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Originally posted by: -Orchid-

Awesome update

Originally posted by: mauaa

loved it😃

Originally posted by: ammu5

superb update...loved them

Originally posted by: _lehar_

awesome part
loved it
maan older brother sameer is guide and but maam lost him in terrorist attack when he went to get cricket for maan
geet doesn't leave any chance to make him embarrased
eagerly waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: Ash1991

Superb update...
Loved it...geet is a masterpiece..

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 5 : 👏

Lovely how you give a glimpse of the life of Maan and why does he have this repulsion form his college ... His father and the way he wants to fight it all and also about his Brother and their relation.

The story is just running away from me and the characters are taking a life of their own. I am trying to squeeze the breath out of them to shorten the story and they are rebelling by supplying new shades and colors to their own character.😳

Parneet and his married man woes 😆 Aditti and his own interpretation of the extra "T" 😆

She spells her name with a double 'T' and that's where I got the idea.😃

Geet certainly has a fascination for reproductive organs be it human or flowers. 🤣 wonder what would have Mariam felt if Maan had listened to Geet's way of getting in the good books of the librarian. 😉

That was the exact thought Avi had. I thought it would be a little too much for your Twinnie and I let her off the hook. However if she doesn't behave, I can always send Maan after her, with a bunch and a reproductive message 😆

Thanks Doc. So glad to have you here.🤗

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

part 2-5
finally read them n laugh like mad
geet is crazy literally...
loved the updates

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

hahahhahahhahaha... again an amazing update

poor maan, always got scared by geet somehow

now got to know d reason behind maan's so cool attitude toward everything

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

great update...

Originally posted by: maneetloveu

Omg thats outstanding writing.i loved it especialy geet thoughts behaviour loved her.poor maan he happen to see diff shades of geet. Geet theory abt flower is hilarious.i think from nowon words one should be offended when fower given not the sketch of that realy so good