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Posted: 11 years ago
aww maan missing each other badly..😳😳 poor maan..very cute TSR pls update soon yaar..
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Posted: 11 years ago
At last read the update...Sorry for late comment...
Thks for the long update...the initial lovey dovey movements and Baba Adam...all so well written
Uff Brij...so not a Thakur...the bad bloods runs in him...
Maan's typical reaction to Giit leaving...Anger...uff
Loved Dadi's way of handling Maan and then the teasing and naughty Maan...Loved his explaination of Motu Geet
So Brij and Geet in Hoshiapur
😕 😕

A teasing teaser...Waiting eagely
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Posted: 11 years ago
I don't know what you might be thinking but I'm here Ji and Maafi if I have let you down in any way .. Just have not read any of the chapters posted since the new Year.. not even Laal Ishq (though I mentioned to u that I am about to read the story the moment I was sending the email to u,but I couldn't)...

I have reasons 😳 😵

You(Aap) and your story is very special for me ..I have always felt a sense of attachment to your writing and the way you interact with us .. respect that so much, and I have been going through a time where I had no time for myself barring the night which I would use to either catch up on sleep or IF.. I did read others but yours I just couldn't without commiting myself to write back to u ! So here I'm back today ..have a lil more liberty to sit and write to u and many others writers to whom I owe a few words on my part. So today is my catching up day on Locket .. I hope to write back to u ..and I'm am so damn scared that maybe I'm late and this locket is on its last bead of completion..but if it is then its my fault for not being a part of it ..

Happy writing Ji and happy reading to me hehee 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

I don't know what you might be thinking but I'm here Ji and Maafi if I have let you down in any way .. Just have not read any of the chapters posted since the new Year.. not even Laal Ishq (though I mentioned to u that I am about to read the story the moment I was sending the email to u,but I couldn't)...

I have reasons 😳 😵

You(Aap) and your story is very special for me ..I have always felt a sense of attachment to your writing and the way you interact with us .. respect that so much, and I have been going through a time where I had no time for myself barring the night which I would use to either catch up on sleep or IF.. I did read others but yours I just couldn't without commiting myself to write back to u ! So here I'm back today ..have a lil more liberty to sit and write to u and many others writers to whom I owe a few words on my part. So today is my catching up day on Locket .. I hope to write back to u ..and I'm am so damn scared that maybe I'm late and this locket is on its last bead of completion..but if it is then its my fault for not being a part of it ..

Happy writing Ji and happy reading to me hehee 😳

I have missed you😃 Reasons with a blush?😆😆 or is it Avi's overactive imagination..😆😆
Whenever you catch up I will be waiting to read eagerly.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UNICORN75

At last read the update...Sorry for late comment...
Thks for the long update...the initial lovey dovey movements and Baba Adam...all so well written
Uff Brij...so not a Thakur...the bad bloods runs in him...
Maan's typical reaction to Giit leaving...Anger...uff
Loved Dadi's way of handling Maan and then the teasing and naughty Maan...Loved his explaination of Motu Geet
So Brij and Geet in Hoshiapur
😕 😕

A teasing teaser...Waiting eagerly

Why the frowny face? Do you not want Brij to get his dhulaaii?
Happy times are coming as the story ends soon. Thanks for the support
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Posted: 11 years ago
aap ko kahi aur bhi tho hona tha 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


I have missed you😃 Reasons with a blush?😆😆or is it Avi's overactive imagination..😆😆
Whenever you catch up I will be waiting to read eagerly.



Hehee ...no Ji that's the only smiley I like so much to use ..I have no reason to blush !! Should have clarified ..Hum itney khush naseeb Nahi ke kisi ki nazar se humari nazar jhukh jaaye ..Abhi Ishq hua Nahi ke Mohabbat ka laal rang chad jaaye ..
.wah wah... I think I do quite well as an amateur wanna be shayar !

PS: I just read chapter 65...it was so mesmerizingly heavy on the heart ..but on a lighter note.. bechaare Maan ka accident karwadiye Geet se ILY nikaalne !! Itna sunne ke liye yeh sab hua patta nahi SR ke liye kitne paapad belne honge Maan Ji...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

aap ko kahi aur bhi tho hona tha 😛

raat ke 12 ho gaye hai..
writing karne ki koshish aaj ke liye done..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat



Hehee ...no Ji that's the only smiley I like so much to use ..I have no reason to blush !! Should have clarified ..Hum itney khush naseeb Nahi ke kisi ki nazar se humari nazar jhukh jaaye ..Abhi Ishq hua Nahi ke Mohabbat ka laal rang chad jaaye ..
.wah wah... I think I do quite well as an amateur wanna be shayar !

PS: I just read chapter 65...it was so mesmerizingly heavy on the heart ..but on a lighter note.. bechaare Maan ka accident karwadiye Geet se ILY nikaalne !! Itna sunne ke liye yeh sab hua patta nahi SR ke liye kitne paapad belne honge Maan Ji...

Jab mohobbat soft river ki tarah flow hoti hai toh there has to be a catalyst to cause a flood..😆
Waise bhi jo ladki itni chup hai wo kaise jaldi se izhaar karti.. so Avi ne karwa liya..
Laal and Ishq ek saath mat bolo, meri train track se nikal jaayegi...😆
Shayr accha tha...😆
Maan se papad belwane mein mujhe bohut mazaa aata hai😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

HEY ALL...


i have read some comments in this thread which have hurted my friend Avi here... not going to say anything to defend her or to create some clash b/w readers... but here i have something which is very beautiful happened to me...

in Dec my lappy got crashed & i couldn't comment or like on any of the FFs, so i read all those updates from my cell... never been logged out... but i didn't interact with any of the writers...

i am following more than 50 current ff in IF of different forums... not a single person came 2 check out where i have gone... but there was just this person who sended me a pm to ask me about my whereabouts... its not like i have been chit-chatting with her daily thats why she missed me...

i leave just a single comment on her updates, & that too sometimes very late...but she noticed that i was not there even after 2 months... she take care of her every single reader, their opinions, their views... she is my reason to not leave GEET FORUM...

so i was there... i didn't got the passwords of blog updates... but i also didn't demanded from her, even when i started commenting on my missed updates... she HERSELF gave me those passwords without me saying a single word...

if she can remb u out of so many readers, & she herself is giving u pswrds even when u were absent from months, if she answered ur each comment with every line... can't u be civil with her...

those blog updates are just a few... that too alternative ones... she took care u r not missing out from story... being a silent reader u have got no right to demand pswrds... those r special updates... u have got to earn it... no matter how late u hv started reading this ff...

even if u r commenting on THREAD 1... our writer replies u even then... i hv proof of her humbleness, her sweet & most caring nature i hv ever come across in IF...

dn't want anyone upsetting her in future😡😈...

PS: Sorry Avi, if u dn't like my saying anything here... pm me and i will remove my comment... dn't want any fight regarding this.. but i had to say something about baseless things said to a GHSP writer especially to the one who cares for me...

Thanks Krati. I have no ways to express my thanks to you for making me feel what I am feeling now.
It is true that I was hurt that people are looking at only
4 updates on the blog versus the 75 here on IF for this story.
For a writer who gives at least a 12 page update, I update about twice a week and that is not easy given the fact that I work six days a week and run my home.
It does hurt when people stay silent, not because I want praise but this is my first FF. I needed to know that I was doing it right; that I was able to connect to my readers.
I am in no way ashamed or regretful for what I have done. For all the negatives, this experience has given me so much that it is difficult to describe.
I have been lucky that so many silent readers posted their first comment on my story and continue their commenting.
The comments are important to me because they may be here but they increases the activity of Geet forum. If this forum stays active we will get more and more Maaneet stories, which are not only yours but my favorites to read. As we all are aware writers are moving out at a very rapid pace.
Having said all that and despite being a courageous person, I have lost the drive to write beyond this story. I want to do a nice finish here and hope that I can give everyone who has read me so far to leave happy. Then my job is done. I like being a reader and commenting nicely much more.
🤗 for caring. Please do edit the comment and replace it with a lovely pic of Maan and Geet. No sense in bashing heads with anyone; it will neither make me or you happy.
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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