THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 54

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

One of the most mesmerising updates of urs.Loved it to core.Geet's way of expressing her love left me speechless.She didn't speak but her action spoke louder.Maaneet's closeness seemed heavenly.In between her dilemma of telling Maan d truth nd expressing her,the balance was superb.

Loveliest part.Thanks for d password.


Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey
M xtremely sry, I still haven't read d full update, have started reading it though!

I have loaded d update in my mobile but m extremely bzy with college reopening, studies, , results n exams!

Will complete reading n comment soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111

Hey

M xtremely sry, I still haven't read d full update, have started reading it though!

I have loaded d update in my mobile but m extremely bzy with college reopening, studies, , results n exams!

Will complete reading n comment soon

Best of luck!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashdd

plsss pm me...😭

sent... no teary icons please..
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Posted: 11 years ago
TEASER

Even before I realize it I lose my mind as we launch a fight about the names of our children.

"Sargam or Sur, pick one. Giit the first child will be a girl and have their name with Daadima's and Darji's initial. Maine bol diya, bas. That means it's final". I assert my rights, full of MSK attitude. After all I am going to be the father.

Her face curls into distaste, her eyebrows rise as she gets up and dusts her dress off, "Chi, what bekaar names! Baba Adam ke zamaane ke naam hai. And by the way, who said they will be girls? I will have boys and the names will not be so old fashioned. Aap ne kya samjha hai, main aap ki jee huzoori karungi har baat pe? Never!". She has nicely pushed a hole in my MSK attitude balloon

"Oh yeah!" I stand toe to toe with her, staring her down, "Tumhe kuch nahi aata Giit. If I leave the choice to you, you will name the baby Salman or ShahRukh".

Her face curves in a happy smile and she joins her hands together "Haiyee! Aap ko kaise pata chala! Those were my choices. You are going to be the best husband. Haiyee!".

She kisses my cheek, "Chalein? Before Daadima comes back, we should be home, hai na? Pati to be jee!"

Is she mocking me? I wonder. I raise my eyebrows as she walks to the bike and I follow.

Salman Khurana? ShahRukh Khurana? Is she insane? Surely she is joking.

She is already sitting in the passenger seat and I take the chance to tease her, "Kya hua? Don't want to drive Giit? I am not from Baba Adam ka zamaana Giit; I like it when you drive. It is a wonderful experience for me". I wink and she smacks my shoulder "Besharam hai aap!"

I brush the back of my hands against her cheek with a smirk

Sharm aati hai unko, jo sharm se sharmate hai

Hum jo tehre besharam, sharm humse sharmati hai

A/N: Do let me know if I should continue. The likes have gone down so much😭 If you have silently read all the parts, please say something now. It may give me courage to start another story as this one ends this month.
VM[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wLOSF0mPLxE[/YOUTUBE]Video Credit to the uploader.Song from Hum aap ke hain koun.
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved it.though i prefer giit over geet.but i love this geet too.may be she is shy but she does not try to be someone else.i loved it more that they don't try to change others by their choice.loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
😆😆😆😆bachon ke naam par abhi se jhagda???

salman khurana ... shah rukh khurana😆😆😆

loved the teaser ... update ka intezaar karing ab

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser

waiting for update
pls ending ki baat naa karo avi
kuch kuch hota hain😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
please continue
love this teasing sides of theirs
babies huye nahin aur itni lambi planning maneet ki
got these two are cute or what
and pagal too
but for one another for sure
dude if she wont make holes in your MSK attitude who else would
she is your wife to be naa
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Posted: 11 years ago
good teaser
baby names par discussion pehlay shaadi ka socho maan geet
dono bhi jhalay hai
love reading locket avi😊
wah wah

Sharm aati hai unko, jo sharm se sharmate hai

Hum jo tehre besharam, sharm humse sharmati hai

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