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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad



Avi, Kittu please do read... coz all your nightmares will come true😆😆

Par kitna chotu chapter that. Shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gaya.
I want a double update next time.
Waise you know, I don't mind Geet being not in love. I can relate to that on a personal level😉
And when she does fall, I know how crazy he'll drive her.😃



Are you convincing them to read or scaring them away? 😆

Actually, this was one of the shortest chapters and there's only numbered of them left before the length stretches uncontrollably! And the next one is longer than this one so I think it should make up a bit.

That is... well... what I have planned. But I don't know how I'm going to go about it.
Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


Maybe. It still might take a day and a half for them to affect me. Now you decide if they're of use or not. 😆


Ok let me spread them intermittently then. Starting with this one😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


Are you convincing them to read or scaring them away? 😆

Actually, this was one of the shortest chapters and there's only numbered of them left before the ke the stretches uncontrollably! And the next one is longer than this one so I think it should make up a bit.

That is... well... what I have planned. But I don't know how I'm going to go about it.


Can't scare them away. Kittu needs her fix. She might try to stay away but she just won't be able to. Just watch😆
Like wise with Avi. Though you will probably...no definitely...get a lot more red face along the way😆

With the length of the chapters, can't really sink my teeth into the them. They are over before I can taste them. Though they do leave me craving for more.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Can't scare them away. Kittu needs her fix. She might try to stay away but she just won't be able to. Just watch😆
Like wise with Avi. Though you will probably...no definitely...get a lot more red face along the way😆

With the length of the chapters, can't really sink my teeth into the them. They are over before I can taste them. Though they do leave me craving for more.😃

Kissi ne mera naam liya aur main yahaan hu, yahaan hu, yahaan hu, yahaan...
Opening arms up SRK style...
😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Kissi ne mera naam liya aur main yahaan hu, yahaan hu, yahaan hu, yahaan...
Opening arms up SRK style...
😆😆😆


Running Zinta style to Avi's arms...eeks.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Running Zinta style to Avi's arms...eeks.😆

Gir gayi? Ha ha...😆😆
Writing until my fingers are like claws today...
How are you? Oh I meant how is dear Jiju? Poor guy! Kuch khilaya ya nahi?😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

I have people in my life who are like them. Getting them to talk is like trying to squeeze the last of the toothpaste out of the tube. Very little comes out, even after squeezing so hard.
They do talk, but they rarely share. They feel too much and they hold it all in, until they implode in on themselves.
So yeah, I guess I understand Geet's character. She is just like our Mayyo.😆

When I started reading this, I thought, "that sounds like me" and by the end of it, you removed any doubt I could have. Why, oh why, am I still unsuccessful in separating Geet from myself?!

No!! We complain, we crib coz our emotions are involved to such an extent. If we didn't care, this is all we'd say👍🏼
Not analyze and reanalyze it to death.😆

With unsatisfying, I was mainly pointing towards my own thoughts. I can't seem to be happy about it one way or the other.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad



Ok let me spread them intermittently then. Starting with this one😆
😔


Let's see how long this little one takes. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad



Can't scare them away. Kittu needs her fix. She might try to stay away but she just won't be able to. Just watch😆
Like wise with Avi. Though you will probably...no definitely...get a lot more red face along the way😆

With the length of the chapters, can't really sink my teeth into the them. They are over before I can taste them. Though they do leave me craving for more.😃


Haan red faces toh pakka milenge. 😆

If they leave you craving for more, mission successful! 😆

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