,

"What, take those files and go and make the changes and include your idea and finish it," Maan said and Geet nodded and went and took the files and turned to Maan who was walking away, and Geet smiled big, she felt like dancing, "Maan sir, praised me, finally, he said something good about me," Geet thought and was smiling up and felt like jumping up and down, and she looked at the window and opened it up, and sweet evening breeze hit her face,

Geet felt like screaming high, "Finally I impressed him, thank god," Geet said to herself, and stopped but why am I feeling this much happiness, I mean it's just a small thing and he just was impressed by me but my heart is feeling like," Geet closed her eyes, and she remember this kind of happy feelings raised in her heart only when her warrior praised her little doings, and Geet opened her eyes now,

And turned up, "why do his all activities remind me of my Warrior," Geet thought confused and slowly went away, and as Maan said she finished her works and completed her files and went to her home, and that day and night fully Geet was feeling the happiness after a long time, jumping with joy, even if she controlled it.

Geet went and took her locket, "Warrior, you know, today after a long time, I was feeling so happy, that too because of that boss, I am really missing you warrior, I am in India only, please come to me, please, somehow, you promised me right, please come to me" Geet wished, "Baba ji, I had always prayed for this moment only na, please Bring my Warrior back into my life, please,"

In the Khurana Mansion, Maan came finishing his practice, "she is not that bad, she has some brain, and can't believe that she spoke up with such a guts and clarity before the clients without any fear," Maan thought and stopped for a minutes, "what the hell, why am I thinking about her," Maan thought, "that girls really creepy me out, it's like she is trying to haunt me or something, can't get the crazy girl out of my mind" Maan thought and went to his sleep,

And as usual he wished only one thing, "God, please keep my Choti Rani happy and safe, until I find her, make all her wishes come true and keep her smiling, give me troubles all her troubles and give her only the happiness" Maan wished his usual and slept of thinking of his little angel,

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Morning sun was shine on the Khurana Mansion and Maan jumped up and was got ready in no minutes, and rushed down his stairs, when his phone rang, "Bro," Dev's Maan's Brother's voice screamed up as Maan took the call, "Dev," Maan smiled up, "Bro, how are you," Dev shouted and Maan said he is fine, "Bro, my exams over bro, so I am coming to India with Dadi Maa," He shouted up, "Really, That's great," Maan said,

"Bro, please, do all your works soon and be free, so you can spend so much of time with me when I come there, ok," Dev said and Maan said an yes, "ok bro, see you soon, love you bro, love you so much" Dev voice screamed before he cut the call, and Maan too cut the call, Maan felt happy as he was going to see after three years but suddenly his smile vanished and an fear filled him, "I need to increase the protection details, if Dev comes here," Maan thought turning serious and rushed to his office,

Maan walked in to his office and stop suddenly looking at the front, before him Geet was standing there and trying to removed her dupatta from the artificial craft plant there, Maan saw that and tried to go away but something stopped her seeing her cute struggle, Maan slowly went towards her and tried to pull her dupatta and Geet touched his hands and stopped and turned to look at him,

And she was frozen up to see Maan standing close to her and looking at her and her hands on his hands, and her heart beat started to raise up, Maan too looked at her and could feel her raising heart beat alone with his own, and they both stood there frozen up,

Mere maula maula Mere maula
Man matwala kyun hua hua re
Man maula maula Mere maula
Mere maula

Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
Kis taraf zaameen
Khabar nahi Khabar nahi

Jab se aaya hai sanam
Mujhko khud ki bhi khabar nahi
Khabar nahi

Hosh gul sapno ki mein bandhu pull
Aankh kab khuli
Khabar nahi khabar nahi

Hoo hoo
Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
Kis taraf zaameen
Khabar nahi Khabar nahi

Mere maula maula Mere maula
Man matwala kyun hua hua re
Man maula maula Mere maula
Mere maula

Both Maan and Geet forgot their own state and stood there staring at each other and finally Maan realized himself and turned away and Geet too pulled from his hypnotic stare and looked away, and Maan released her dupatta and let it down and Geet stood there embarrassed, "Geet be careful" Maan said and walked away and Geet stood there confused and feeling an excitement, and rushed to her cabin,

"What the hell is wrong with me, why was I staring at her, what will she think about me," Maan thought tensed and feeling nervous, "Maan, you have faced encounters with so many beautiful actress, models and business women but your mind had never felt this excitement or even a small attention or any kind of feeling towards them, then why Geet, why," Maan thought hitting the table there and was walking.

Geet to went and was so confused, "Baba ji, what's this, whenever I see him I get struck, totally blank, it's like I forget myself and totally hypnotized by his look, his deep stare, I feel like I could stay into eyes forever, why Baba ji why, this is totally stupid" Geet thought and suddenly she felt something and turned around and saw Maan looking at her from his cabin and she again was caught inside his eyes,

Aayega woh is intezaar mein
Ud chala dil wahan
Sapne jahan mein janu

Lagta hai woh mere kareeb hai
Aisa kyun hai magar
Dhunde nazar beqabu

Hosh gul sapno ki mein bandhu pull
Aankh kab khuli
Khabar nahi khabar nahi

Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
Kis taraf zaameen
Khabar nahi Khabar nahi

Jab se aaya hai sanam
Mujhko khud ki bhi khabar nahi
Khabar nahi

Hosh gul sapno ki mein bandhu pull
Aankh kab khuli
Khabar nahi khabar nahi

Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
Kis taraf zaameen
Khabar nahi Khabar nahi

They both frozen up until Maan's phone rang and Maan turned away, "What this, what's happing to me," Geet thought and her hands shivered up, "God, is he falling for me or am I falling for him, what is wrong with me, why can't I resist him, Baba ji, why," Geet thought and felt nervous and turned around..

Precap: Maan finds the truth.. (Hope you all had an lovely weekend,,, Love you all)

Edited by mayarhea - 11 years ago