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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

no words avi !

i am lucky that i got to read this ff.

hats off to u😛

keep writing. keep making me smile amidst all the office stress !😛😛😛

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dhanyabinu

@dhanyabinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

yaar beautiful update. i loved it . at last maan got the time to spend with geet. . you have written an os but i did n't get the intimation regarding this os . will you please sent the password . i want to read , please,,,,,,,,,,,,

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lily

@LILY111144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

aman se bhi jlos uff posssive maan,,,😳

geet ne kids ke bhane kya kya kia,,,😉,,, aur maan kare to ,,,,,😆

kya place choose ki maan ne ,,,geet ka ghar,,,👍🏼,,,😉

lov deir mmnts,,,,😳

👏

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

haey Avi me Maan Thud :) :)

muahhh Awesome lovely mindblowing update:)

but yar Aman :0 Seriously :0 hhahahahahaha

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Awww😆😆😆maan is sooo desperate to be withy geet😳😳😳..i think dadi should get them married off soon or else maan manju will kidnappe geet😆😆..geet is such an angel yaar..love the blind folded game played with the cildren and maan😳 she is becomming naughty like maan...such lovely a lovely maaneet moments..pls pls cont soon..

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ritzy09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

wow...Avi...just wow. You are on roll to give such amazing Maaneet updates right now.

Kahan se shuru karoon...

Maan's passion oozing out of his frustration...his restlessness to see his jaan and that walk on the stairs...

Someone has said love should not have ego and he finally just gave in to see her and meet her...

That moment when he saw her playing with those kids and that peace he felt...his oasis...it was a beautiful moment. And just like him, she finally let go off of every bandhan, feeling him...touching him...proclaiming to themselves that they were each others.

The pics you have used...it shows how still just one pic...one moment in a entire different setting also is enough to fuel such a beautiful imagination...why we all love Maaneet so much and why they have ruined me for any other serial...

Thier lunch together...those stolen moments...filled with love, anticipation and peace...takes one back to that period in relationship where things are known but yet to be unravelled comepletely. This phase when comittment is there but one is still not married...oh...it just is laced with romnatic opportunities. Suddenly even a morning trip on a scooty to a small chai wala...enroute to a vendor who stocks your favourite fruit or treat...buying inconsequential things...making a dish for the first time as your beau loves it...everything is so romantic...

I am in such a good mood now and for me it is beginning of my day...i am sure I am gonna get nothing done today in office 😆 but hell I am so inspired to bake a cake right now for my hubby😳...you just put me in the mood to be a nice wife rather than a tired one for atleast one day...😆

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Sorry for not commenting was quite held up in things...

But surely you will declare our deaths with these updates...

Maan ready to hunt down & kill the people in his way...

Nice idea to control population na 😆

bechari Geet kab tak bache gi...

haye itna pyaara lunch woh bhi har roz koi kaise mana kar saktha hai...

waiting for more & more...

update very soon...

Thanks for updating early even though ur were busy...

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Micky

@micky11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

geet playing with kids

Geet comparing Maan with teenager

Maan J with Aman

loved the update

thanks for pm

Edited by micky11 - 11 years ago

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fffanatic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Waah maan babu bade ideas aa rahe hai...geets emplty flat
Maan is more and more desperate to be with her
geet felt maans presence...dil ka rishta
geet compared him with aman and got fair share of punishment for that andalso close inspect so that she doesn't make mistake in comparing her maan with someone else
loved the update.
maaneet scenes are just perfect combination of being cute passionate and romantic
precap..oops will wait for more to comment
Continue soon
still cant believe we are close to the end of the fiction