MG- SS-The Mist-Thread 14 - UPDATED-Epilogue-Final Part/Pg 118/9th Feb - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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tum mujhr 2 post bhi nahi dete..😆😆
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Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 fir to update abhi dalna pdega..
fir baaten anhi hoti..😊
daal du kya..??



yeh bhi koi poochne waali baath hai kya😆😆daaldo jaldi

tab aaram se baatein karsakthe hai

kitne din hogaye hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊 Updating...






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For banner credit goes to my dear Mona ....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.














Part - 100- B



Two-three ppl from d group try to force Mahi to take back d complaint giving many excused * they said that he took d responsibility of that family so it is his duty to care for their wellbeing * Brij's In-laws gave excuses for their daughter's future * they wr again and again forcing Mahi and when it became unbearable for Geet she stood .

Geet: koi compromise nahi hoga ab * aap sab ko enki jyada fikar hei to le jao apne sath * apni bahan - beti ki thodi si responsibility aap log bhi utha lo hum hi ku uthayen ? Mahinder Singh ji ki ab koi responsibility nahi hei ess family ke liye... enki beti etni badi ho gai hei ki logo ko loot ker kha sake aur beta dusron ki beti kidnap kerne laga * enn nek aur acche kaamo mei aap sab enki madad kero , Mahinder Singh ji koi help nahi karenge * complaint maine ki hei * kidnap mera hua tha aapki beti ka nahi * aap logo ki beti ki izzat aur zindgi daav per lagi hoti to pata chalta * ab aap log ja sakte hei aage jo kahan-sunna hei PS mei kahana .


All kept quiet and Promila used her last weapon * she started her crying session which irked Geet more.


Geet: ye rone ka drama ker -ker ke bahot loota hei tumne lekin ab ense kuch nahi hone wala * tumhara beta apne aap accept kerega apna gunah * jao yahan se .


Seeing no effect of all this Promila started shouting again on Geet in frustration .


Promila: tu manhoos hei ess musibat ki jadd , tujhe marr hi dalta to accha tha * teri wajah se mere bte ko ye din dekhna pada ... her relatives held her and dragged her with them * they also felt that she and Brij r wrong and d matter was out off their hands * it was a police case and they saw Geet determination * they never saw Geet and her blunt replies made them mute * all knew that which Promila and Brij have today was all bcoz of Mahi so they can't blame Mahinder .


All went out empty handed and Rano and Maan came out * both wr watching all d drama from d window * all sat there to decide next step .

Maan: Geet , i think now we can talk on this .


Geet: hmmm ,, police got my mob phone from him and rest he'll accept very soon * his four paid crime partners who kidnapped me from mall r underground and truck driver and his helper r still free * i have to talk Rathod uncle * Rano aunty i want med certificate of my injuries .


Rano: i'll give u TM .


Geet called Rathod and told him to take further steps and try to keep everything under wrap * he assured her for that.


Maan forced Mahi to come with him in KM and Rano to advise him to go there coz it was not good to live alone .


Rano left for her home and Maan,Geet and Mahi came back to KM where they got d news that Promila called Dadima and requested her to force Geet to take back her case against Brij but Dadima smartly kept her away saying that it was her family matter and talk to Mahinder and Geet regarding this * d damage created by her daughter was enough for them * YSK called d leader of cops , all talked and decided to hand d matter to police and those two guys also * Rathod was also known to police commissioner and he insisted him to look after d matter carefully .


Everything was set and next day Geet filed d case against Brij * they started their investigation keeping Brij in remand * after two -three days of torture Brij accepted everything and spoke out all d names who helped him * d story he told to police was like this ...


He hate Mahinder and Geet from childhood and wanted everything for him coz he was d only son/ waris of d family all relatives and his Maa always told him that everything was belong to him only * Mahinder owned a large sum of property and after him only he was d only owner but bcoz of his daughter it was impossible * she insulted him , stopped his bills and he lost d contract bcoz of her * Mahinder gave him only a company and a Haweli and rest of his property he kept for his daughter * even Mahinder also insulted him for cheating his friend * it was a big lose for him so in his anger and hatred he planned to kidnap her and asked 10cr but his plan back fired and police caught two guys * he ordered to kill d Geet but didn't know how she escaped ?


In next few days police caught rest of d culprits and they accepted their crime taking Brij's name who hire them for kidnapping a girl * police made a strong case of kidnapping and attempt to murder and sent Brij and his partners to jail for long term .


In starting some relatives and Promila tried hard to force Mahinder but he refused outrightly . Rajji and Kamal wr very shocked after knowing this and they also backed Geet .


After that incident Maan was forcing Geet to leave d job and join KC * Geet was doing her office work from home( opt work at home ) coz of injuries from last week * she was in dilemma, one side she can't hurt Maan refusing his request and other side she can't sit at home * KC was a construction co. And her field was diff. * she has to start her coaching classes for CAT also and needed time * It was Sunday eve and all were in Patio in family gathering * Mahi and Rano wr also invited and Maan put his point again in front of all to make pressure on Geet and Geet gave a deadly glare to him which he ignored shrugging his shoulders with a wink to tease her .


YSK: Guddu , beta Maan is right and we'll be happy if u join KC.


Dadima: haan beta , hum bhi yahi chahate hei , Maan ke sath nahi jana to matt jao , u r welcome in my NGO she teased Maan with a naughty smile .


Maan: Dadima plzz.


Mahi: Guddu, u can start ur own venture and i'm free to help u , i'm agree with Maan.


Geet: give me few days to think , right now i'm very confused .


All gave their suggestions and support to her * At night Geet was chatting on IF and Maan was gesturing at her to shut d lappy but Geet was ignoring him and when it became unbearable for Maan he got angry.


Maan: Geet what is this yaar , band karo isse .


Geet: ku , bada uchal rahe thy neeche , u wr teasing me na , now go and sleep , don't talk to me.

Maan: Geet ,( he held her hand ) baki sab bhi to wahi chahaty hei jo mai , esme bura kya hei , aur pahale tum ye IF band karo , its over 12 and ur time is up.


Geet: Maan aap bahot manmaani kernel age ho , meri bilkul nahi sunte .

Maan: tumhari sunne ke liye aur apni kahane ke liye hi band kara raha hun , yaar ye married girls ke liye IF ban hona chahiye , ye to meri Soutan banta ja raha hei .


Geet laughed out at his condition , he was so eagerly waiting for her to close d lappy * at last she closed that , put that aside and snuggled to him ,,, happy .


Maan with a pout: i'll remove this net from KM if u tease me like this .


Geet: and i'll shift to my Den very next moment Mr Angry Bird .

Maan : accha Dhamki , MSK ko , abhi batata hun , ab to chot theek ho gai na , aaj tumhari khair nahi Geet * he pounced at her and started his sweet torturing * from last many days he was holding himself coz of her injuries but tonight he became untamed and he pour out all his blocking feelings * loved her with all his passion whole night with small intervals * they slept in wee hours * she was sore and tired sleeping clinging to him .


Their phone alarm wr buzzing again and again and at last he opened his eyes and looked at her face which was lil dull today with tiredness and she have some marks of his passion on her collar bone and shoulders * her lips swelled due to his hard kisses * he smiled and packed softly at all her places * she was in deep sleep and didn't wake up * he got up and went to washroom to freshen up * came out and prepared coffee for both * he settled in d blanket , woke her up and dragged her in his lap lovingly ,,,tired ,,, hmmm ,,, have coffee .

He handed her a mug and then took his * both had their morning Coffee with Love * after that he wrapped her in her shawl and brought in d washroom * he placed her in d tub filled with warm water ,,, stay in it for some time Geet , it'll sooth ur body ache,, hmmm.


He came out and arranged d room, collected their scattered clothes and put them in cloth bin * then took out dresses for both and placed them on bed * Geet took her bath and came out in a bathrobe * she was looking fresh now * she looked d room and d dresses and gave him an adorable smile for his care * she hugged him ,,, aapne ku kiya?

Maan: sshhh ,, chup , get ready and i'll drop u at office .


She didn't argue but decided something *** both got ready and went out after taking their BF * he dropped her at her office gate and then went to his * In office Geet submit her Resignation giving d reason to attend d coaching for MBA and then exam.


Precap - Maaneet's 1st Marriage anniversary ...


Part - 101

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3904733/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-14-updated-epilogue-final-part-pg-118-9th-feb?pn=74



Sorry for mistakes.


😊 this is my new Start...

The Torment
Part - 1




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Posted: 11 years ago
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iss promila ko tappad maarkar bhi akal tikane pe nahi aaya aur phirse nautanki shuru kiya😡😡par iss baar wo mahi se nahi balki sherni geet se panga liya aur bhugat bhi liya😆😆😆

brij ka patta saaf hogaya ab. maan kitni aasani se geet ko phasa diya apne saath office mein kaam karne kelilye sab ko uska side leliya

geet ne resign kiya
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaj maitri jaroor kahegi dekho priya aagayi aur baazi maari😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya111111

aaj maitri jaroor kahegi dekho priya aagayi aur baazi maari😆


mauaa ko aane me to der hai abhi bhi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24



😊

tum mujhr 2 post bhi nahi dete..😆😆



lo dediya😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon


mauaa ko aane me to der hai abhi bhi



babie ko update abhi dene ko kaha 😆😆nahi tho wo raat ko hi dene waali thi

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