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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
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oh...hilarious start...poor maan...kaha phas gaya...phir se geet ne use ullu bana diya...late current kahi ka...and parneetda asked him what had happened...😆...but the end was sad..

Thanks Madhuri Bai. 😉

Geet toh sidhe muh jawab deti hai. Ab agar woh ullu ban jata hai, toh usme Geet ki kya galti hai😆

She means no offense.😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: Deelight
nyc update... sheddin som light on Maan's past reasons Maan's current behaviour.. continue soon

Thanks. Glad you liked it.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: kavya.sravya
superb !! maan will not touch or gift flowers casually in his life time again...!! aur kya kya dhamakas denewali hai...this geet...

Thanks Kavya.

He will not be able to stay away from flowers, believe me😆

I am glad you like Geet the bomb😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Hilarious, interesting story and Fantastic writing. I was laughing throughout while reading it (except the last sad part of chapter 5)

I am loving these Maaneet characters, especially Geet. She is an unique piece, with brain full of chemical lotcha (in a positive way)...nicely dissecting everyone nah not everyone, every object that comes across her path.

Maan will soon forget his real cricket skills...he is getting clean bowled with her googly every time he encounters with her.

And Maan, who initially looked like flirty, rich spoiled brat, has gloomy past where he lost the bright, sports loving kid inside him due to the incident with his brother.

An apt title for the story...for this craziness in Geet as well as for Maan who in the past thought her as unattractive but is slowly losing himself to her charms.

Thanks for the high praise. I am glad you liked it. She is the way she is for a reason. There really is a lotcha insdie her.😃

I loved the cricket analogy you gave.😆

Welcome to ITEOTB and I hope you will enjoy the story to come, though I am going to lose the comical tone along the way.😃