MG ~FF~ ILTEJA ~ PART 4 pg/23 || June 3rd || - Page 7

Originally posted by: tanvinangia

Awww!

Update was so dreamy n ssuperb 😳😳

Geet's madness for Maan sorry sorry her "ROCKSTAR"

hayeee aisa rockstar ho toh kon paagal nahi ho jayega 😆😆

Geet's dad also know about the madness of his daughter hehehe😆😆

Dev is Maan's brother n Geet's friend hopefully he will paly a role of cupid between Maaneet..😆😆

haye cant wait for Maan's entry..

And the song u chose one of my most fav song and moreover Dev's comments in song were so damn hillarious 🤣

u wont believe after reading update i saw that song video

5 -6 times before commenting i was lost in SRK 😉😉

Phir yaad aya comment karna so bhaag k aayi otherwise joote padte tujhse 😆😆

Loved every bit of update starting itni dreamy hai toh pata nahi aage kya hoga..

i'm going greedy now another update puhleaseee😆😆

Greedy Me 😉

love you for starting my story❤️

Update next soon 😉🤪

Aaj mujhe neend nahi aayegi waise bhi exams ki tension and now toh me in SRK n Maaneet's dreamland..😳😳

Mere khawabon mein jo aaye 😆😆

Originally posted by: zariya123

the song with dev commentary is awesome

shubha is dev's gf?????????

n family fixed dev with geet???

Originally posted by: sdlife19

The entire update was like dreamy.. just way like kajol's tat is simran from DDLJ...

Though here geet knows who maan is and her madness is just like... she never wants to part from tat and probably he is not even aware about her madness for him even being family friends...

so dev is married but very close to geet and spends most of the time with her... and the same is not liked by his wife...

PART 2:

Geet yeh dekh ... Natasha passed the pamphlet hiding it from the professor, she guessed that her friend was already aware of the concert that is scheduled in the evening. Geet glared her holding the paper coz she realized that the person who was not supposed to know it had seen what chemical reactions which were happening between her and her friend.

Miss Geet ... get out, Now!! Professor ordered making her to give a meek smile. She didn't complain but just left the room. Nuts followed her as she was a crime partner too ... both were talking and she was not interested in his lecture either.

Dev kaha hai?? You came alone ... anything wrong?? She tried to match up her steps with Geet who was walking away in hurry. Geet was looking at her phone searching for the train timings to reach Brisbane. It will take atleast two hours to reach the venue ... she cant afford missing the concert. She didn't bother to answer Nuts.

Meri baat ka jawab toh de ... Don't tell me that you are going alone, no ways Geet I am not letting you leave, she stood in front of Geet stopping her.

Nuts I am getting late ... Teri faltu baaton ke liye mere paas time nahi hai, over protective hona band kar ... I am not a kid anymore ... She pulled out her car keys and slipped inside the car. Nuts came around and took the seat beside ... Dev kaha hai??

Mere bathroom mein ... band kar diya maine usse waha, masti kar raha tha mere saath, she drove away ... the car was in super speed.

Tere papaji gussa karenge Geet, baat samajh

Karne de ... woh gussa kab nahi hote?? She retorted smiling at her friends innocence. Nuts texted Dev about Geet expecting that he would land up at the right time to atleast rescue them.

She stopped the car at the railway station and ran like a zombie to catch the train, Nuts was getting chocked to even match up her speed. Once both of them stepped onto the train, Geet giggled falling down ... Paani de, she said holding the support.

Yeh kya pagalpan hai?? I just gave you the pamphlet, it didn't mean that you will do these adventures to reach the concert, she handed the bottle of water to Geet.

Tu aur teri stupid se challenges, I am tired yaar ... Sachi itni badi pagal ko maine apni poori zindagi mein nahi dekhi, Geet threw the bottle and giggled. She was lucky to have friends like Dev and Nuts, her life was nothing without them ... As much as she loved Maan, she loved these two idiots ... Or probably more.

She was only fourteen when she proposed Maan in a family party as Khurana's and Wardhan's were family friends. Maan was almost seven years elder to her, and music was his passion since his childhood. He knew what exactly he wanted from life, he had realized long back that its only music that can make him survive. That was the love he had on singing, and he was always focused with what he was to do in future. Geet was simply his deewani something which he was aware too, but her simple confession couldn't reach him. Her parents were worried about her, they wanted her to be good with studies so that she would take over their business. Maan didn't want her to spoil her life in her madness ... So was the reason when she proposed he gave a promise that he will think over if she finishes her Masters with distinction. Since then she had always topped, now she was almost finishing her finance like he wanted. One more month and she will be free, she will go back and tell Maan how much she loves him ... She was sure that he would accept her. After that party Maaneet didn't meet,

Geet would never fail to miss his concerts anywhere, even if she had to travel out of country she would do it. Though she misses her classes, she makes up a point that she finishes her studies.

Her reverie broke when the train arrived at the destination, she checked the time ... 6:30 ... Yes Geet, you could do it, she again cabbed to reach her Maan. To see him directly probably after two months, he had given a concert in Dubai last time and only she knows how she managed to reach to have a glimpse of him.

Geet was so excited to reach inside the hall ... This time the theme was a rock concert, full of electric guitars, bass guitars and drums. She so much loved it when Maan would hold that guitar be it of any type.

She could manage reaching to the front, so that she could see him in action ... lights got dim, Geet literally had goosebumps ... After a long time Maan Singh Khurana would be performing. She blushed ... The atmosphere around turned gushing with loud noises ... All the people who were present were around of Geet's age. She was thrilled when she saw a shadow wearing that silvery jacket being illuminated with a laser light only focused on his back.

Maan turned around and removed the jacket, threw it off ... holding the guitar in hand he began to sing giving flying kisses to all the girls.

Bach ke zara zara, shaitaniyan meri, oh ladies, oh ladies
Kar ke zara zara bemaaniyan meri, oh ladies, oh ladies

Few fainted with his attitude ... While few gave him his kisses back, Geet was so lost in him ... she yelled his name probably for nth time.

Karoon seena zori seena zori, tumhe hona ho manzoor
Phir dil ki chori, dil ki chori hai mera kya kasoor
Kya karoon oh ladies
Oo kya karoon oh ladies main hoon aadat se majboor

Backstage dancers joined him ... All were girls, Maan was actually standing as one among them. The were dancing according to his tunes.

Huzoor, huzoor main hoon aadat se majboor
Huzoor, huzoor main hoon aadat se majboor

He threw the cap of his, girls pounced on in like it was their life ... no one had idea who was that lucky girl to claim it. Geet didn't spare a glance ... She was busy ogling Maan, admiring him and his features.

Ricky Bahl baby and he's smooth as silk
Before you can blink this cat drinks the milk
.. in different wherever you go
You never seen him coming, keep switching his moves
Cha-me-leon keeps changing his colour, conman baby he ain't you lover
Con's karne ki hai khujli, chakma deke he's out of there quickly

She threw the water bottle on him and screamed his name going gaga on his looks ... Her eyes twinkled when for the first time he had seen her. It took some time for him to recover, he knelt down offering his hand to the girl ... do you wanna dance he asked almost making Geet breathless. Maan helped her to step on the stage,

Seedha nahin tedha Bio-data mera
Lipstick se likhna hai mujhe

She landed on his chest with the force he dragged her ... Maan smudged Geet's lipstick with his fingers.

Har ek haseena ke bank account ke
Debit mein dikhna hai mujhe
Zara ji hazuri ji hazuri
Main karta hoon zaroor
Phir dil ki chori dil ki chori
Hai mera kya kasoor
Kya karoon oh ladies
Oo kya karoon oh ladies main hoon aadat se majboor

Geet was thud ... She felt like she was dreaming, Maan Singh Khurana just touched her ... Omg, she was truly dreaming. She closed her eyes getting scared checking out the audience,

Aankhon ke neeche se kajal chura loon main (chura loon main)
Aisi safai hai meri

Maan saw Geet's closed eyes, he caressed them with his fingers

Entry hai phoonk si, exit toofan hai
Yeh muh dikhaai hai meri
Kholun har tijori har tijori
Haan main toh hoon mashoor
Phir dil ki chori, dil ki chori hai mera kya kasoor

She stared at him when few bodyguards of Maan held her arm to guide her back ... Geet didn't want to go. She pouted to reach back, she hated it.

Kya karoon oh ladies
Oo kya karoon oh ladies main hoon aadat se majboor
Huzoor, huzoor main hoon aadat se majboor
Huzoor, huzoor main hoon aadat se majboor
Main hoon aadat se majboor
Main hoon aadat se majboor

No ... She wanted to meet him, talk to him for once ... Geet was about to go back when she felt a tug. She turned around to see Dev glaring her.

Precap: Prologue part 😳

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