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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: COLOGY
Maan must be THE husband
Lol how can anyone just let stranger to kiss n yet stay numb ! If it is not i wanna see this not so right act turning into a great surprise...

You must be obsessed with writing your own experience in fiction too😆 i,e I-F n chatting.

Waiting for the revelation :)

You think? Lets see, shall we?😛

He kissed her suddenly, She had no chance to react. Let's see how she reacts shall we?😉

Facts are always the inspiration for fiction. I am no different. IF is part of my daily life, so it had to show up somewhere right?😆

May have to wait a little bit more for the revelation😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
will read once done :)

Sure Madhu. Take your time. That's a wise decision, especially when I am the writer😉😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: _lehar_
congrats for the new story
nice start
loved it
geet married whom..?
maan secretly loving her from last four years
and the kiss at the end was just superb

Thanks😃

for now I can't say anything😉

Hmm. Did mention four years anywhere?😕

Never mind you will know more as you read along😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos
Nice. I think it is the result of crazy ideas in Geet and/or Maan's head. To make the life interesting...

That sounds like a good idea for another story😆

But not this one.

Everything that has happened so far is real in the fictional world of my story. Hmm. That sounds more confusing then ever, doesn't it?

Never mind.

But he really did kiss her.

That much is true😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya
interesting start and so many puzzles...waiting...

I love creating puzzles😛

I hope you like solving them😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Koi mera rejerbe nahi kiya. I hate you.
Waise where is she having her latte chai, whipped whatever that thing was 😆
Tell me it's starbucks please pretty please?

Di me loves you, so very much and me loved this story.:D

Sowwie. Bhool gayi.😛

Next time I will.

Yep. Those are starbucks menu drinks.

I was struck with inspiration for this story at a Starbucks.

And there is a reason it has to be starbucks. It is in their cup markings😉

More will be revealed later😛

Me love you too, you bratty, bratty brat🤗

The story keeps changing in my mind.

But the essence remains the same.

I hope you will like where I am taking it😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: divya22
Nyc start...
At 1st go i din understand much... but den i rrad it again..
N i think mujhe thoda samajha..
Wel i think maan is her husband...
Dat old lady was looking at him in horror n pity.. n said sumthing abt some flaw...
Maan k face ko kuch hua hai kya??
N is dis d reason y he was away from geet...
evn geet mentioned dat ger husband is not here... n maan said he is seeing hr after so long...

Hmm. Your logical reasoning is extremely good.😉

Lets see if he is indeed her husband shall we?😛

Can't answer any of your questions for now. 😉

But you will find them soon enough😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: mayyo
"Is there more to the title of the story than just a title?" was what came to my mind when I read it.

All I can say for now is the title is the essence of the story.😳

Right now, I am not going to type out any guesses I made because they're probably wrong. 😆

If your guess is that it's a amnesia story like "Notebook" and Geet is like Rachel McAdams then let me say that you are way off mark.😉
Ok that is all I can say.
If you have heard of it then you would know what is up with Geet, if not you wouldn't guess.
I only knew about it after reading a book and then I did some research on it.

I'm just going to take the story as it comes. And yes, the IF addiction is so so relatable. (Even the reason behind that, for me) 😳

If addiction... the bane of all our lives and that of our family members.😆

Mayyo I am so glad you are here with me for this story too.🤗
Though I still haven't completed the first one😆

Welcome to ITEOTB( that sounds almost as confusing as the story itself😆)
❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ---nishu---
first
i was like

what was that that
and than

he can never be gentle

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hi dear
congrats for new start
and you simply rocked

Hey Nishu.

Glad to have you here😃

That that and that was just the start of the story😆

Aagey aagey dekhiye hota hain kya😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
congrats..
interesting start...
geet married quite introvert!!!
n maan knows her...bt she didnt paid any attention to him...
did just maan kissed her n stormed of or its his dream !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
will wait to read more...

Hey Dona glad to have you here😳

Its more then introrvertness. Or rather there is a reason for the being so.

Yep he knows her.

As for the kiss it absolutely happened. It was not imagination.😉

Hang on and all will be revealed in time.😛